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Superb update!!!Loved Geet thinks about his care and felt secure in his arms is so lovely...Loved it so much.
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Wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan wake up seeing his angel who was holding him like her life..te way my maan ki heart swell in happiness thinking his geet trust him was lovely..te way geet felt content and seeing te note her smile was lovely..family bf was lovely..te way my maan taking his geet and seeing her restless and wen my geet said his guilty was lovely emotional..i love te update
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Loved d way d emotion was penned geet now really kknows nd accept d dis changed maan..
oh wow good start ...kisine kaha..hai..pyar dosti hai..
so dosti say shuruvat karenge...

lovly part..cont soon..

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Hi Babbie😃
Sunday🥳
Aaj poora din sone wali hu
unless koi aa jaaye😆
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Superb part
geet is accepting changed maan
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Well written! Everyone taking care of Geet! Maan is der 4 her! Manu goes with Rashi! Geet n Maan get closer! update soon
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hello my dear friends ...

Updating



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(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 105


Part - 106


Both wr in dilemma , what to say about their weird relation ,, this was not tough for Geet too but it was a Q for Maan too ,, what relation they had to take a step on a common path or to share their hearts ? To move nd walk together they had to give a name to their relation nd for that they cd start with a friendship ,, yes it wd be good if they share this beautiful bonding .

Maan held her hand in his nd pressed that with his other hand with longing ,, their was a painful faint smile on his lips ,, Geet looked puzzled at him .

Maan: Geet , I don't know how u take it but I want to request u for this ?

Geet was staring at him waiting what he was going to say .

Maan: I know , I m nothing for u nd I don't deserve this but if u think it worth , u cn mention me as ur childhood friend Or a close relative.

Geet whispered : friends ?

Maan: huummm ,, it's up to u nd ur trust ,, I feel obliged if u count me as ur friend .

Geet looked deep in his honey brown eyes which wr full of hope nd urge ,, they wr pure nd clear ,, his husky voice showing d heaviness of his heart ,, it was not he , who wd be oblige but she too was obliged for what he did for her last night ,, she was really very grateful for his timely help nd support ,, he did that without asking her .

Maan was staring at her with a hope ,, this wd be d 1st stone of her trust to pave their path nd her refusal wd push him deep in remorse ,, he was waiting for her reply .

Geet: will u value my friendship if I agreed ?

Maan: give me a chance to prove me .

Geet: what if u hurt again ?

Maan: never in my dreams .

Geet: I ... I ..

Maan pressed her hand again : trust me once .

Geet nodded with a weak smile but her eyes wr showing her hesitancy.

Maan beamed : thanks Geet ,, thanks a lot ... So from now we r friends .

He forwarded his hand to shake with her with a smile nd she reluctantly held that .

Maan: ab chalen ,, peeche driver bhi ruka hua hei .

Geet startled : Oh , sorry ,, chalo .

Maan started d car : u r forgetting Geet .

Geet: what ?

Maan: I told u not to say sorry nd thanku to me nd in friendship too there is no sorry nd no thank you ,, remember it .

Geet gave a faint smile at his remark ,, it was hard for her to became free with him ,, this was d 1st relation they wr going to accept willingly .

Both reached in office compound ,, Maan parked d car nd then told his driver to wait there ,, he told him that from now onwards he wd drive for Geet nd stayed here with d car ,, d driver agreed ,, he was in khurana's service for long nd witnessed d last night incident .

Maan: one more thing Raghavji ,, don't talk to anyone what happened last nyt ,, OK .

Driver: ji choty saab ,, aap chinta matt kijiye .

Maan gestured Geet nd both went to her office ,, still she was feeling very awkward going with Maan nd facing all d team members ,, so many Qs again .

Maan sensed : be brave Geet .,, hummm.

They wr in corridor nd passing few cubic nd offices ,, all d employees wr looking at them ,, nd girls forgot to blink after seeing MSK ,, with open mouth their eyes wr following Maan nd Geet .

She entered in her office nd offered him a seat ,, her Jr came , wished her nd Maan ,,, wow!! what a hunk Jr 's heart hopped seeing that dashing personalty in front of her nd adored Maan inwardly ,, she was gaping at him ,, Maan rolled his eyes turning his face from her nd Geet smacked her head at that lovelorn Jr. who was openly drooling at Maan in front of her ... eski to ... Geet glared at her nd then Maan nd then her jr again .

Geet: Avi ,,will u go nd inform mr john that I want to meet him ?

Avi: yes,, yes ma'am ,, anything else ,, tea, coffee for u nd sir ,, sir what wd u like to take ?

Geet nodded helplessly nd glared at her ,, Maan was in a fix in front of Geet ,, he knew girls drooled over him but he never gave a look but this was in front of Geet nd prob was that was Geet's Jr.

Geet: sir paani lenge ,, jao aur jo bola hei wo karo pahale .

Avi: yes ,, yes Ma'am .

Avi moved from there looking sideway at Maan nd bumped at d door ,, aauch ,, sorry ..

Geet angrily : kisy bol rahi ho ,, door ko ? wo padha -likha hota to tumhari jagah per hota aur tum uski .

Embarrassed Avi went out rubbing her head nd Geet glared at Maan who was looking at her with a puppy face .

Geet: essi surat ku bana rahe ho ? bulau wapas usse ?

Maan startled: aa b b ,, wo maine kya kiya ? mujhe ku ghoor rahi ho ?

Geet: ye sab tumhare office mei bhi chalta hei kya ?

Maan: Kya ?

Geet: ye , droorling over MSK ?

Maan shied nd smiled : pata nahi ,, main ye sab notice nahi kerta .

Geet: accha ,, lagta to nahi .

Maan: truly speaking Geet.

Geet gave him an annoyed look nd asked : any way , kya loge ?

Maan faking anger: etne gusse se kuch nahi ,, meeting set karo ,, kab tak aaker batayegi wo ?

Geet: ku badi jaldi hei Usse fir se dekhne ki .

Maan laughed out loud ... OMG!! Geet is getting angry if that girl is drooling at me .. so sweet .

Maan: Oh Geet , baby , she is ur Jr , kaisa staff hei tumhara ? I m not impress ,, KC's staff is well disciplined .

Geet: hummm ,, tumhara dekhungi tab rate karungi ,, apni cheej ko sab accha bataty hein .

Maan: any time Her Highness , that is MSK's office , 10/10.

Their convo broke with d call on intercom ,, it was from her head mr John ,, excuse me ,,, sure ,, Geet replied .

Geet: GM John .

J: GM Geet , come to meet me in my office .

Geet: thanks , john .

Maan was shocked , she was taking 1st name of her boss ,, he looked at her confused ,, Geet gestured him to come for meeting .


Precap --- meeting ,, coffee with Geet ...😛


Part - 107




sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome updates loved it geet is relising maan is changed maan maaneet moments were lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
waiting for next update
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