NaTumJaanuNaHum-ff AK,SA,PM new part5,6,7 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41

I wonder who its going to be but I think who ever its going to be is going is be the villan, maybe!!

 

I wosh I could read your mind Zara, and Zara is my cousins name she is just adorable!!

 

Continue soooooooooooooooon!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
that was a gooooodd part.. wonder who it is.. hm

i looked at the wallpaper.. its gooodd.. luved it...


continue soooooonn
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
thnx alot
i'm just gonna post the pix so read the 3rd part once agen wid pix
luv ya
zara
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
ooooh i just checked out ur wallpaper it is just AWESOMEEEEE it just ROXXXX




continue sooon



Saraa
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: rajeev_eijaz

ooooh i just checked out ur wallpaper it is just AWESOMEEEEE it just ROXXXX




continue sooon



Saraa

thnx alot i'll surely continue tomorrow😳
luv ya
zara
xx

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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
Plz continue now I really like ur fanfic!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: am_786

Plz continue now I really like ur fanfic!😳

i'll continue tomorrow😊😃
luv ya😊
zara😃
xx😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
Ohhhhhhh!! We have to wait 'till 2morrow.😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
OMG!!where did zara go u were suppose to continue today but nvm wil wait till tom!!!! 😆


continue sooon me waiting eagerly to read more!!!!



Saraa
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50

 NA TUM JAANU NA HUM FANFIC PART 4
Recap: soham enters the hotel and everyone shouts "HAPPY BIRTHDAY" he's very happy. Angad asks
mukti to dance with prem mukti but mukti refuses saying tht in college while she was dancing with prem because of him she fell down.prem forces mukti to the dance floor!

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prem grabs mukti's hand and forces her to the dance floor.
Mukti:Prem stop it!!! Mujhe pichli dafaa ki tarhan neeche nahin girna!
Prem: arey yahaan meri ex-girlfriend Arpita aayi hui hai, uss se mera break-up hogaya tha becauseshe was very irritating lekin maine us se yeh keh kar usse chora tha ke mein kisi aur ko pasand karta hoon.
Hope u understand.
Mukti:magar...
Prem: plzz Bebo
Mukti: O.K not a problem for me
Arpita comes towards prem and mukti and says
Arpita: oh to yeh hei tumhari girlfriend jiss se tum bohut pyaar kerte thhey

Prem: haan!!arpita mujhe mukti se ek baat kerni hai plzz leave us alone
Arpita:(laughs and says)yahaan to itne saare log hain agar mein chali
jaaon gi phir bhi tum mukti ke saath akele nahin hoge!!
Mukti starts giggling she thinks wht a stupid girl
Prem holds mukti tightly as to say stop giggling
Then two people enter the hotel and mukti says"Prem woh aagaye"
Both prem and mukti excuse arpita and they go towards those people
Mukti: hi kashish
Kashish: oh Hi
Sujal: hey guys hello mein bhi hoon
Prem: har jaga tu hi to nazar araha hai mujhe(laughs)
Sujal: yeah yeah
Then Sujal and Kashish wish soham a happy birthday and then they go to the dance floor and dance.
Afterwards a waiter comes and tells Anju, bebo and kripa tht someone is waiting for them oustside the hotel 
they wonder who is tht person
When they go outside they see no one but just then they hear somebody's voice coming from their back
"meine to socha tha ke ek se hi kaam chala loon ga mager yahaan to teen teen agayeen"
all the girls luk at the back and they see Manthan(yeah yeah it's ur dear prithvi but in kyunke saas his name is manthan and i like his character in the serial)

Manthan: Hi hotties
Mukti: hi naughty!(laughs) tumhein bahar rehna hai yeah ander chalna hai
Manthan: whispers into mukti's ears ander chalna hai
Mukti: khabie nahin sudhro ke tum ab ander chalein
Manthan: sure sweetheart
mukti: tum sach mein nahin badlo ge now come on in!!
Then nimmo, natasha, reeva and bhoomi(manthan's sis) also come. They are very close friends of mukti, kripa and anjali. 
Natasha: arey Reeva dekh soham tujhe dekh raha hai
Soham: Nats mere kaan bohut tez hain
Reeva: i'm already engaged(laughs)
Mukti: woh actually soham tumhein nahin dekh raha tha he has squinted eyes you see!!
Soham: wht?mukti i'm gonna kill u now
Mukti: to maar do
Soham: acha abhi aata hoon
Mukti: nahin rehne do i'm nat in the mood to fight rite now!!
Soham: chalo phir khabie(laughs)
Kripa is talking with nimmo and bhoomi when nats asks
Natasha: where's angad? uss se toh hum miley hi nahin!
Kripa: yahin kahin hoga
Then suddenly the lights dim and......................................................... ...............
Precap: mukti akss prem to bring ice-cream for her when prem cums back with the ice-cream he sees tht mukti's nat in the car!!!!!!!

hope u liked this part

luv ya

zara

xx