Aditya Srivastava & Ansha Sayed B'day - Story Contest Rating - Page 4

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Yaar, main Apnay reviews dun tou koi Hurt tou nahi hoga...

SHERYU and VIS DII...

Plz tell me...🤔

yes. Because you didn't mention third participant. You assumed that that person won't be hurt

Originally posted by: visrom

yes. Because you didn't mention third participant. You assumed that that person won't be hurt

Edited by gadhadada - 9 years ago

Finally read all the stories...really liked them.all were excellent...hat's off to you Writers...👏👏.I proud to be a part of this forum...😛

Ratings-

Story 1- 8/10

Story 2- 9/10

Story 3-8.5/10

will give my reviews later

Originally posted by: gadhadada

RONA nahi baad mein...😉

Buht SAKHT. Review aany wala hay...😈

Will read and rate soon :) 

STORY 1
     The kidnapped Officer

very nice story...sharp mind of writer in showing investigation by a Sharp Cop👏👏
l enjoyed Abhijeet part a lot😛 Purvi's efforts to free herself were mindblowing...and yeah,she freed by herself and without any help...😛👏 i was impressed how Purvi left message for Abhijeet and later he tried to hide it...just awesome...👏 firing scene was nice,and at last smiling Duo...😛 really liked the end.overall a nice story,enjoyed a lot reading it.great work by Writer...👏👏



      STORY - 2

wow..wow...wow...👏 First Scene was superb.no words to say how beautifully you described Lord Narsimha story..loved it😛👏
well,i think i can guess who you are...😛
liked each and every part of your story...disguised scene of the team were awesome specially Purvi and Abhijeet.loved the convo...😛 team's sympathy and trust on Purvi was nicely shown and it was really heart touching...I was lost in ur amazing words...😊
Purvi and Freddy together doing investigation..loved it...And the last scene wow Purvi and Abhijeet in full action...liked it most...👏 superb...😛 and the line "Abhijeet as hunting Lion" wow loved it...😛 really enjoyed a lot reading your story...great mind,great work...👏👍🏼



       STORY - 3
   Kabhi khushi kabhi gum

starting was nice...loved the convo between Duo...and others.😛 actually i have a confusion or i think i missed anything...did Duo check that tent properly when they met with those two boys in jungle.😕 btw,i liked that scene...Poor Abhijeet Sir,had to perform the duty of 3 officers...He he i really enjoyed how Abhijeet did Ulta Pulta with the team distribution...and ACP sir's dialogue "hey bhagwan" was fantastic 😆 Abhijeet Sir you are great...😛 liked the team investigation to find that mask and the waiter Pradeep,i wish the ending to be more pleasant,but really liked the story...awesome work by the Writer...👏👏😛
OMG,now i will try to read all the stories here...
You Writers are brilliant...👏👏 i have realised it now...😛
one more thing,i m not as expert as others in pointing out loopholes if any...that's why i never participate in episode discussion...i m sorry if i hurt anyone's feelings...first time,i have given my fb on stories...😊

Edited by gadhadada - 9 years ago

Edited by gadhadada - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada

I knew mostly People are Angry and some telling that I Disrespect UR SKILLS and UR STORY too...

But I compare it with all Ur Other Stories and Boss I knew aap isy Casual lo gay...😳😳

koi Personal base pr nahi lo gay...😳😳

is REview ka Link sirf Meri Apni Soch say hay n just with this Story...😊

I m So Sorry from Bottom of My Heart with U and Ur All fans but Yes I find it Not Upto that Bench Mark which U already made by Ur Absolutely Fabulous Work...⭐️⭐️⭐️

I knew U are One of those GEMS, Forum have...⭐️🤗

sso No hard Feelings Boss...😳🤗

i m again Very Sorry...😳😳

Thank You so much...😳😳