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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Eternally beautiful story!!
Welcome back to writing!!!🤗

Was so happy to see your mail!!!

And the story, was great, especially the Robots La-1-ya and AK-ash, great names!!

Now waiting to see who has captured our observer Khushi's attention,

though have a vague idea about his name!!!

You know as a Robot, la's musings and responses make more sense!!

See you soon!!
Take Care!!!

😊

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

You don't belong here. Go away.

You remind me of Tamil writer Sujata (pen name of Rangarajan), junior of Abdul Kalam at MIT.

A prolific writer who hasn't left any genre, science fiction was his forte. You may not,be able,to,read his work. They are in Tamil. You may want check his history on wiki.

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Dhokha diya mujhe. Btaya bhi nahi new OS ke baare mei😭

Res

Edited!

Trust you to come out with something unique every time!

3014...100 years from now ---I wondered ye kya hai?😆

And then as I read on, I understood certain things, not all though because of many scientific terms 😳

Khushi is a 35 year old---and la stopped there because maybe she's single and that's why its a sensitive topic for khushi?😕

And this new man they've come across is arnav, that I am sure. Waiting to see how you take the story forward😊

A.K-ash too is a robo? or her colleague?

P.S. Congratulations on completing 2 years as a writer on the forum!

P.P.S I didn't knew what the title meant and why had you written it in shades of purple and pink. So I googled it and found that it means

1.
a plant of a chiefly tropical family that includes love-lies-bleeding.
2.
a purple colour.

Which left me all the more confusing. I don't want to comment all the confusions going in my head [its embarrassing😛], so will wait for you to post the next part😊

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Param

@pup03

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

very interesting start of futuristic shot.. loved it.. happy to see you.. congrats on completing 2 years on Forum 😊

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Is there any genre you haven't written on?

Love the idea of a futuristic story.

La1ya is surely a good friend.

And now we have Arnav in the picture .

Things should get interesting .

Will be waiting for more.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

And Chaitu, Happy Second Budday! 😊

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inamajar

@inamajar

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Congrats on completing 2 yrs with various genres under your belt & here's hoping for many more.

Loving this Sci-Fi. Loved how you have weaved it around humans & robots with both their emotions. And the names you have bestowed for the Robots it is so cool. 😉

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

That was a great begining.. So ..is the new entrant Arnav..? whas his mission... Can't wait for the next update...

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

such a cute OS..loving it

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Congratulations for the two years celebration.

What a celebration yor are sharing with us an OS on Arshi. Well a futuristic OS. Long live Arshi.
Si-fi, hmmm interesting and more interesting rather creative are the robo names La-1-ya and A.K-ash.

Superb entry the the magnetic eye hero. I home his movie became a success and left the same magnetic effect.

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