A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 83

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

nice 

Originally posted by: taaD3yam

Hey..!!
Abhi read the whole story
amzing it is
M loving it:)
Very well written
starting from part1 till now the way u both escribed everything beautiful
thnxx for the pm
update soon

Originally posted by: __nidhi__

Res...

Originally posted by: SHA_85

Unpredictable

bcz after reading 1st passage i thgt ab pura upd uss par hi hoga bt no der wer so many thg

RUTNA MANANA was good
"dekho...its very simple... Ekbar tumne mujhe apni
life mein jagah de diya to mai to bhai kahi nahi
jane wala... Agar tum mujhe force bhi karo na to
leave you and go tab bhi nahi jaunga... I'll stay
here.. with you always..." He kept his head on her
head." loved dis one a lot

Sharon's POV for herself was written amazing bcz v thk vl v nt chng bt sumtym v start loving dt chng

DATE was wow
" aise mat dekho... koi farak nahi parne wala unko
even if you make faces... ignore...and just relax
okay????" he blinked his eyes in assurance..." at dis point i remember bandstand couples

N obvious highlight of d chp SLAP was bested scene u hv written

do upd jaldi jaldi waiting for it

Originally posted by: aneesha93

This was such a cute update😛. Loved the kiddish Sharon, how Sharon dressed up especially for Swayam, their first date, Sharon's view on equal responsibility and understanding Swayam. And wow, Ioved how she slapped that guy and stood up for herself. Kudos to you guys for writing it so well with no exaggeration. 

Thanks for the pm. Update soon.

Originally posted by: gsk4

AWESOME UPDATE GUYS!!! 👏👏👏 You went above my expectations. She was sitting under the shower!! Oh Boy.. I thought she would have tried to commit suicide or she would have tried to seduce swayam but dono galat nikali. Ha Ha Ha. I liked the way she fought with Swayam after that. I loved the way she dealt with the creep. But i am little old fashioned in certain things. When a guy takes a girl out for dinner i want him to pay for it even if i am independant. You have given an excellent update. 🥳 congrats both of you guys this was worth the wait. Ani hats off to you, how are you managing all these ffs together and not mixing it. 😃😃

Originally posted by: vrushanlove

It ws a cute update...sharon,i love her,crazy girl...she scared me ...but after their compromising scene ws beautiful...i loved her dialog about spoil eachother...nd that slap...grt...
I m feeling soo good after reading this update...thankyou...

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

This was good..
Love it

Sharing..good

Date or dinner???
Both it is

Well done sharon..
Great..

Thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Too good

Amazingg update...

Liked it

Thank uh for pm

Update soon

Originally posted by: lavanyalaa0

It was a lovely update..!!👍🏼
really liked the way swayam assured sharon and i also liked the sharing part...
sharon's stand for herself was cool..
 and swaron's never ending cute convos n fights are always a pleasure to read...😊
thanks for pm and update soon...😃