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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
wow so maya is caught but still manvi isnt able to forgive virat am sute this will take time
manvi angry towards viren u have written it very well
precap so finally divorce news reache to hrishikesh family
am sure virat will not let go of mani easily do continue soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
AWESOME UPDAYE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS FANTASTIC AND SUPERB UPDATE.
SO FINALLY MAYA IS IN JAIL.
LOVES MANVI ATTITUDE FOR GIVING RESPECT TO WOMAN.
BUT CHEAP MAYA DONT DESERVED IT.
LOVED HOW MANVI SLAPPED HER.
LOVES VIRAT SAYING TO FORGIVE MANVI.
BUT REALLY MANVI SUFFERED A LOT. THATS Y SHE IS NOT FORGIVING HIM. HER REASON WAS ALSO GENUINE.
LOVES HOW THEY SPEND NIGHT TOGETHER IN CAR.
MANVI AND VIRAT PAIN FOR KIDS WAS SO REAL.
LOVES THEIR TRUCK PART AND MANVI OUTBURST ON VIREN.
PLZ DONT SEPERATE OUR VIRMANS BY DIVORCE.
DO SOME MIRACLE DEAR AND ONCE AGAIN MADE THEM TOGETHER.
PRECAP IS AWESOME.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
hiii updat was awsum bt stil our virman nt unite saddy saddy yaar.
hope they ll unite soon n i thnk virat deserves it bt being a crazt virmaninan n nishalian i cant accept it haina... and importantly he was not in his sens at tat time na so he ll get her forgivnes plzzz.
heyyy manvi slapd tat bitch more more slaps she hav to gain for her efforts to separtat virman...
is tat viren bcum mad or sumthng how dare he accuse manvi lyk tat man they r married n in hell bound lov wid each other they ll die wid out each other y dont they understnd ths fact.
n precap s nice.
plzzz no divorce bivorce plzzz reunite them asap.
tanq fr d pm
updat d nxt pt soon plzz
tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
finally i read d nxt part
and its v.emotional
no divorce and all unite virman plzzz no mre sadness plzzz
yahoo manvi slapd dat gal👏👏👏
excited 4 next part
do continue soon
Edited by aparnalokam - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Please patchup virman
No more sadness please
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
This update has 18+ content so please read at your own risk. I tried to make it forum safe so please do not report me I used ***
Thank you I write like this just for my readers. If anyone does not like it I will stop.


After a while V.a walked in to manvi's room. Manvi was lying down on the bed crying and the babies were in their cribs.
va patted manvi's head and manvi turned around and saw her. She sat up and offered for her to sit down. V.a sat next to manvi and wiped her tears.
"Beta dadaji pooch raha ha ka bacho ki custody kis ka pass hogi. Divorce file kerte huwa hume tumhari sare points dene perenge court ko" v.a says.
Manvi wiped her tears.
"Maa mein chati ho bacho ki 100% custody mera pass ho. " she said and hugged v.a Antie
"Beta rhisikesh mein kissi ko kuch nahi pata ha. Kub bataon gi?' V.a asks her. Manvi was in a dilemma how was she going to tell them.

" Maa divorce sa pehle mein rhiskish Jana chati hoon. Khud sub ko bataongi. Mein aj raat ki train sa ja sakti ho?" Manvi asks her.
"Haan jao beta. Lekin 3 din mein ajana. Divorce usi din file hoga" v.a says and manvi nods.
"Hum bhi chalenge" virika say from the door and walk in.
Manvi avoided viren and turned her head away Viren sat on the floor next to manvi
And rested his head on her lap.
"Manvi tum janti ho na tum mera liya meri choti behn, meri beti jesi ho" he says.
Manvi tried not to talk to him and continued looking away.
"I'm sorry ka mein hakeekat bhool jata ho. Tum meri saali ho. Tumhari upni personal life ha. Tum beri ho. Tumhe mujhe kuch batana ki zerorat nahi ha. Lekin virat na Jo kiya us ka baad mein itna possessive hogaya ho tumhare liya. I'm sorry forgive me. Sharam ati ha mujhe ka mera Bhai na esa kiya. Us na tumhara dil tora." he says and hugs her .
Manvi hugs him back and starts crying.
Jeevika taps in their shoulder and joins the huh. Then v.a joins too.
"Bus bus ub no rona. Chal manvi hum teeno hirishkesh ja raha ha bacho ka sath" jeevika says and breaks the hug. She starts pulling out manvi's clothes from.the cupboard.
Manvi wanted to tell virat that they all are leaving but she knew he would try stopping her so she decided that she will not tell him.

In hristikesh:
Manvi had both the babies in her hand and jeevika and viren were standing next to her with anjali.
Manvi gulped in fear as she rang the door bell to the choudry household. She knew that she is going to break everyone's hearts today.
Chachi opened the door and yelled in excitement seeing everyone and started jumping in happiness.
"Manvi???!! Jeevikaaa??? Bache" she yells and grabs variman and starts kissing him.

Manvi and jeevika smile and hug Chachi.
"Kon ha pinky?" BG asks as she walks out of the kitchen and smiles as soon as she sees Everyone.
"Era yeh kesa surprise ha?" BG says and hugs viren and jeevika. She then hugs manvi.
"Manvi virat kaha ha? Gaari park keraha ha?" She asks and looks towards the door.
Manvi holds bg's chin and makes her look at her instead of the door.
"BG ... Woh...virat nahi aya" manvi says in a low tone. BG looks at her confusingly. Viren being a busy lawyer came but virat who can chill at home whenever he wants didn't come. Bg knew something was wrong.
Before she had a chance to ask chachu and beri BG came into the hallway. Beri BG was on her wheelchair. Manvi ran towards beri b and rested her head on her lap and started crying.
"Manvi beta kya huwa?" Beri b asks manvi as she pats her head. Manvi lifts her head up and looks beri b in the eyes. She takes off her kangan and places them in beri b's palms. Everyone was confused on why manvi did that. All her childhood manvi annoyed her for the kangaans and beri B finally gave her the sona ka kangaan on virmans wedding.
"Beri b app na mujhe yeh kangaan meri shaddi pa diya tha na. Shaddi ka gift? "
Beri BG nods
"Jub yeh shaddi Hi nahi rahi toh yeh kangaan ka haq bhi mein kho chuki ho" she says fast and Bursts into tears in beri b's lap. The entire choudry household was in shock.
BG runs towards manvi and makes her stand from beri b's lap.
"Yeh kya bol rahi ho tum manvi? Pagal toh nahi hogae? Kesa ghatiya mazzaq ha?" She yells at manvi in anger.
Manvi continues crying and hugs BG.
"I'm sorry. But yeh sach ha. Me and virat seperated. Or kuch dino mein divorce" she says and breaks down crying. Chachu
Grabs manvi and makes her sit on the sofa.
"Sub shaant hojao. Manvi aram sa batao huwa kya. Tum or virat toh logo ka liya example tha perfect pyar ka. Esa kya hogaya ka divorce tak baat ponch gae?" Manan Chachu asks manvi as he wipes her tears.
"Chachu woh pyaar jhoota nikla. Mera virat dhokebaaz nikla. Woh..." Manvi says and starts stammering as she didn't know how to tell them. She knew this would ruin virats imagine infront of the choudrys.
"Woh kya manvi?" Pinky Chachi asks.
"Woh Maya ka sath soo ka aya." Manvi blurts it out and hides her face with her hands and continues crying.
Viren and jeevika were watching manvi break down and couldn't take it. Viren felt so ashamed that his brother did this.
"Nahi mera virat esa nahi kersakta. Woh Bht acha bacha ha. Acha dammad ha, acha pati ha or acha baap ha" beri BG says in shock.
"Beri b mena khud video dekhi ha. Dono ka jismo ko ek dosre ka sath lipta dekha ha. Virat ka kehna ha Maya na usko sharab diya but gunnah toh gunnah hota ha. Mein usko kabhi maaf nahi kersakti. Divorce mujhe chaya. Virat toh maafi mang raha ha. Second chance maang raha ha" manvi says.
BG holds manvis hand and sits next to her.
"Beta usko maaf kerdo. 2 bacho ko tum akele kesa bera keroge? Or tum khud akele virat ka bagir kesa rahoge. Hum sub jante ha tum us sa kitna pyaar kerti ho" BG says.
Manvi stands up and takes mannat from jeevika aho"Nahi BG, its the 21st century. I will not tolerate an unfaithful relationship. Mein in bacho ko khud bera kerongi. Ager future mein mujhe vadhera mansion chonra pera toh bhi koi problem nahi. I have my own degree koi na koi dhang ki Job dhoond loongi. Upna or upne bacho ka liya naya ghar bana loongi." Manvi says and kisses mannat.
Viren taps manvi's shoulders.
"Esa kyew bol rahi ho. Tumhara ristha virat ka sath khatam horaha ha hum sub ka sath nahi. Tum kyew choro gi vadhera mansion. Tumne thori kuch kiya ha. And Maa ko unke pota poti sa alag nahi kerogi tum. In bacho ka vadhera mansion mein rehne ka pura haq ha." Viren says and takes mannat from manvi's hands and starts playing with her.
Manvi smiles.
"Theek ha jiju lekin mein esa Hi keh rahi thi. Just in case. I'm not weak if I need to I can do everything on my own" she says.
"Humari sherni" chachu says and hugs manvi.
"Bus dukh itna ha ka upno ka sath chut gaya" manvi says and starts crying again.
"Bus mera bacha. Roh mat. Jao upne room mein aram kerlo." Chachi says and sends manvi to her room.
Manvi walks into her old room with the twins for the first time.
She instantly remembers her childhood in this room. When jeevika used to be her roommate. Then jeevika wedding days and then the moments she had with virat when they were friends. She remembers the time virat came to hristikesh just to make manvi say the three magical words she was too scared to say. She Places the babies on the bed and looks out of the window, towards the garden and sees herself running towards virat during the storm at night and hugging him, telling him how much she loves him for the very first time.
A tear roles down her cheeks as she remembers that special day.
She turns around and looks torward the bed.
Flashback:
Manvi was standing near the door of her hristikesh room.
She hears a knock and opens the door slightly. She sees her husband and opens the door and grabs him inside.
"Kya huwa? Dii or jiju ko ek room mein bhej diya?" She ask him.
"Haan I told Bhabhi ka manvi is waiting for you in that room and I told Bhai I'm coming back" virat says and giggles.
"Good" manvi says and locks their room so that even if jeevika came searching for her here she won't come in knowing virat and manvi are in here together.
"Bhai Bhabhi ka patch up kerwana kitna mushkil ha" virat says.
"Patch up choro. Jhagra unka hume kyew alag keraha ha?" She says in annoyance.
Virat smiles and hugs manvi.
"Ek raat ki doori bhi nahi sahi jati?" Virat says with a wink.
"Or ager yehi sawal mein tum sa poocho?" Manvi says with a giggle.
Virat twist her ankle.
"Sawal pehle mena pocha" virat says and kisses the back of her neck lightly.
Manvi turns around and hugs virat's muscular body.
"I love you" she says.
"I love you more " he says.
"Manvi?"
"Yes?"
"We have never done it in this room. Akhir yeh tumhara purana room ha. Yahan humare pyaar ka nishaan nahi chorna?" Virat says mischievously and manvi instantly blushes and hits virats chest with a light punch.
"Jawab do" he says with a smile knowing she is dying in shyness.
Manvi moves away from him and dims the lights.
She opens her night robe and throws it on the floor.
She was left in her lingerie.
Virat smirked smartly seeing her fancy black baby doll lingerie.
"So you already pre planned " virat says and walks towards her.
Manvi smiled and walked away from him.
"I pre planned lekin kuch hoga tub jub tum mujhe paker paoge" she says and runs away from him.
He tries to catch her but she jumped on the bed. Virat climbed the bed and grabbed her arm before she could jump off. He pulled her towards himself and they both fell on the bed.
Manvi's hair was all over her face. Virat removed it from her face and gently caressed her face. They both smiled and leaned in for a kiss. Manvi could feel his tongue in her mouth and virat could feel her sweetness. In-between the kiss virats hand slid inside manvi's baby doll top and touched her perfectly curved waist. Manvi broke the kiss and pulled virats shirt off. She kissed his neck and moved her body rhythmically with his.
Virat quickly removed her top as well and exposed manvi's upper body completely. Manvi closed her eyes and blushed.
Virat grabbed her *oobs and teased them.
Manvi was only left in her thong. Her glowing radiant skin was soft as silk. Virat dragged his finger from her neck, down her cleavage and towards her waist. He stopped as soon as he reached her thong. He hooked the tiny cloth on his finger and pulled it down. Exposing her.
Manvi started breathing heavily as virats finger slid even more down. Virat bent down and stuck his head in-between her legs. He gripped the thong with his teeth and yanked it off of her. She was completely bare. Virat gazed at the view he got .
He quickly took off his own pants and was left in his boxers.
"Virat can you ... Now please now!" Manvi yelled in desire and opened her legs wide.
Virat smirked.
She was waiting for him.
Virat leaned in closer in-between her legs and started kissing her down there. Manvi closed her eyes and started moaning.
"That feels so good aah virat "
Manvi said and griped the sheets.
Virat smiled as he licked her down there. She moaned loudly. She was going to *um.
"Virat I'm.*uming ahh" she whispers.
Virat purposely teased her more . She could feel the warmth of his mouth down there.
Before he knew it his mouth was filled with her sweetness. And manvi moaned as her *rg*nism reached its peak. Virat
Lifted his head and came close to manvi and kissed her lips. Manvi kissed his lips and could taste the saltiness.
"Mmm" she moaned
Virat broke the kiss and started sucking her n*pples with utmost desire.
"Manvi?" He says.
"Yes jaan?" She asks with a smile.
"My turn?" He asks.
"Hmm why not?" Manvi says in excitement and pulls his boxers off and gets a view of his sexy ma*hood.
Manvi immediately starts s**king him.
...
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..
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"Manvi?" A voice calls from the door and manvi comes out of her flashback.
She sees BG with a few blankets in her hands.
"Yes BG ?" She asks with a paralyzed face trying to get the image of their blo*job out of her head.
"Kya huwa? Parishan kyew ho?" She asks.
"Kuch nahi bus woh bacho ko sula rahi thi" manvi says and puts a baby blanket on the twins.
BG smiles and hands manvi a blanket.
"Yeh lo or sojao" she says and pats manvi's head and leaves. Manvi sighs in relief.
"I need to stop thinking about *ex with virat" manvi says and hits her head to shake the thought out of her mind. Just then her phone started ringing and she checked caller I'd. It was virat.
Manvi picked up.
"Hello?" She said.
"Manvi how dare you go to hristikesh with my children without telling me! And yeh kya bakwwass ha ? You want 100% custody? Manvi these are my kids too you can't do this! And I won't let you!" Virat screams on the phone
Manvi takes a deep breath.
"Virat yeh mera bache ha! And you are the one who cheated on me. I can't let my children grow up under your influence. On top you doubted if they even are your kids! Isko upni galtiyo ki saza samjho ya kuch or but I made my decision!" She yells back.
"Manvi what is wrong with you? I made these kids. They are my blood. My name will be attached to them forever. Divorce humara horaha ha.in bacho ka mujhsa wohi ristha rahega. Kya kerongi tum? Duniya ka system badlo gi? Mannat and variman choudry naam rakho gi? Pagal hogae ho tum. Mera in bacho pa pura haq ha or us haq ka bagir mein tumhe divorce nahi doonga . Jaana ha toh court jao." Virat yells in anger.
Manvi was shocked. She remembers how much love virman had for each other and now they are going to court to fight with each other.
"Virat jub court ko pata chalega that you slept out side of your marriage woh khud mera haq mein fasla lenge!" Manvi says in a stern voice.
Virat took a deep breath
" I was intoxicated! Maafi mang mang ka thak gaya ho. Mein yeh nahi kerna chata tha. Galti hogae. Hum dono jante ha hum.ek dosre sa kitna pyaar kerte ha. Kya tumhe meri yaad nahi arahi abhi? Sach sach jawab do. Hristikesh mein last time Jo huwa tha uski yaad nahi arahi?" Virat asks and manvi opened her eyes in shock. Virat knows her too well.
"Nahi arahi! Kya huwa tha last time? Mujhe toh nahi yaad. And virat a mistake can be forgiven not a sin. You broke my trust. Trust is like a piece of paper once it's crumbled its never the same again!" She says.
"I don't know how to win back your trust. I made a mistake and I am truly sorry for it.All I know is that I won't let you take away my kids from me. See you in court to be miss choudry." He says and cuts the call.
Manvi immediately broke down crying after hearing virat say 'too be miss choudry' . manvi was going to have her materal name again. She remembered how when she was newly married and anyone called her Mrs vadhera her heart would skip a beat.

Precap: court drama
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Amazing update...
It was a great chapter...
I dont want them to divorce...
The flashback was hot...
Aaawww Virat knows Manvi to well that he knows what she was thinking...
Pleaseee dont do the divorce...
Pleaseee update soon...
Cant wait for the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
awesome update...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
hiii uodate was nice.
donno when thes two lovers undo der mistakes by ending der fyt n divorce drama as well.
fb scenc were aham ahem hahaha.
hope virman ll patch up soon.
i stil cant beliv tat virat done tat mistake wid maya. n virat deserve this pain if he comited tat mistake.
but being a virmanian i cant bear der separation plzzz make them unite again.
updat asap tc.
tanq fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
SUPERB UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY AWESOME AND NYC ONE.
VIREN PART WAS AWESOME WITH MANVI.
IT WAS SO HEART TOUCHING.
SO MANVI CAME BACK AT RISHIKHESH BEFORE DIVORCE.
AND EVERYONE COME TO KNOW ABOUT VIRMAN SEPERATION.
FLASHBACK PART WAS SO HOT.
NOW VIRAT YELLED AT MANVI BECOZ SHE IS GOING TO TAKE KIDS CUSTODY.
ACTUALLY VIRAT DESERVED THIS AFTER WHAT HE DID.
BUT STILL I HAVE NO BELIEF THAT VIRAT CHEATED MANVI.
NOW COURT PART. A LOT OF HANGANA WILL COME.
PLZ DONT SEPARATE OUR VIRMANS AND MADE THEM ONE AGAIN AS I WANT TO SEE MORE VIRMAN MAGICAL MOMENTS.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.
😛 😊

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