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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 107


Part - 108


Maan was in full happiest mood nd cd say that it was d happiest day for him ,, he crossed one more hurdle between him nd Geet ,, she accepted him as his friend nd her jealous filled anger was forcing him to smile ,,not smile but making him laugh ,, he remembered that how cute she was looking when she pouted ,, Maan was driving nd laughing remembering her antics ,, he took a deep breath of contentment ,, after many days anguish he got some peace nd happiness .

He reached in KC nd went straight in his dad's office to informed him about d meeting ,, he knew that his dad was worried for Geet more than him ,, He gave all d feedback to Yash nd he said that rest he wd handle ,, both got busy in their respective works .

Maan remembered Geet nd smiled when he took coffee in his office ,, talking to manu in lunchtime was fix for him ,, at eve he called her nd reminded her to go back home on time .

Days stared slipping down ,, Yash nd Maan met with d previous driver nd got all d info regarding that B****** driever ,, d old driver was too very shocked nd sad for all that mishappening ,, he was saying sorry again nd again nd assured them he wd help them for giving him punishment ,, boz of ACP's personal interest police dug out d root of that driver ,, he had left his perv jobs too coz of his bad conduct with females ,, police gave him 3dr degree treatment nd he accepted everything ,, coz of a solid case against him nd he went in jail for long .

That incident brought Maan nd Geet close ,, she started showing some trust in him sometime they had casual talk on diff topics nd regarding Manu ,, there wr good news for Khuranas that Annie gave birth a baby Girl nd DM , Rashi nd Yash became more busy ,, every eve they talked to Annie nd some time Maan too ,, they wr planning to visit UK ,, D winters lessen down nd d festival of colour Holi was coming close ,, Geet didn't play holi after his Dad's demises nd when she came in KM , she never come out from her room ,, she only wished Yash nd Rashi in d mrng nd then locked herself ,, this festival didn't have any craze for her ,, in office they wr wrapping their work nd hand over to Indian team ,, whole team was going back after Holi ,, their tickets had made nd started their packing .

The restlessness in Maan was increasing day by day ,, he was not finding any way to open his heart in front of Geet ,, his dad put him in a great challenge .. telling Geet to accept him in her life ,, expressing his feelings in front of her was not easy for him ,, their closeness was not at that level ,, he didn't even have courage to say her for staying in India ,, Geet nd Manu wr going away from him nd this thing was killing him all d time ,, Maan was sad nd frustrated ,, pouring out his anger on his staff nd on him in gym, but in front of Geet nd Manu he remain quiet ,, he tried to hide, but Geet nd all his family members wr sensing his restlessness .

It was d day of Holi Geet remained in OH ,, at dinner Rashi called her to take dinner with them ,, Geet tried to make excuses but Yash nd Maan too insisted her ,, reluctantly she went with Manu ,, many dishes wr there coz of festival nd fav of Yash nd Maan too ,, all wr sitting there ,, after coming Ind this was d 2nd time Geet was sitting with DM on same table ,, Manu was sitting on a chair between Rashi nd Maan nd Geet sat opposite to Rashi but away from DM ,, there was a very thick wall of ice between Geet nd DM ,, Rashi nd Yash wr talking to all ,, Geet only replying in very minimal words ,, DM came to know about Geet's cab incident but she didn't have courage to go nd talk to Geet .

Rashi: Geet beta kal bhi yahin sab ek sath lunch aur dinner lenga ,, din mei sab Holi khelenge aur sath lunch lenge ,, Manu ki to yahan 1st holi hei , let him enjoy .

Geet hesitantly : sorry aunty mai holi nahi khelti kabhi,, mujhe pasand nahi .

All became silent remembering that she never came in KM for any festival ,, only at Diwali she had come nd stood at last with servants , though Yash nd Rashi insisted her but she never came bcoz of DM nd Maan ,, all faces lost their smiles .

Geet : I have many works ,, wo baat ye hei ki mai bhi aap sab ko kal dinner ke liye OH bulana chahati thi ,, plzz.

Yash: OH mei hum sabko ,, OK , no prob hum aa jate hein ,, ku Rashi ye bhi theek hei .

Rashi: tum agar essa chahti ho Geet to theek hei hum wahan aa jayege tumhare aur meri baby ke paas right manu ,,

Manu: yeah , glanny mommy make big cake nd musse fol me ,, i give u , Dadu ,, big glanny nd uncle Maan .

Something struck Maan nd he gasped : cake ,, March ,, OMG!! How I forgot this ? Dad its Manu's Bday TM ,, OMG!! Its my baby's Bday TM .

Rashi&Yash: what !! really ,, wow!! grt , it's a big day for us ,, colour Holi nd our Manu's Bday .

Rashi: Geet pahale ku nahi kaha ,, hum ek big party arrange kerty apne Manu ke liye.

Yash: haan Geet , beta pahale batana tha na ,, no prob , hum abhi bhi arrange ker sakty hein ,, i'll do that .

Maan: dad don't worry i'll do that.

Rashi: but kal sab mrkt close hein ,, Geet ye galat hei tumne bataya nahi ,, I want to shop a lot for him ,, Maan tum bhi ab yaad ker rahe ho ?

Maan: sorry .

Geet: plzz ,, aap sab esse panic ku ho rahe ho ..? it's just a Bday ,, nd he is very small for these parties nd all ,, usse ye sab ka kuch pata nahi hei ,, sall me kai baar manata hei jab bhi crche mei kisi ka Bday aata hei,, bas usse cake chahiye aur toys .

Yash: nahi hum celebrate kerenge .

Rashi: yes .

Maan: haan .

DM was quietly listening with a faint smile ,, but in her heart she too wanted do a lot for manu .

Geet: nahi ,,plzz try to understand ,, bas hum ghar mei celebrate karenge ,, US mei bhi hum U&A Sam ke sath hi hote thy ,, aur mai manu ke crche mei choco boxes de deti thi sabhi kids ke liye ,, ho gaya,,, wo chota hei abhi .

Rashi: Geet , chota hei to kya , hum to bade hei na .

Yash: yes Geet , humari bhi to khushi ka sawal hei chota hei to kya enjoy to karega na .

Maan: Geet , plzzz , let me do ,, don't spoil d fun ,, Dad - mom eski matt suno ,, hum celebrate kerenge .

Geet: haan but ghar mei ,, maine sab arrangement ker li hei ,, only family members ,,plzz ,,

All : G e e t .

Poor Manu was staring at all ,, he didn't know why they wr arguing ?

Geet: plzz U&A ,, ghar mei kya prob hei ? wo yahan jyada enjoy karega ,, aur jab mei yahan kisi ko janti nahi to party mei aayega kaun ? wahan bhi to hum sab hi honge na ,, to OH is better .

All faces hung down , disappointed nd helpless , Rashi looked at Yash nd Maan nd then DM ,, Yash wanted to voice out d truth but seeing Geet rejection he suppressed his wishes giving a hard look to Maan who was looking down at his plate sadly,, he too wanted to speak out all but remain quiet bounded by Yash's order ,, d atmosphere became heavier .

Geet: plzz , try to understand ,, we all r enough to celebrate nd I don't want anything ,, plzzz .

Yash : OK , as u wish ,, we'll be there ,, manu is imp for us ,, Rashi , Maan it's OK ,, jisme Geet khush hei wo karo .

Rashi nodded halfheartedly looking at Maan ,, Maan whose heart was crying over his helplessness ,, he cdn't even celebrate his child Bday like he want ,, he cdn't voice out his right on him ,, he cursed himself ,, He was Maan Singh Khurana a big well known businessman , have so much power nd wealth but not able to celebrate his son's Bday ,, his throat chocked nd it was going unbearable for him ,, he excused himself nd walkout from there with a swift move ,, all wr stunned nd known with d reason of this behaviour but not able to say anything openly .. Geet knew from her prospects nd Yash,Rashi nd DM from their .

Geet faked a smlile : sorry , he becomes angry but but i'll talk to him nd make him understand .


Precap ----- Manu's Bday ,,, Maan sad ..


Part - 109


sorry for mistakes...





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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update de ne jaa rahi ho kya babbie?
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

update de ne jaa rahi ho kya babbie?



😆😆 sab gayab ho gaye thy to chance mil gaya post res kerne ka..

indu kahan gayab ho gai.. ab kuch bata nahi rahi..

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😆😆 sab gayab ho gaye thy to chance mil gaya post res kerne ka..

indu kahan gayab ho gai.. ab kuch bata nahi rahi..



i will ask her to pm u tom

kal check kar lena

wo link mein jo hain usse zyaada chahiye ya nahi wahi poochna haina
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ab mein chalthi hoon

bahut neend aayi

good night

sweet dreams
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



i will ask her to pm u tom

kal check kar lena

wo link mein jo hain usse zyaada chahiye ya nahi wahi poochna haina


huumm,, i cn add few more simple lines to make it lil big..
d kiddo is in 6th na ,, so no need to write a long one,, i'll put related to GC..😆 ( Ganesha Chaturthi)
Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


huumm,, i cn add few more simple lines to make it lil big..
d kiddo is in 6th na ,, so no need to write a long one,, i'll put related to GC..😆



haan 6 mein hain

and she had shown me an article which she got from gogole

patha nahi same hian ya nahi

uska size bhi ithna hi tha

and she was saying chota hain
singh24 thumbnail
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

ab mein chalthi hoon

bahut neend aayi

good night

sweet dreams


😊 Ok Bye dear..
Good nyt lakshu..
sweet dreams..




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i loved this

isi liye tumhaare liye bhi same chipkaa rahi hoo

good night
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



i loved this

isi liye tumhaare liye bhi same chipkaa rahi hoo

good night



😆😆 thanks ,, tumhari trd per bhi daal diya.. enjoy..

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