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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

aissa hi hoga :P

mere aas paas toh tum dikhti hi nahi ho! 😆

aaj kal kiske aas pass nahi hoon...
2 kids at home.. mera acha time pass hoti hai ghar maine...
IF only when at office n when boss is not around...
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Posted: 10 years ago

it was outstanding

loved it

waiting for next

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update Dear... Poor Geet already suffer a lot and Now all these

Loved the entire plot

well written

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Posted: 10 years ago
although geet wants to stay away from him...bt thy bhaved like a couple...too mch comfortableness btwn thm...n manu if manu will start to call him dad...
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Posted: 10 years ago
maaneet happily seeing manu talk
maan told his parents about geet incident
all meet geet and supporting her
she relaised maan why don't went cap
lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! awesome update...I am proud of geet...she faced the situation so bravely...She is also not denying khuranas help on face...She is accepting maan slowly...
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
loved yash and rashi concern for geet
manu is so cute lice and lajma awww 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago


Wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan taking care of his angels and manu ki talk making my maaneet smile even in they bitter moments was lovely emotional..te way geet ki pain and my maan consoling her and his order tat he will take her was lovely emotional..te way my maan saying te incident to yash and rashi and both consoling geet and yash ki worry and get accepting them seeing they worry and love for her was lovely emotional..i love te update
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 103


Part - 104

U need to see that life is not always perfect . We will not always get what we want. And though it is hurt a lot , what should've happened, happened . Who should've left , left , nd whatever's thrown u off course will always bring u to where it is u need to be .

This was d birling period for Geet , see witnessed both d sides of Maan ,, yrs back when she was in KM that Maan was totally diff from this ,, time not only changed her but him too ,, if he hurt her that time , now he was regretting ,, if he broke her that time now he was saving her ,, her heart wanted to trust him but mind was stopping her putting few if nd but nd specially DM nd Maan's mom-dad ,, how they wd react nd what Maan think about her ? Maan's love& care for Manu was a diff thing , though she didn't accept openly that manu was his child but he was treating Manu like his ,, Maan was taking care for her bcoz she was Manu's mom nd there was only a sympathy for her but what was that which she saw in his eyes ,,, again her mind puzzled with lots of this nd that ,, she was sitting in living hall lost in her thoughts .

Yash & Rashi got up to go hugged Geet nd insisted her to take rest nd avoid to think about that ,, they came out nd Maan was with them , when they came in corridor Yash placed his hand on Maan's shoulder to stop him nd pressed that a lil without looking at him ,, Maan stopped nd looked at him ,, Yash patted twice at same place nd moved ahead quietly circling his other arm around Rashi ,, Maan rooted there absorbing Yash's gesture ,, he was surprized nd overwhelmed thinkg about his Dad's silent support to him ,, this lil gesture clearly told Maan to stay with Geet to console her in this tough time ,, he was chocked , eyes turned wet nd he left a deep sigh ,, a sweet smile crept on his lips nd he mumbled .. thanks Dad , thanks a lot , u r a gr8 Dad .

He turn nd came back in OH where find Geet lost in her thoughts ,, came close nd sat near her ,, she looked at him ,,there was a tussle in her nd she was very confused about d things which wr happening around her .

Maan held her hands in his looking deep in her hazels , he knew that her wounded heart wdn't able to open it's closed door which she had shut yrs back.

Maan: Geet, I know it's a tough time for u but u faced every tough situation bravely which come in ur way when u wr all alone , then why r u fearing now , when I m with u ,, we r with u Geet ,, things have to be happen nd we have to face them , alone or together .

Geet: why Babaji always put me to face d hell ?

Maan: u r not d one Geet ,, there r many, but sometime d worst situations cn be blessings in disguise .

Geet halfheartedly : but what d use of those blessings when worst situations broke us to no extant .

Maan: we didn't get but someone always there to foster our broken self .

Geet: nd how cn u trust on someone in that state ?

Maan: ur heart will tell u , if u listen that trusting on u .

Geet: how cn a broken nd wounded heart gives u right reply ?

Maan: it'll Geet , our heart cn be scatter in to pieces but it'll always show us d right way if u r right .

Geet: nd mind ?

Maan: it cn take time but cn't ignore d truth .

Geet: cn u trust someone after getting a heartbreak ?

Maan: if d truth is infront of me nd my heart told me to trust , then I cn .

Geet: is that so simple ?

Maan: no , it takes time nd we have to wait , but we have to accept d truth so that we cn move futher without fear .

Geet: it is not easy ?

Maan: it's not difficult too.

Geet looked deep in those honey brown eyes which wr very clear nd full of confidance , but her mind nd heart was clouded with fear ,, Maan knew that she need time to trust him .

Maan: come, u have to take rest nd don't fear ,, I m staying here in next room.

He got up nd made her stand holding her hands ,, Geet was staring at him nd didn't react ,, she quietly following his words ,, Maan too was sensing her turmoil ,, he bent a lil ,, scooped her in his arms nd started to move in her bedroom ,, both wr looking in eachother eyes which wr volumed with lots of emotions .

Both wr very quiet ,, he settled her in d bed , covered her with d blanket nd turned to go , but he felt a tug on his hand nd looked at his hand nd then at Geet ,, his wrist was in her hand nd she was still staring at him with fear in her eyes .

Maan's heart hopped ,, this was d 1st sign of her trust ,, she wanted him near her ,, he sat on d edge of d bed , patted her hand , then cupped her face with a hand ,, he looked with all love at her with a faint smile .

Maan: darro nahi Geet, mai tumse durr nahi hu , so jao .

She didn't reply but slowly closed her eyes to sleep but next sec opened with a jerk ,, d horrible fleshes started haunted her ,, Maan sat near her taking support from d head rest of d bed ,, gesturing her to sleep he covered her eyes with his palm , his one hand was still in her tight hold ,,he held her in his protective arm,, she slept after few min ,, Maan remained there near her nd slept in half lying form close to her ,, he cdn't step back when she was trying to take a step towards him with some trust.

His heart was relieved getting a silent support from his Dad , though Yash was very upset nd angered with him after that day but this back was enough for him to move with confident towards Geet who too showed a ray of hope to him .


Precap --- Geet valued Maan's help ...


Part - 105



sorry for mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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