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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
SUPERB AND FANTASTIC UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY AWESOME AND TOO GUD UPDATE.
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS PART SO MUCH.
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BY U.
LOVED VIRMAN MOMENTS SO MUCH FROM STARTING TILL END.
ANGALI IS REALLY CUTE AND LOVES VIRAT A LOT THAT SHE FELL ILL IN HIS ABSENCE.
SO MANVI GETS READY TO MEET VIRAT. TODAY'S AGE KIDS R SO CLEVER . ANJALI FOLLOWED MANVI AND SIT IN CAR WITHOUT HER KNOWLEDGE.
LOVES ANJALI AND VIRAT CUTE PART.
AWESOME VIRMAN LITTLE ROMANCE WAS.
MANVI AGAIN FALL IN VIRAT CHARM AND KISSED HER AND LOSING HER SENSES.
REALLY SHE LOVED HIMAND PRETENDING TO HATE HIM.
SO MANVI GETS READY TO COME AT KARAN SHOW WITH VIRAT.
MANVI OUTBIRST WAS AWESOME ON VIREN. SHE REALLY KNOWS VIRAT VERY WELL.
LOVES JEEVIKA GAVE ONE CHANCE TO VIRAT.
VIRAT JOKING PART WAS AWESOME.
LOVED THEIR MOMENTS AT CAR AND MUSIC WAS TOO GUD. JARA JARA TOUCH ME . HA HA.
LOVES THEIR CONVO SO MUCH LIKE BEFORE THEY WERE ENJOYING.
WOW BOTH HAVE TO SHARE ONE DRESSING ROOM
MAMVI ANSWERED VIRAT THAT STILL SHE LOVES HIM WAS AWESOME.
NOW I AM VERY EXCITED FOR KARAN SHOW AND VIRMANS ANSWERS.
SO UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😛 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Maya to get burn... nice 😡 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
awsm wrk dear..
something good n relief...
hate maya n egrly waiting for her bad days...
lovevirman part was as always..
bathroom part was tooo hot...
anjali n Virat 's part was sooo sweet
keep rockimg dear
thx alot for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
hiii wowww superbbb update loved it to d core.
virman awakrd monents were awww.
waitng fr cfe wid karan epi lov u virman.
n manvis words means alot fr him i thnk cz she said still she lov him yeyyy.
hope they ll sort out der issues asap n maya ll be punised.
waitng fr d next pt updat soon plz
tanq fr d pm n lov u n tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
i am angry with virat... for using her...

for his benefit...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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manivi.. is crazy..

anjali miss him
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Posted: 9 years ago
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jst read ur story dear
its awesome
hawww poor virman
i hope dey patchup soon
and poor manvi feel bad 4 her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 14:
"Why did you kiss me? Batao!" He yells.
"Because I still love you god dammit!"she yells and pushes him away

Virat stood there staring at manvi as she grasped for her breath. Pushing virat off her sure was a struggle.
" phir tum yeh shaddi kyew tor rahi ho? Tum or mein dono jante ha ka hum ek dosre ka bagir jee nahi sakte! Kyew nahi maaf ker sakti tum mujhe? " he asks her in a low tone.
Manvi gets furious and walks closer to him.
"Tomorrow I will go sleep with another man. Jis din tum mujhe maaf kerdoge usi din mein tumhe maaf kerdongi" she says while looking straight at him and then turns and walks towards the clothes rack. Virat just stood there not knowing how to reply to her. He does realize that it's something hard to forgive and maybe he would have been ten times more angry then manvi if he were in her place but he didn't mean to do this.

"Turn around virat and look that way." Manvi says from across the room as she holds a pretty hot pink lehnga in her hand.
Virat gently nods and turns around and faces the other direction.
Manvi and virat both start changing their clothes while facing opposite directions. Thei backs facing each other.
They both had the urge to peek.
Virat turned around just a little. Enough to see manvi. He saw her in the lehnga but she had not yet worn her blouse. He saw her bare back. Her fine curved waist urged him to hold her curves. He wanted to turn her around and get a view of her chest. She finally wore her blouse and clasped it on.
Virat then turned back and continued changing himself.
Manvi then turned around slightly and saw virats back. His muscular body was so perfect. She didn't want virat to find her staring at him so she turned back.

"You done?" Virat asked after a while.
"Ya, you?" Manvi asked.
"Yes"
They both said and turned around and looked at each other awkwardly.
"You look nice" he said not knowing what else to say. Manvi gave him a fake smile and picked up her dupatta that was on the hanger and wrapped it around herself
"Let's go" she says.
Virat nods a yes and quickly wears his tie and they head out.
"Okay so walk from that entrance when karan calls you okay!" The shows manager says and makes virman stand on their positions
On the set:
Karan Johar sits on his couch and quickly looks at himself from a mirror a spot boy was holding.
"Okay ready?" The camera man yells.
Karan sends the spot boy away and sits straight.
"Yes" he says.
"3 2 1 and we are live !" The camera man says.
Karan looks at the camera with a smile.
"They say everyone has some kind of hidden talent that needs to be found but our guest for tonight has always known about his talent. Unfortunately it took a while for the world to find him. But once we found him he left everyone speechless. Let's welcome our singer of the year, who is also an amazing Husband and a brand new father...
Virat Vadhera" Karan says and virat walks towards the set and shakes karans hand and sits down on the couch.
"Thanks for having me Karan!" Virat says.
"Thank you for coming, so virat the question the entire country wants to ask you. How is it being a father?" Karan asks.
"Well its still kind of sinking in haha. But I swear it feels amazing . these two little babies have changed my life, the way I think the way I do things. Completely! It's all about them now!" Virat says with a smile.
"I can imagine. So you went from a struggling musician to a international pop star within a year. How does that feel?" Karan asks.
"It's definitely overwhelming. I have struggled for so long that I started to give up, lost my self confidence. But I always had manvi there supporting me. If it wasn't for her I would have quite after the first rejection I got." He says.
Karan looks towards the camera.
"On that note, Our next guest is no less than the first lady. The love of virats life and the backbone to his career, Manvi Vadhera" he says.
And manvi walks in and hugs karan then hugs virat and then sits down next to virat. She pretends to smile infront of the camera.
"Manvi I have to say you look lovely" karan says and manvi smiles and says thank you.
"You sure are a lucky man!" Karan says to virat and he fakes a smile. Virat felt guilty that he took manvi for granted.
"So married for 5years, two adorable twins and a loving joint family. It must be amazing right?" Karan asks.
"Definitely Marrying virat was my dream and having these babies was a votive we had for a while. And our family is the best. My Sister , is his Bhabhi and it is amazing having her with me for the rest of my life. Jiju is so amazing that he is like a big brother for me always protecting me. And Maa I don't know what I would do without her. I don't even consider her my mother in law more like a mother." Manvi says with a smile.
"Ya sometimes it gets over whelming having everyone there but I don't know how I could live without my family. Bhai loves me so much he is like a fatherly figure in my life and Bhabhi is the sister I never had." Virat says and gets a little emotional because his entire family hates him now. Manvi could sense him getting emotional and she holds his hand.
Virat looks up at her and controls himself.
"A perfect family dianamic " karan says.
Virman nod.
"So the world wants to see the twins! For the first time we will show them to everyone" Karan says and a picture of the twins pops up on the screen.
"What are there names?" Karan asks.
"Mannat and variman" virman say together.
"Aww aren't they adorable. I can see the resemblances." Karan says.
Manvi saw an opportunity to indirectly taunt virat.
"Doesn't variman look just like virat? As if they are clones?" Manvi jokes while giving virat a dirty look.
"Yes certainly! And even mannat's nose is just like virats!" Karan says looking at the picture. Manvi looks at virat again and gives him a dirty look. Virat knew she was trying to prove him wrong for the time he accidentally questioned if the twins were his kids or not. Virat had to reply back to manvi.
"Akhir bache kiske ha. Adorable because of me!" He says and laughs. Manvi ignores him.
"So the world wants to know your love story" karan says without hesitation.
Virman first react a little akwardly but then get excited recalling their past.
"Well the first day we met was..." Virat says
"...When jijus family came to meet my Dii and ..." manvi continues his sentence.
"...And I pretended to be viren..." Virat says
"And I pretended to be jeevika..." Manvi says
"Wow why?" Karan asks.
"Just for fun" they both say together.
Karan is surprised
"Or is dedfutiya na mujhe itna pakaya... virat jokes
Manvi gives him a light push.
" yeh chep bhi koi kum nahi tha...
Lerke wala kya tha Tashan maarta tha. Ek din mein hosh thikana lagadiya..." Manvi says.
"Turkish chai pila ka! " virat yells and laughs.
"Turkish chai?" Karan asks in confusion.
"Just to get back at me she added mirchi masala in my chai..." Virat says.
"And this idiot made my brother drink it...
It was so funny" manvi laughs.
"After that this idiot was after me to start singing again, I had quite singing for personal reasons." Virat says.
"And he crashed my sisters mehndi! And started singing and then blamed it on me! How is that my fault? " manvi says and laughs rembering everything.

" haan or iska or bua ka cold war tha. Bua hated her! Jub Dekho pak pak kerti thi! " virat laughs.
"Omg virat remember the time I missed my train and we were all alone on Punjab highways! And phir we had to get a hotel room!" Manvi says and laughs
"Shaddi sa pehle?" Karan asks in shock.
"No no nothing happened. We didn't even like each other back then." Virat says.
"And akal bina ki we got stuck because of you! Pagal bagir purse ka bus pa bethe gae thi! Pata ha mein kitna perishan tha?" Virat yells at her. Manvi hits his hand.
"Akaal beri ka bhans? Abhi kyew chila raha ho chep!" Manvi yells.
"Oh and rEmeber that time jub dada ji sa chupke we went to that stupid dhaba and won the dance competition."
"Haan and then tumne in stupid gundo sa panga liya or phir jiju na humari class li!" Manvi laughs.
"Are you always like this? Seems less like a love story and more like an episode of Tom and Jerry." Karan says.
Virman just laugh.
"Our love is based on our nhok jhok" manvi says and holds virats hand as if she totally forgot they are currently in-between a fight.
"Yes pura ghar parishan ha humari nhok jhok sa" virat says and laughs .
"And my Dii always says yeh nhok jhok asli fights mein badal jaega" manvi says and laughs but then she realizes that this has actually happened. She looks at virat and leaves his hand remembering everything.
"Now lets hope that never happens. On that note lets take a break. See you in a short period to learn more about this fascinating couple" karan says and the camera turns off. He gets up and walks away.
"Bathroom break. Be right back" he says and leaves.
Virman were left alone on the set. Manvi started crying.
Virat was confused and held her shoulder. "Kya huwa?" He asks.
"Virat can't you see! Dii ka prediction sach hogaya!" She says and cries.
"Manvi nothing has to change we can go back to the way things were!" Virat says and holds her hand. Manvi s her
"Nothing can be the same. Yeh sub show. Yeh purani yadien, yeh jhoota pyaar. Sub jhoot ha. Koi Matlab nahi ha. Virat our relationship is over. Abhi hum tumhare fans ko jhoot bol raha ha. Sub ko kya lageha jub akhbar mein divorce ki khaber ae gi? We are lying to the world! " she says and cries.
Virat didn't know what to say.
Karan was walking back and virat saw him.
"Dry your tears now!" Virat yells at her and she quickly wipes her tears and pretends as if everything is okay.
Karan sits on his sofa.
"All okay?" He asks manvi noticing she looked upset.
She nodded a yes.
"On air in 3 2 1" the camera man said.
"The couple who love fights and creates beautiful twins is right here with me across the couch" Karan says and faces virman
"So like we learned before the break you are the nokh jhok couple who started as friends. So when did you realize you loved each other?
" I realized first. She set me up with my ex gf and made me realize that I actually had feelings for manvi. I felt as if my heart belonged to manvi. I was engaged to someone else but I would think about manvi all day. I would call manvi again and again. Text her /247. When I broke off my engagement I was more mad at manvi for setting me up with that girl than I was mad at the girl herself. That's when my Bhai made me realize I had feelings for my Bhabhi ki stupid behna." Virat says with a smile.
"So you told her right away?" Karan asks.
"I was going to but every time something would go wrong. Then we found out about manvi's cancer and I wanted to wait for the right time." Virat says.
"You had cancer?" Karan asks in shock. Manvi nods
" When we went to Mumbai for my treatment I felt closer to virat because he was always taking care of me. I finally fell for him as well. I still remember that day. I snuck into his room and felt his presence everywhere and couldn't stop singing and dancing and jumping in joy. He was my first love after all! " manvi says with a smile.
"Then during her worst stages of cancer I accidentally said I loved her in front of everyone. Everyone was so against it." He says with a sad face.
"Because of the cancer?" Karan asks.
Manvi nods and starts crying.
Virat wipes her tears.
"Her cancer finally got cured and everyone was okay with our shaddi. And that's it!" Virat says.
"Aww bless you." Karan says and hugs manvi.
Manvi wipes her tears.
"I'm.sorry" she says.

"No no its fine. You are a survivor and your bravery is an inspiration for millions." Karan says.
Virat nods and holds her arm.
"So how was it from being friends to being in love to being a married couple? Any awkwardness?" Karan asks and laughs.
"Not really. She was always bindaas." Virat says.
"It was awkward when we fell in love but once we accepted our love all the awkward pre marriage stuff didn't even happen. We were just so close emotionality by then" manvi says.
"Well aren't you guys the perfect couple of the year" karan says with a smile. Vi
n giggle.
"So which one of you is the perfect date planner?" Karan asks.
Manvi and virat both point at virat.
"Definitely him. This guy has surprised me so many times. Even if I tried to surprise him it can never be good enough. " manvi says with a smile.
"But manvi you have given me the best surprise ever when you told me you were pregnant on my birthday! remember all the work you put into my birthday last year! " virat says with a smile.
"What did you plan?" Asks.
"Well I found out I was pregnant literally a day before his birthday. Which was perfect. I planned this romantic dinner at a sky view resteraunt, got him a bunch of personally created gifts. And then during dinner I told him the big news." Manvi says with a smile.
"And she booked a private jacuzzi and a hotel room. The room was decorated so beautifully. " virat said with a smile.
"I just told the hotel staff I needed a honeymoon suite haha" manvi says and laughs.
"I'll try to not ask the details of that night" karan says and laughs.
Virman laugh with him
"Okay so rapid fire time!" Karan says and pulls out his iPad.
Who wants to go first.
Virat raises his hands.
"Okay manvi as a wife or manvi as a mother?" Karan asks

"Wife" virat says
"Mannat or variman?" Karan asks
"My little princess Mannat" virat says.
"You woke up one day as manvi what would you do?"
Virat has a mischievous face and manvi knew what he was going to say.
"Don't virat!" She warns him.
"Strip duh." Virat says and laughs.
Manvi hits his arm and karan laughs.
"One thing you can't stand about manvi?" Karan asks.
"That she is always dressed" virat jokes and karan and manvi were shocked. Manvi starts hitting him with the couch pillow.
"I think he really wants to win" karan laughs.
" If you could change one thing about your life what would you change? " karan asks. ViRat had a serious expression now.
"I would undo the mistakes I made that hurt my family, especially manvi" he says and manvi starts tearing up but she controls.
"Okay Who is hotter sunny Leone or Rakhi sawant" karan asks.
"Manvi vadhera" virat replies and manvi instantly starts blushing.
"Aww okay last question love without s*x or s*x without love if you could choose only one what would you choose? " karan asks.
"Love without s*x because I can't imagine my life without loving manvi" virat says.
"Okie now manvi your turn"
Manvi pays attention to karan.
"Virat as a father or virat as a husband?" He asks
" as a father " she says.
"One phrase that describes your life" karan asks
"Pyaar dosti ha and ek lerka lerki kabhi dost nahi hosakta cuz pyaar beech mein aa Hi jata ha" manvi says and laughs.
" Shahrukh fan I see" karan says and laughs.
"Okay so hristikesh or Chandigarh?"
"Pehle mujhe Chandigarh bilkul acha nahi lagta tha ub lagta ha."
"Nice. Kids, freinds, patents, husband , sister . Rank in order or priority." Karan says.
" kids, parents, husband , sister and then friends. " manvi says.
" if you could get into the glamour world would you become a singer or an actor?" Karan asks.
"Singer." Manvi says.
" a quality if virat you can not stand" karan asks.
"Umm he gets jazbati sometimes" she said.
"A quality of virat you love the most?" Karan asks.
"He is always there for me, pampering me" manvi says.
"Okay last question. Virat cheats on you . Would you forgive him?" Karan asks and laughs. Manvi is shocked and looks at virat. Virat felt uncomfortable with that question.
Manvi closes her eyes and holds back her tears.
"Never" she says and opens her eyes.
"Okay we are done with the rapid fire. Some crazy answers some safe. We will announce the winner after this short break" karan says and the camera turns off.
"Hey guys you weren't offended by some of the questions right? We have to ask some interesting questions that's why." Karan says and virat nods a no and fakes a smile.
"Manvi please don't cry here" virat whispers in her ear.
"Virat why did you do this and ruin everything?" Manvi whispers in his ear as well and walks away.
She goes inside the bathroom and cries her eyes out. She looks at herself in the mirror and her tears had ruined her makeup. She quickly cleaned up.
She heard a knock and opened the bathroom door. Virat was standing there looking at her. He pushed her inside and came inside and closed the door. Manvi did t know what to say to him.
"Manvi I know I made a mistake and I'm just as hurt as you are. Please forgive me. I'm sorry" he says and starts crying himself.
Manvi started crying again. They both were just crying. Virat pulled manvi in ahug and they both were crying in each others arms.
"Kyew kiya tumne yeh virat. Kyew?" Manvi yells as she continues crying. She grips his body even tighter against his. Even though he was the one who gave her these tears she still wanted to cry on his shoulders.
Virat gives her forehead a light kiss.
"i am sorry manvi. i hurt you so much" he says with tears in his eyes. Manvi grips his shirt and cries on his shirt.
"Itna dard horaha ha mujhe. Mera dil nahi barsat ker sakta yeh virat. esa lag raha ha ka mein mer jaongi." manvi screams.
"Shh chup bilkul chup. Esi batein nahi kero. Or mera khuda ki kasam ha tumhe manvi mujhe bhi utna hi dard horaha ha. I love you and only you. I ruined both of our lives. I broke your trust. Pata nahi mujh sa itni beri galti kesa hogae. Mera family ka mujh per sa bherosa uth gaya. My kids will never respect me. All because of a stupid mistake i made."Virat says and sits on the bathroom floor and cries. Manvi was kind of surprised seeing him break down like that. She sits on the floor and holds his head up.
"Shh. Rona band kero. we have to get back to the show. chalo utho" manvi says and wipes his tears and helps him stand up. They both quickly wipe their tears and head out.
they walk towards the set and everyone was waiting for them
"Okay live in 3.. 2...1" the camera man says.
"And we are back with the singer who every girl wants to date and the girl who gets to actually date him everyday" Karan says.
"So any guesses who wins the coffee hamper?" Karan asks.
virman were still emotional and were really not in the mood.
"Probably him, he had raunchy answers" manvi said with a fake laugh.
"HAHA. The winner is..." karan says.
"VIRAT!" Karan says.
Virat is surprised and gets up and accepts the hamper.
"Sorry manvi" Virat jokes to cheer up manvi.
"Babe jo tera ha woh mera ha remember?" manvi jokes back and giggles. She tries to snatch the hamper and virat tries to keep it. They both start tugging at it and just laughed.
Manvi knew that no matter how much this situation is hurting her. Virat can still bring a smile on her face instantly.
Karan laughs at their cuteness.
"Okay before we say bye to our audience tonight. Everyone wants to hear your new hit virat!" karan says.
Virat and manvi stopped laughing and were shocked that karan requested that song.
"You know that song was never meant to be released. I was just spontaneously singing it in my studio and someone from the studio uploaded it on youtube" Virat says.
"But now it is an international hit! Come on please sing it for us!" Karan says and hands virat a guitar.
Virat had to say yes.
He looks over at manvi and blinks his eyes, gesturing her not to get emotional during the song.
Dhuaan dhuaan si hai zindagi
Dhundhla sa hai khwaab kahin
Kho gayi jaane kahaan woh khushi
Dikhti nahin hai roshni

Kaise din thhe aur kaisi thi woh raatein
Jab karte thhe hum sapnon se hi baatein
Gum ho gayi hai woh hansi..

Manvi has flashbacks of their fun nokh jhok moments and their romantic moments.

Hmm...

Ho.. Naa kinara haa.. Naa sahara ha..
Jaane kahaan main ja raha
Chalte chalte.. hey.. raah par kyun
Ruk si gayi hai zindagi..

Dhuaan dhuaan si hai zindagi
Dhundhla sa hai khwaab kahin
Kho gayi jaane kahaan woh khushi
Dikhti nahin hai roshni

Yaari ka aisa asar tha
Na fikra, na dar tha
Zindadili se jeete the hum
Ab waqt hum se khafa hai..
Jeene ki ab na wajah hai
Yeh kaisa toofan aa gaya...
Chhup chhup ke rone main laga

Virats voice trembles and he controls his tears and continues singing

Dhuaan dhuaan si hai zindagi
Dhundhla sa hai khwaab kahin
Kho gayi jaane kahaan woh khushi
Dikhti nahin hai roshni


Virat finishes and bows his head down because he started crying. Manvi who was holding back her tears for so long starts to silently cry. Karan was taken by surprise.
"Are you guys okay?" karan asks.
Virat wipes his tears and deepens his voice
"ya everything is fine. It is just a very deep song thats why. Meri Manu soft hearted ha" He says with a smile and hugs her. He kisses her forehead .
"Manvi control" He whispers in her ear.
Manvi wipes her tears and fixes her hair.
"Sorry i am fine." she says with a fake smile.
"Okay so before you guys leave please sighn our coffee mugs" Karan says and stands up.
Virman stand up and sighn the mugs.

Precap:
Maya goes to jail.
Full drama

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Edited by mebigirl - 9 years ago

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