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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
hiii u updated after a long time.
updat was emotional as wel as fun filled one. ther fb seq were nice n where virat breakdown n manvis consolation were nice.
virman comfortng scenc were realy awsum.
lov der early scences of tis update.
wowww precap s very intrstng plz updat asap.
tanq fr d pm
lov u n tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
wow finally u updated after a long time and yes the wait wa worth it😳
loved kofee with karan tadka in u r stry and precap wow sper daasu
do continue soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
A Feisty Yet Emotional Update Filled With Moments Of Fun
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
SUPERB UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
U UPDATED AFTER A LONG TIME AND I WAS WAITING FOR IT FROM LONG TIME.
IT WAS JUAT EMOTINAL AND FANTASTIC UPDATE.
EMOTIONS WERE BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED BY U.
I ENJOYED EACH AND EVERY PART OF THIS UPDATE. FROM STARTING TILL END IT WAS AWESOME.
KARAN SHOW WAS AWESOME AND VIRMAN LOVE STORY WAS AWESOME.
IT REMINDS ME OF THEIR LOVE STORY FROM STARTING TILL END. CUTE NOK JHOK REALLY I ENJOYED .
VIRMANS ENOTIONS WERE FULLY COMING IN BETWEEN.
VIRMANS PLAYED A VERY SMART GAME AND THEIR ANSWERS R JUST UP TO MARK AND SHOWS THEIR TRU LOVE.
VIRMAN BATHROOM SCENE WAS AWESOME.
LOVES VIRAT ACCEPTING HUS MISTAKE WHOLE HEARTIDLY AND HIS CRYING.
LOVES THE WAY MANVI COSOLES HIM.
FULL SHOW WAS AWESOME AND VIRAT WINS THE HAMPER AWESOME IT IS.
PRECAP SOUNDS VERY INTERESTING.
MAYA IS IN JAIL SUPERB AND LOT OF DRAMA.
NOW WAITING FOR NEXT PART. PLZ DONT KEEP US WAIT NEXT TIME.
SO UPDATE SOON DEAR
TAKE CARE.
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
sorry for being late
well awsome update
countinue soon
m waiting ; )
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
super update
thanks for th pm...



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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
very emotionl update dii
pls don't make them apart
nd also i don' wantvirt to do any such mistake
make change naa dii
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Nice update
thanks for the PM dear
<3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Hey, I've just read the ff. It's wonderful. I'm loving all this emotional concept.
Keep writing, cont soon... ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Please leave big comments.
I work hard on these updates please

Part 15:
Virat and manvi were driving back home from star studios. The car ride was silent. Manvi was quietly looking out the window and virat was concentrating on his driving.
After a while virat's phone started ringing. He reached for his pocket and picked up the call.
"Ya hello?" He says. Manvi looks at him curiously.
"What seriously? Omg vinot you are the best!" Virat yells in happiness.
"Yes yes I am coming!" He says and cuts the call.
Manvi looks at virat curiously.
"Kya huwa?"
She asks.
"Maya is getting arrested for what she did. We are going to the police station" virat says with a smile.
"Oh ..." Manvi says.
"Oh?" Virat asks what she meant.
"Whatever happened you were equally to blame. It's not like she forced you. I saw the tape with my own eyes. Your were enjoying it " Manvi says in a sad low tone.
Virat gulps.
"Manvi I was drunk. She got me drunk. She lied to me and tricked me!" Virat says.
"Yes I know and I hate that bitch. But you still are at fault you know" manvi says.
Virat ignores manvi and just look straight on the road.
After a while they finally reach the police station and head inside.
They find Maya being handcuffed by female police officers.
Virat walks towards her and gives her a dirty look.
"Mena kaha tha na mein tumhe wapis sa jail bhijwaonga! Tum na meri zindagi berbaad ki ub mein tumhe ek pal bhi sukoon sa jeene nahi doonga. Gussa toh itna ha tum pa ka tumhe kissi dhandhe wale ka hatho bech doon!" Virat yells on her face. Manvi walks towards virat and covers his mouth.
"Virat yeh tum kya keh raha ho! Chup raho!" Manvi says in respect of Maya.
Virat lightly pushes manvi away.
"Nahi Manvi. This R*ndi deserves this! Is sa ghatiya insaan mena aj tak nahi dekha. Maar dalonga mein isko! Is na mujh sa mera pyaar cheena, mera parivaar cheena!" Virat yells.
"Virat! Ek or ganda lafze nahi bologe tum! Maya na Jo kiya so kiya. Maa raised you better than this! Tum kisi bhi aurat ko disrespect nahi keroge! Samjhe tum! Officer Maya ko lejao yahan sa. Make sure she stays here forever but she will be treated with respect! Okay!" Manvi says.
Just as they were about to take Maya away she started laughing loudly. Everyone was confused why Maya was laughing.
"Kitni bewakoof ha yeh! Is ka husband ka sath so chuki ho mein or yeh mujhe Hi defend kerahi ha? Hahaha no wonder virat came to.me hahaha.
Manvi tumne mms toh dekha tha na? Kitna maaza aya mujhe tumhare virat ka sath hahahahahahaha" Maya says and continues laughing. Virat ran towards Maya and squeezed her neck. Maya tried to free herself as she couldn't breathe. Manvi and all the police officers tried to pull virat back but he was boiling with anger.
"Virat leave her or else!" Manvi screams with all her voice. Virat
Wasn't listening to her.
"Virat!!! You will loose me forever! LEAVE HER!" Manvi yells. Virat slowly leaves Maya's neck and backs away from her.
Manvi then makes virat sit down on a chair and goes up to Maya herself. She with all her strength slapped Maya. The sound echoed for minutes.
"Mera ghar tora ha tumne. Mera Khuda ki kasam ha ek din ka chain nahi milega tumhe! Dekh Lena! Lejao isko!" Manvi yells and they take Maya away to the jail cells.
Virats friend vinot comes to meet virman.
"Chal virat Tera kaam toh hogaya" he says and shakes virats hand.
"Thanks yaara" virat says and hugs him.
"Bhabhi ub yeh churail app logo ko perishan nahi keregi" vinot says to manvi. Manvi fakes a smile. Maya being in jail made no difference to the situation. Manvi still isn't forgiving virat.
"Mein ata hoon" virat says and heads outside.
Manvi quietly stood there with vinot not knowing what to say.
"Bhabhi ek baat bolo?" Vinot asks.
Manvi nods.
"Virat ko sachi mein upni galti ka ehsaas ha. Or galti toh insaan sa hoti ha. Or nashe mein ki gae galti pa insaan ka bilkul control nahi. Virat bahot hurt ha. App ka bina jee nahi paega. Maaf kerdo usko" vinot request manvi and manvi didn't know what to say. She taps his shoulder.
"Chalo maana mena virat ki galti ko galti samjh ka maaf kiya. Lekin kya mera dil sa woh shak chala jaega? Kya mein woh video upne dimakh sa mita paongi? Humare culture mein ha ka shaddi jis sa kero usi sa jismani sambhan rakho. Virat ka conscious mein 2 aurton ka jism hoga. Woh nah chate huwa bhi compare kerega. Or kya mera virat ko maaf kerne sa mera dard kum hoga? Mera trust wapis aega? Usko maaf kerke ek bagir trust ki shaddi mein nahi rakh sakti. I love him, I still do but not enough to forget the fact that he slept with another women. " manvi says.
Before vinot could say anything virat came back and held manvi's shoulder.
"Chale?" Virat asks manvi.
In the car:
Virat was driving for a while. He took a short cut but it was a stranded route. Nobody was to be seen within miles. Manvi's phone started ringing and she saw the caller I'd. It was viren. Virat looked over at her phone and was nervous.
"Utha lo manvi" virat says.
Manvi hesitantly picks up.
"KAHA HO TUM? VIRAT KA SATH KYEW GAE? BHOOL GAE US GHATIYA INSAAN NA KYA KIYA?" Viren yells so loudly that virat could clearly hear him and the phone was NOT on speaker.
Manvi gulps.
"Jiju mein kuch nahi bhooli. And mein kis ka sath kahan ho is none of your business. I'm a grown women and nobody has the right to treat me like a kid and tell me what to do!"
Manvi says in a stern voice. Virat was a bit surprised by manvi's reply but even he knew viren was being a little over protective. Manvi wasn't virens 15 year old duaghter , she is a 24 year old married woman who does not have to be answerable to her jiju.
"Kub arahi ho?" Viren asks in anger.
"Subah" manvi says in anger just to annoy him and be a rebel.
"You will not spend the night with him!" Viren yells.
"Excuse me? Mera person life mein dhakal dene ki koi zerorat nahi ha. He is still my husband and even if he wasn't, you have no say in this!" Manvi yells.
"Manvi! " viren yells.
"Jiju chill! I'm on my way home now! But seriously you can not be nosey in what I do or who I meet! Okay! I am not bound to answer you! I love you but I'm not answerable to you!" She says and cuts the call.
"Wow" virat says .
Manvi smacks his arm.
"Shut up or gaari chalao!" Manvi yells.
"But you are spending the night with me!" Virat jokes and makes a kissey face.
Manvi hits him again.
"Ghar ponchao mujhe!" Manvi yells.
Virat was just laughing at her.
"Kyew ? derti ho?" Virat jokes.
Manvi folds her arms and gives him an angry glare.
"Kis baat pa?" She asks.
" dimakh kehta ha ghar Jana ha but dil kehta ha ka you want to spend the night with me. Or yeh baat admit kerne sa tum derti hi" virat says .
Manvi again gets mad at him and hitands his arm again and as soon as she does the car starts to jerks and then comes to a stop.
Virat and Manvi look at each other.
Manvi again hits virat.
"What did you do chep ?" She yells.
"Era mena kuch nahi kiya!" He yells in his defense and hits her back. Manvi gives him a deathly stare and hits him harder. Virat grabs her wrist and twists it. Manvi yells in pain.
"Choro virat werna acha nahi hoga!" She yells. Virat twists her wrist more. Manvi yells in pain.
"Virat its seriously hurting me!" She yells.
Virat smirks and leaves her wrist.
Manvi rubs her wrist and then has a evil smile. She pinches virat and opens the car door and runs out. They were in the middle of a small roadsides. Nobody or no place was to be seen any where nearby.
Manvi ran out if the car and virat came out and ran after her in anger. They both started running in circles around the car. Virat was getting tired running but manvi was in full speed with heels on.
"Kon keh sakta ha that you had twins a month ago!" Virat says and continues to try to catch her.
"Catch me if you can!" She shouts and doges virat. Virat runs and grabs manvi and trips. They both fall hard on the ground and start laughing.
"Hahaha are you okay?" Virat says still on the floor and manvi kind of in his arms.
"No! you tackled me idiot" she says and laughs.
Virat gets up and gives manvi his hand and she stands up as well.
As he was pulling her up virat pulls her towards himself and their chests bumped into each other. Manvi was taken by surprise and tried to move away but virat grabbed her waist and kept her close to him.
"Virat leave me" she says softly.
"Manvi I really love you. I can't imagine my life without you. Forgive me please!" He says and rests his head on her shoulder.
Manvi tried to push him away but he gripped her waist so tightly.
"Virat I can't imagine my life without you either. Do you think I like all of this? Do you think I want to spend the rest of my life alone without you taking care of the twins ? That's the last thing I want. But virat what you did is so unforgivable. I can't erase those images of you and Maya from my mind. The pain you gave me is so much that nothing can fix this. Virat we married each other promising that we are each others partners for the rest of our life. You broke that promise. You were mine! But now you are not! You threw yourself at another woman!" Manvi says slowly and continues to try to push virat away but he still didn't let her go.
"Virat leave me !" Manvi finally looses her temper and yells. She manages to push him away.
"Manvi I want you back in my life. Mera khuda ki kasam I didn't do this on purpose. I was drunk. Hosh mein nahi tha. Please manvi" he holds her shoulders and begs her.
Manvi removes his hands from her shoulder and walks away. Her back facing virat.
"Virat please! I wish I could forgive you but I can't" she says in her cracked voice and starts crying. She trembles and hides her face with her hands. Virat sighs and walks towards her. He taps her shoulder and turns her around. Manvi immediately hugs him and cries on his shirt. Virat places his hand on her hair and ruffles her hair.
He kisses her head and grips her tighter.
Just then it started raining and virman broke their hug and looked up in surprise.
"Chalo gaari mein betho" virat says and opens manvi's door and then sits inside the car himself. Manvi shivers because she was soaking wet.
"Virat calll someone to get the car fixed" manvi says and virat pulls out his phone.
"Shittt no signals" virat says and shows manvi his phone. Manvi immediately searches for her purse in the car and pulls out her phone.
"Ugh me neither!" She yells in annoyance and throws her phone in the back seat.
"Koi pass mein gas station ya kuch nahi ha?"
Manvi asks Virat.
"Nahi I have been through this highway before. Bilkul sanata hota ha or 7-8 mile tak kuch nahi ha and we can't even walk that much in the rain" virat says.
"Toh phir ub?" Manvi asks.
"I don't know subah tak toh koi na koi gaari ajae gi ya shayad signals mil jae" virat says and manvi felt a little uncomfortable being with him all night . virat right away sensed her uncomfortableness.
"Manvi I'm still your husband. Drama band kero or sojao" virat says in anger and opens the recliner of his seat and lies down.
"Virat" manvi says.
Virats eyes were closed but he was still awake.
"Hmm?" He asks.
" I miss the babies. I want to go home. They need me" manvi says sadly.
Virat turns around and looks at her in anger.
"I haven't seen the babies in 3 days and shayad ub kabhi na miloon. Bhabhi ha unke pass itni tension nahi lo or sojao!' He says in anger and faces the opposite direction again.
" virat they are not even a month old. Maa or mausi mein farak ha! "Manvi yells back
" manvi what can I do? Gaari band ha. Signals nahi ha or ass pass koi nahi ha hum yahan akele ha!" Virat yells at her.
Manvi starts crying. This was the first time she was away from the twins for so long since they were born.
Virat realises he should not have screamed at her.
He pulls her in a hug and manvi cries on his shoulder.
"Babies theek toh honge na?" Manvi asks.
"Bhai Bhabhi hum dono sa kum thori ha. Woh mannat or variman ka parents jesa Hi ha." Virat says and calms her down.
"Manvi tum kuch ghanto ki duri berdast nahi ker sakte. Mujhe upne Hi bacho sa humesha ka liya alag kerne ja rahi ho tum. Kya yeh fair ha? Maana maa zyada important ha lekin I am still important for them. And kya mera dil nahi ha? Ya I didn't carry them for 9 months but I have waited impatiently too see their faces just as much as you did. Everyday after you fell asleep I would talk to your belly and kiss my babies good night. I made these babies manvi. We made them. Humari family ko mat toro! Mujhe meri guriya sa alag maat kero. You know how important mannat is for me. She is my princess, my angel." Virat says sadly and turns his face away to hide his sadness.
"Virat socho aj sa 20 saal baad a guy breaks mannats heart. She is left hopeless and used. What would you do?"
Virat opens his eyes wide.
"
Us kutta ki jaan lelonga! Zameen mein zinda dafan kerdonga!" Virat yells.
"Mein bhi kissi ki beti hi hoon virat! "
Manvi says and virat was just surprised
He didn't know what to say.
"Mera papa duniya mein nahi ha but woh mera dard dekh raha ha uper sa or mera chachu mera papa sa kum nahi ha. Abhi hrishkesh mein kissi ko kuch nahi pata ha jub pata chalega toh socho unka dil nahi.chahega ka tumhe maar hi Dale?"
Virat was speechless. He didn't know what to say.
"Mein galat hoon or upni galti ki saza ka liya tyaar ho" virat says in embarrassment.
Manvi takes a deep breath
"Or woh saza ha divorce. Saza bhi yehi or is situation ka eelaj bhi yehi"
Manvi says with a broken heart and lies down on her seat and closes her eyes.
Virat didn't know what else to say to her he lied down as well on his seat and closed his eyes. They both fell asleep while facing opposite directions.


In the morning:
The sun has fully rose and virman were quietly sleeping in the heated car. Manvi turned herself and saw virats back.
She had a small smile on her face.
She missed having virat right next too her in the morning since he left the vadhera mansion.
Manvi leaned closer to him as the car seats had a gap in between them. She lightly kissed the back of his neck.
"I will always love you no matter what"
She whispers and sits back on her seat. Just then virat turns in his sleep. He was now facing manvi.
Manvi touched his lips with her fingertips.
Just then virat opened his mouth and bit her finger
Manvi yelled in pain and hit him."You were
Awake chep?" She yells. Virat opens
His eyes and starts laughing.
"Tum sa pehle sa utha huwa hoon" he says in his sexy morning voice. Manvi's heart melts to his morning voice.
"Ghadha! Ub ghar kub jaenge?" Manvi yells.
Virat pulls out his phone and he still didn't have signals. He let out a loud grunt in annoyance.
"Tumhara sath sath tumhara phone bhi kissi kaam ka nahi ha!" Manvi yells.
"Haan haan tumhara phone ka signal toh chaand tak jaa raha ha na?" Virats yells in sarcasm.
Just then virat spotted a truck driver who was fixing his tire.
Virat opened his eyes wide and ran out the car.
"Oh pajee! Lift dedo. Raat sa yahan phase huwa ha. Signals bhi nahi ha phone ka!" He yells from far and walks towards the truck.
Manvi steps outside the car as well. She yawns and stretches her arms. Just then she notices a car comping in full speed and virat was walking across the road and towards the truck. She opened her eyes wide and ran towards virat .
"Virat!!!" She yells and pulled him towards herself.
Virat was pulled back and fell on manvi and the car passed by them.
Virat was just stunned he couldn't grasp what just happened. Manvi pushed him off her self. She stood up and looked at virat in anger. Virat stood up as well."You idiot
Abhi gaari ka neeche ajata! Bewakoof! Dekh ka nahi chal sakte! Tumhe kuch hojata toh mein jee pati?" Manvi yells at him with all her voice and pushes him in anger.
The truck driver runs towards them.
"Oye ki nai. Sub theek ha bhagwaan ki kripa sa." He says.
"App ko kya ha ? Mein upne husband pa chilao ya us ko joota maaro! App kyew beech mein bol raha ho?" Manvi yells at the truck driver. Virat grabs manvi's shoulders and moves her aside.
"Kya bol rahi ha manvi. Jo humari help kerne aya usi ko suna rahi ho? Pagal ho! Sorry sir meri biwi ka screw thora sa dheela ha. App please hume ride de sakte ha?" He asks him humbly.
"Chal aja." The pajee says and walks towards his truck. He quickly fixes his tire and they start driving on the road.
Vadhera mansion:
The truck driver drops virman at the gate and waits for Virat.
"Chalo manvi your finally home. Bye" virat says and starts to walk towards the truck. Manvi wanted to invite him in but she knew virat can't face his family after how they kicked him out of the house.
She waves a bye and walks inside.
Manvi walked in and saw jeevika and vanshika Antie taking care of the twins. The twins were just crying and they were struggling to calm.them down. Manvi ran towards them and took the babies and hugged them tight.
"I'm so sorry mere bache. I'm sorry" she says and starts crying.
The babies immediately stopped crying as soon as manvi held them.
"Manvi puri raat roh rahe tha dono! Tum kuch hours ka liya gae thi! Kaha thi tum? Tumhara or virat ka phone bhi band tha! Viren Ji or dada Ji na police ko bhi phone kerdiya!" Jeevika yells.
"Dii humari gaari ek deserted higway pa band hogae. Signals bhi nahi tha wahan.Subah mushkil sa ek truck driver mila or us sa favour li! Dii in dono ko mein sulake ati ho" manvi says and heads to her room with the babies.
After a while manvi comes back. Dadadji and viren were at the living room.along with everyone else and they were angry as ever.
Manvi quietly walks towards them and viren holds manvi's arm.
"Where were you?" He asks in anger.
"Gaari band hogae thi! Signals nahi tha or ass pass koi nahi tha. We were stuck!" Manvi yells.
"Manvi tum virat ka sath bahir gae Hi kyew thi?" Dada Ji asks calmly.
"Dada Ji virat and me were invited to kofee with karan. He really needed me there so I agreed. Or mein kahi bhi kissi ka sath bhi jao woh mera personal mamla ha. " manvi says.
Viren looks at her in anger.
"Manvi! Virat na kya kiya tum bhool gae? Did you sleep with him last night?" Viren asks her in front of everyone and manvi's blood boiled.She pushed him
"Enough jiju! Don't make me forget that you are older than me! Mein virat ka sath Jo kero woh meri merzi! You have no right to ask me anything! Ager phir sa apne mujh sa esa sawal poocha toh mein yeh ghar Hi chordo gi! Understand?
Or mein kuch nahi bhooli hoon! We are still getting a divorce! Us ko ek favour chaya thi mena di. Gaari band hogae us mein kissi ki galti nahi thi. Is baat ka itna bera issue kyew banaya jaa raha ha?
Or jiju ainda meri personal life mein dhakkal dene sa pehle 10 baar sochna Lena!" she yells and walks towards her room in anger.

Precap:
Everyone in hriskesh finds out about the divorce

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