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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#501

This was by far the best chapter yet, especially the end when Ishita takes Raman's hand and in that moment, so much is understood between the two even though there is no words uttered. The way you explained the whole scenario, how Raman felt completely exposed in front of Ishita but it was alright cause he was safe with her and how he fell in love with her even more at that moment, I just loved that whole part. It was sheer beautiful writing.

P.S. The part where Raman reflects on his relationship with Shagun and how it affected his relationship with Ruhi was heartbreaking-ly beautiful as well but I was so in awe of the end bit that I had to gush over it first.

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kavya

@s_kavya

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#502

What an Brilliant... Wonderful update 👏 👏 👏 i don't have much words to say but yes falling more and more in love with your writing Simply OUTSTANDING... 👏 ⭐️

Thanks for the PM Aani 😊

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#503

oh my god

that was simply awesome...

perfect

all the emotions..so beautiful

am speechless

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#504

great update

it was

update soon n pm me

take care

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Shravs

@shravsss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Awesome..

Loved ur explanation n detailing...

I just wish such scenes in yhm...

Great work...

Lookin forward to its nxt update...

Hope I have one...

Thnks fr d pm..

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Edited Page 64 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4299448&PID=119762670&#p119762670

What do I say about the latest part. It's one of my most fav ones of this story so far. It's deep, its emotional,its moving and what's best is how it explains IshRa's relation here, even though its mostly an insight into Raman and Shagun's life.

Raman's scars are deep and they don't heal as quickly as they would normally because Shagun does not for even a moment not surround his life. In the form of the kids or her own presence, she's around and interfering in his life. It must be hard to deal with a part of his past he wants to long forget. It showed how he desperately didn't want to go through the same issues and abandonment that he did previously and it was brilliant how cool Ishita was on hearing this comment from him. Which wife would not react? But she understood him and how. She let him be, let him think over, let him have his space. And when he did look up at her, with all the love he had and with all honesty. She too just had love and trust to offer and probably a promise to never let that happen again.

They spoke so less in this part, but what they feel for the other and just how unique their relation is was blaring through every sentence.

Love the flow of the story Aani and again just how amazingly do you express every emotion that exists. Can't wait for more.🤗

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smilydear

@smilydear

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Another wonderful update...

Why You are not in CVs Anni , they took the YHM in drain after picking up 2 really illogical plots for future.

These are the points to be focused... You wrote it so beautifully that I feel like i m watching a real episode. 👏👏👏

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Emotional update Aani you bring us back to feel what Raman had feel before he met with Ishu and slowly he got heal the wound he had with Shagun . Now he feel relive and broke all the wall he had built up around him he said he can talk anything and evrything to Ishu that so lovely of him. I hope next update Ishu will geting better and bring Raman life to be happy more than before.😛

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shadeslayer

@shadeslayer

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#509

The last update was fantastic Aani!!! (I am right with your name right?) The emotions running through Raman penned down in a brilliant manner!!!

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#510

This is amazing... love how you went into his past, very realistic and very sad. Really says a lot about the depth of his pain and all the ways in which Ishita is so different and important for him.

And the silent comfort between them is just what the moment needed...

Can't believe this is a whole chapter with no words between ISHRA, definitely one of the best chapters... very well done!👏

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago