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Posted: 8 years ago
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Your story is very sweet and beautifuly written. 
I don't know much about RagNa but I found you could bring soul in your characters.

Keep writing dear.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
awesome kalpi is really angry 
joota rag hmm know how t play his card t avoid kalpi angry
but y kalpi is so sad
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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                              RagNa FF : Mitwa

       Precap - RagNa's lovey - dovey moments ...
                            
                                    Part - 2
 
After feeding each other lunch Rags and his Shona
went in the mall for their shopping ...
 
They shop for each other according to their tastes , the clothes they would like to see each other in . After sometime , Raghav and Kalpana entered a traiditional cloth showroom , Raghav frowned  as to why they were their because Kalpana never wears traditional clothes often , she just wear it once in  a while so he asked her ...
Raghav : Shona what are we doing here ...
Kalpi made  a 'duh' expression said ...
Kalpana ( with a over sweet smile ) : Rags what people normally do in Clothing Shop , I thought we were here for that , do you want to do something else ...
Raghav : Oh really Shona I didn't knew that thanks for the information ;) on a serious note what are we doing here you don't wear much traditional clothes often ...
Kalpana from and said ' who told you that I am doing shopping for myself  ' ...
Raghav : So what are we doing here as far as I remember this is a ladies clothing shop and I can't wear al this you know ...
Raghav said it with an ear to ear smile to irritate his Shona and it did the trick and she snapped back saying ...
Kalpana : Rags you idiot I am trying to search a saree for Mom ...
Raghav ( confused ) : For Mom but why I don't think her birthday is coming up or is there any other special reason ...
Kapi's expression suddenly became serious and she said ...
Kalpana : We are leaving for India the day after tomorrow and I want to give Mom something because she is coming with us for now ...
Raghsv watched Kalpi's cuteness with a awed expression and finally hugged her tight and said : Awe I love you Shona and don't worry Mom will come soon , you know she would have come with us if not for the sake of the NGO ...
Seeing Kalpi's sad face Raghav understood everything and said  : Don't worry about anything Shona as long as I am with you , I wouldn't allow anybody to come near you , hurting you would be the last thing ...
And he hugged her tight ...
Yes he understand her fears , her insecurities about herself , about the people she love and the pains that she had suffered to be lived as an orphan after having a family of her own ...
After few moments he broke the hug  to lighten the atmosphere said making cute faces ;
Raghav : oh come'on Shona don't be a spoilt sport lets buy something for Mom ...
 
That's it
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I know the updates are short but I am in college and I have other FF'S also so cant give long updates , so bear with me ...
 
With Lots Of Love
7APKšŸ˜³
Edited by 7APK - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Please next time big update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
lovely
cont soon
thnx for pm
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my humble request.story complete.karna.i like your story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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aww too cutie update
kalpi n rag lovely dovely  talk
so cute they are
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I like your story because your story is a love story.please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice dear





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Posted: 8 years ago
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      Part-3

Raghav and Kalpana came back to their 'Home Sweet Home' and Raghav was about to call for Gauri but Kalpi put her finger on her lips and signal him to be keep quite and she tip-toed to the kitchen with thief steps and put her both hands on Gauri's eyes who was working in the kitchen and said :

Kalpana : Guess who ?

Gauri smiled at her soon to be daughter-in-law's antics and said ;

Gauri (naughtily) : Maya ...

Gauri chuckled internally imagining Kalpi's cute frown and pout and she was not at all disappointed because next second Kalpi took her hands back and make  a baby angry face , Gauri turned an pretend to be surprised on seeing Kalpi and said ...

Gauri : Oh Kalpi bachha you , I thought it was Maya ...
this add more fuel in Kalpi's already raising temper and she said angrily ...

Kalpana : I know you don't love me anymore naa ...

Gauri (lovingly) : Oh My Bachha , I Love You so much...
hearing ths a cute smile spread on Kalpi's lips and she asked cutely ...

Kalpana : Really Mom ...

Gauri : Haan mera Bachha , I Love you the most ...

Kalpi gave a teasing smile to Raghav who was standing at the door of kitchen looking at the duo with a light smile on his lips ...
he suddenly frowned seeing his smile , enter the kitchen and stand in front of them and said :

Raghav (cribbing) : Nobody loves me ...

First Kalpi show him her tongue and hurriedly kissed his right cheek and said : I Love You Rags...

Raghav gave her one of his rare smile and said 'I Love You too Shona'
and peck her left cheek ...

Suddenly she remember something and snatch shopping bags from Raghav and took out a beautiful saree and said :

Kalpana : Mom how's this Saree ?

Gauri :Its Beautiful just like you ...

and kissed her forehead lovingly and said :

Gauri : Now go and freshen up i am making your favourite 'Vada Pav'
hearing this she jumped in excitement and ran from there...

Gauri watch Kalpi leaving  a soft smie , after she disappeared her face turned serious and she asked Raghav seriously ...

Gauri : Chintu are you sure you want to Kalpi to India , I don't want to lose her ...

Raghav : Don't worry Mom , i am with Shona and nobody can harm her till i am with her ...
and you are coming after few days right , so don't worry about it ...

Gauri (sighed) : I hope you are right beta ...

Precap : India

That's it
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With Lots Of Love
7APKšŸ˜³

P.S : Sorry can't waste from a long time I was busy with my Mid Term Exams


Edited by 7APK - 8 years ago