Aani. I know I have not commented on the previous parts so far. Real life has kept me busy to even read the updates on time.
However, after reading this part, guess it was time I broke my silence. This one undoubtedly is the best part for me from this entire piece. Of course, the romantic in me is eternally waiting for the final deed, but the way u portrayed the emotional side of Raman made my eyes misty.
I remember while discussing this you had mentioned about Raman's fear. I had wondered that how will you touch Raman's fear of rejection because the poor soul was brutally rejected many a times by his own confidant...
And the result .. as always ... it makes u think and makes u ponder.
I kind of related to it because am a verbal diarrhea when it comes to chit chatting but I always struggle with matters of heart ... and Raman is someone who has long ago put Shagun episode in a box and put in a far cotner of his heart.
The way u mentioned about another wall broken between them. It felt so real. U know u nurture a relationship and while physical attraction plays a major role in a couple's life, it is this kind of heartfelt confessions which make it stronger.
I loved the last few lines where u wrote about clearly something shifting between them.
What separates a husband and wife from others is not the fact that they have seen each other naked or shared a bed, it is the fact that they know each others worst traits, features and confessions and yet they love each other more and more by each passing day.
Loved this part.
I knew earlier I had supported Lia and said "All of me Hates All of u" but sorry Lia .. with this one ... I change sides ... am ready to wait coz somehow this part satiates me so much ki am ready to wait for further parts and let them unravel in due course of time.
A big hug to u girl.
PS: I read and commented from my phone so typos ke liye maafi.
Edited by btalwar - 10 years ago
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