virika ff meri jindagi ab tum hi ho

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi m dolly totally new so i tried to write a FF ON VIRIKA
I REALLY MISS THEM
VIRIKA FF MERI JINDAGI AB TUM HI HO!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHARATERS SAME IN THE SERIAL
HRISHIKESH
madan jivika chachu- hame kuch karna parega nahitoh yeh verma hamarasab kuch le lenge
beeji- tum thik keh rahe ho, kuch toh karna parega, tumnekuch socha hain?????????
madan- haan chandigarh ke bare lawyer vijaysingh vadera se baat ki hain, unohene apne bade pote viren jo ki bahuat bade lawyer hain wo ladenge
beeji- par ,unki fees
madan- wo log paise nei sach ka saath dete hain ,kal main unse milne chandigarh ja raha hun
beji=- thk hain
jivika ko saathle jao
madan-thk hain beeji
chandigarh
dadaji-viren kal kuch log hrishikesh se aa rahe hain ,unka case tumhe ladna hoga
viren-ji,kaun aa raha han
dadaji-madan choudary aur unki bhatiji jivika
viren- thk hain
next day at viren ofice
madan n jivika arrived at his office
madan-mam, viren vadehra ke saath meri appointment hain
recepiontist -ok, aap yaha se left jaye n u ll gt ii
jivika - thank u
they went to viren cabin
jivika-xuseme,
viren- yes he looked at her n as mesmerised by her beauty
jivika-xuseme
viren- ji
madan- hum hrihikesh se aaye hain
viren -haan wo dadaji ne bola tha
madan- ye meri bhatiji jivika,ise is case se related sab pata hain
viren- hi
jivika- namste
viren was happy that now he can spend tym with her
madan, jivika,virendisscussed aboout the case
viren- main sab kuch dekh liya hain ,dnt worry sab thk ho jayega
jivika- thank you,n aapki fees
viren - fees ,jis din hum yeh case jit jayenge us din
waise aaplog apna address n phn no de de , koi problem hone se i ll tell u?
madan- ji thk hain, wo hum paradise hotel mein ruke hain n yeh no
viren- hotel mein,yhk hain
madan n jivika left
viren was only remembering jivika ' beauty suddenly jivika came
jivika- woh mera phn
viren - haan woh yeh lo
jivika- thak u
viren - u r vlcum
jivika- bye
v- bye!!!!!!!!!!
precap- viren ws unable to sleep!!!!!!!!!!!!
i knw m nt a gud writer as u r all, i dnt knw how to send pms so pls gelp me out!!!!!
i wish u all lyk it n pls say can i continue or no!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
nice start dear:)
continue soon:)
I really liked it :)
love at first sight ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
here is second part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
part 2
virika ff meri jindagi ab tum hi ho
viren came to house with a huge smile on his face he was very happy n he dont knw wat the reason for this
virat-kya hua bhai?? aap toh bara smile kar rahe hain?
viren- nthng lyk dat
virat-kuch toh hain
viren - shutup
viren in his room thinking about jivika
viren (to himself) yeh kya ho raha hain mujhebe calm warna ghar mein tujhe koi nei chorega
everyone at dining table
dadaji_viren tum unse mile? meeting kaisi rahi?
viren- han bahuuat achi thi woi log bahuat ache the jivika ji bhi bahut achi hain
dadaji-aur case?????
viren realised what he ws saying
viren- wo bhi thk thi
everyone laughed at his bheaviour
viren room
he ws abt to sleep bt could not sleep whenever he closes his eyes he sees jivika
viren (to himself) oh god pls help me out
suddenly his phone rang
viren-hello
jivika-hello main jivika
viren fell from his bed- aahhh!!!!!!!!!!
jivika-kya hua??
viren- kuch nei aap bolo
jivika- wo chacha ji ko kuch kaam tha to wph chale gaye is liye kal aap mujhse baat kar lijyega ka; kitnebaje aur kaha?????
viren- ok! well kal meri ek meeting hain toh hum uske baad milenge kal 12 baje COFFEE SHOP
JIVIKA - OK!!!!!!!!! bye gud nyt
viren- ok ! vl aapko koi problemhain toh boleyega pls aap akli hain
jivika - matlab
viren- matlab aap is seher mein nayi hain naa
jivika- ok thank u
viren- gud nyt
next day at COFFEE SHOP
jivika ws waiting for viren n she ws luking beautiful in her red salwar suit
viren came
J- Hi
V-hi aap kaisi hain
J- m ok aur aap?//
V- gud
J- is case mein kitna waqt lagega
V- maine case study kia hain jalg sab ho jayega
J- mera yaha rehnajaruri hain
V-matlab
J-wo main yahaakelihun, chachaji ko 7 din lagenge yaha aane mein so
V-toh
J- main kabhi akli nei rahi naa
viren ws thinking wat to do he cant let jivika go so easily
J - kya hua
V- aap mere ghar mein rahiye
waha sab hain meri maa , bua , dadaji.n sab aapko aacha lageage
J- aapke ghar nei nei
V - kuyn nrei dnt worry sab waha insaan hi hain
J- mera wo matlab nei tha,wo aapke gharwale kya sochenge
V- kuch nei they r very nyc
J- ok
virika reached vadhera mansion
every one ws sitting
( viren hadalready informed vanshika about this n shetold every one)
eveyone greeted her nicely
she lyked eveyone n everyone lyed her
vanshika- tum kitni sundar ho jivika
J- ji thank u
virat-aach toh aap hain jisne bhai
ki neeend
viren stops him
J- ji kya j\kaha aapne
Viren- wo yeh virat hain mera chota bhai pagal hain
J- no its ok he is gud
jiviuka went to guest room
vanshika to viren- aachi ladki hain sundar bhi hain aur bahuat pyaari bhi
viren ws blushing n ws happy dat everyone lykd her
i knw it ws nt gud bt m tryng mylevel best
plslyk n comment!!!!!!!!!!!
pre cap-jivika cooked for them n everyone praised her
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
this was really good!
I loved it dear :)
keep continuing :) I will help u in sending PM and promoting this story when my exams will finish !
pkka till then keep continuing :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
awesome start
cannot wait to read more
please pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Just found your story..
Loved it
Awesome
Do continue and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
part 3
virika ff meri jindagi ab tum hi ho
jivika ws nw in vadhera house
next day in mornong
jivika woke up early , when she ws going she saw vanshika in kitchen n
J -gud morning aunty
vanshika-gud morning
J- main kuch kar du
vanshika- nei sab ho gaya, vl agar tum chaho toh aaj ka lunch bana do
jivika- ji
breakfast ho gaya
viren ws in house as jivika ws there
jivika- viren ji aapne bulaya ,kuch kaam tha
viern- haan wo case ke baare mein
they disscussed about it...
jivika- thanks a lot
viren- thanks ,y?
jivika- meri itni help karne ke liye
viren - its ok yeh mera farz hain
she leaves
jivika prepare lunch for everybody
at lunch tble
everyone ws there...
viren - kya kushboo hain
every one had their lunch
virat- really food ws tasty
everone praised the lunch
vanshika- aaj ka sara khana jivika ne banaya
viren - wow jivika food ws amazing'. he ws praising her a lot in front of everyone
jivika- thank u (felling awkward)
every one laughed at his innoncence
viren ws happy dat everyone liked jivika
7 days ho gaye
jivika's chachu came
madan chacha-(to vadheras) aap sab logo ka dhanyabad jivika ka khayal rakhne ke liye...
dadaji- wo bahuat aachi ladki hain
madan chachu-ji
next day ws case day
in morning jivika ws scared n viren came to her
viren- dnt worry
jivika- hmm all the best
they went to court n viren won the case
jivika ws very happy she thanked viren
madan chachu-thank u viren ji aapne hamre liye itna kiya
viren- isme thanks kaisa, yeh merta farz tha,
madan n dadaji were talking
virika ws standing n seeing each other
jivika- well aap bahuat aache lawyer hain,well aapki fees
viren- fees?
jivika-aapne kaha tha na case jitne ke baad aapki fees
viren -haan wo chaliye bata dunga
in vadhera house
everyone congraluted viren
madan chachu- ab hum chalte hain
dadaji- aaj hi
chachu- haan wo sab waha wait kar honge
dadaji- kal chale jayega,
chachu- par wo ghar mein jaruri kaam , agli baar pakka
dadaji- thk hain,
viren nw realised dat jivika will go nw n ws sad
jivika took blessings from elders n saty bye to viren,virat, slok...
viren- okk take care
jivika- thanks a lot wat u have done for me...
they left...😊
viren was lost. he didnt eat n went to his room😭😭😭
noone understood wat happend to him
i knw this update ws boring but i ll try next part to be nyc...pls lyk comment...😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Awsm
Loved it
Aww viren already missing jeevs
Continue soon and send me a buddy request..
Also add me in ur pm list

Edited by MyKryan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
i had tym so so hought to write the the nex part...
part 4
virika ff meri jindagi ab tum hi hoi
at hrshikesh
everyone was happy dat they won the case...n they got wat they yhey needed
beeji- main bahuat khush hun ki hame apna sabkuch wapas mil gaya
madan- haan beeji aur iska sara credit viren ko jata hain , hain na jivika
jivika- han chachu virenji nei hote toh pata nei kya hota aapko pata hain beeji unohene bahuat mehnatki. wo bahuat ache insaan hain he is the best
manvi- kya baat hain di us wakil ki itni taarif
jivika- aisa kuch nei hain main toh bas...
manvi- haan aur bolo...
jivika- chup kar suddenly viren calls jivika
jivika- hello
manvi- kiska phn hain di
jivika- woo viren ji ka
manvi- ohhh
jivika to viren- haan boliye
viren-jii aap kaisi hain aur sab
jivika- sab thk hain
viren- aur boliye
jivika- aap chachu se baat kijiye
viren- parrr...
madan- hello beta
viren- namste chachu
madan- kaise hainaap?
V-thk hi hun
msdan-beta tumne hamri bahuat madad ki aur fees bhi nei li. par tumhe hrhikesh aana hoga hame khatir karne ka maka do
viren -ji jarur ab rakhta hun
madan- ji beta bye
after 1 week
viren n virat were in hrsikesh
they stayed in hotel
viren called madan this tym
Vi-namste chachu
madan- beta kaise ho
Vi-thk hun vl hrishikeh aaya hun kisi kaam se(he came only for jivika)
madan-acha hain tum aaye ho toh hamre ghar ruko
Vi-nei nei
madan-pls beta
Vi- thk hain ,lekin mera bhai bhi hain
madan- haan haan pata hain
madan gives addresses to viren
viren n virat in jivika"s home
jivika- namste to viren n hi to vira
tv bros met everyone n everyone lykd them
manvi- toh aap hain viren di aapki tarif karte nei thakti
virat- vl bhai bhi jivika bha.i mean ji ki tarif karte nei thakte
manvi- aap se pucha aap kaun
virat- me the virat
manvi n virat as usual start arguing
virika stooped them
jivika- aapko yaha dekh ke acha laga
viren- aap mujhe miss kar rahi thi
jivika- haan wo nei,main toh bas
viren(laughing) - aur batiye
jivika- kya
viren- wo lunch mein kya hain
jivika- ji
viren - ji
jivika- aap kya khayenge
viren - joo aap khilayenge
jivika- ji...
she went to kitchen
: imp note: everyone in vadhera house knew y viren went to hrishikesh for jivika
j precap-viren prospes jivika
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Awesome update
Precap seems interesting..
Continue soon..

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