REVIEW FOR STORY-3The story was overall very interesting and gripping.
The conversation between Freddy and Acp sir in the beginning was very good. Nice to read something like this as we don't get much of it in CID now. Same goes with Duo, very nice convo.👏
What i like most about the story is that you connected it with the real world, giving correct information about certain things like adopting procedures, masks and others. Lovely 👏⭐️
The story though was moving nice but i felt it as a fast paced one but very honestly i loved the fast pace. It made the story interesting and easy to read and it finished early.😛
Investigation was nice and easy to follow.👏⭐️
You bring out the true nature of society and these country relations as it's very true that to maintain relations criminals are set free.👏⭐️I will say it again, i loved how you connected your story with the real world rather with the virtual one.
I missed action badly..😛 some of it would have made the story almost perfect.!⭐️
What i still wanted was some more detailed stuff. Like daya and freddy completely went missing from the scene, you could have shown them investigating too.
Purvi was also absent almost throughout the story.
In the end i felt the environment becoming too much dull.
A nice funny scene would have worked greatly.😳
somehow, since i now know who is the writer i missed the true essence of her stories..😳
I am really very sorry if it hurts the writer in anyway.
I apologize in advance, i am really not aware what to say and what to not so i said simply what i felt.😳
Thank you for such a nice story.😊
RATING-8/10
THE WRITER IS INDEED AWESOME!
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