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millee18 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Nice story ! Loved all parts
Cont soon
Do pm me !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Part 3
Nice update
Viren missing jeevika
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Part 5
Nice update
Loved it
Y jeevika didn't answer
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

part 6

virika ff meri jindagi ab tum hi ho.
jivika was crying.(manvi enters)
M-di kya hua kuyon ro rahi ho?
J-kuch nei
M-ohh. vl di viren ji.ju ne diya hain.
J-kya kaha tune viren jiju. tu pagal hain
M- haan aapke honewale wo mere jiju hue na
J-chup kar kuch bhi bolti hain
M- thk hain agar aap unhe pasand nei karti toh yeh letter aapke liye kuch nei hain main ise phek deti hun
J-nei...nei yeh kya kar rahi hain
M- toh iska matlab hain ki.
J- iska kuch matlab nei hain.mujhe bas letter de aur ja yaha se
M-nei dungi pehle bolo u lyk him .i mean love him...
J-uff de na...(she insists a lot)
manvi gives the letter n goes
jivika reads the letter
dear jivika,
i luv u a lot jis din se tumhe dekha maine tumhe pasand kiya hain u r vry nice. pehle mujhe laga sayad yeh attraction hain par jab tum chandigarah se gayi toh i started missing u a lot bahuat ajeeb lagta tha.maine apne aap ko bahuat rokne ki koshish ki par rok nei paya isliye main hrishikesh aaya tumse milkne apne dil ki baat kahne aur maine tumse sab keh diya par tumne koi jawab nei diya mujhe galat mat samajhna pls ...is letter ko padhe ke baad tumahra jo bhi faisla hoga i will respect that. ghar mein yeh baat meri mom,chachi aur virat ko pata hain sab tumhe pasand karte hain. lekin mujhse jayada nei...
i luv you...❤️❤️
apna khyal rakhna.
viren...
jivika has tear on her eyes she ws in her thoughts
she kept the letter inside her diary
after 2 days...
chandigarah...
viren was in office
viren(tto himself) oh god 2 din ho gaye jivika ne kuch kaha nei manvi ne wo letter diya toh hoga kya hua hoga kahi sabko pata toh nei chal gaya ya phr uske ghar wale uski kahi aur toh nei..
nei nei aias nei ho sakta he was in his chain of thoughts n thendecided to call jivika
hrishikesh
jivika was in school her phone rang she didnt saw the name n picked it...
jivika- hello
viren- hello
end of this part ab iske aage kya hoga it totally depend on yr esponses...
pls lyk n comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Amazing update..
Loved it
Waiting for jeevika's reply
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
awesome update loved it continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Amazing
great update but it's very short
How beautiful viren tell about his feelings on latter :)
Superb
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
it was too short but nice update
plz make it big next time!
aww jeevika was crying whole time!
hope she says yes to viren soon!
continue soon
waiting for it

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
loved ur update !
it was short nd sweet .
do cont soon !v
plz pm me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
part 7
virika ff meri jindagi ab tum hi ho
j-hello
v-hello main viren
j- haan wo.
v-i know mera phone karna tumhe acha nei laga hoga but main kya karu 2 din ho gaye tumne koi jawab nei diya isliyemaine socha ki main khud phn kar lu. tum soch rahi hogi kaisa ladka hain yeh toh piche hi par gayapareshaan kar rakha hain par main aisa nei hun(he was continuosly speaking)
j-(cut him off )I Luv you.
viren was silent
j- i luv you
v- wat
j- i luv you
v- really
j- haan i luv you i luv you...a lot
v- i luv you 23456many times
j- haan pata chal gaya mujhe
v- toh ab tak kaha kuyon nei
v- wo main
v- kya
j- aap bolenedenge
v- sorry bolo
j-mujhe samajh mein nei aa raha tha ki kya karu do din se isi uljhan mein hun ki kya bolu.
v- iska matlab agar main call nei karta toh tum nei bolti
j- haan
v- kya haan.tum toh ajeeb ho thank god mainephn kiya nei toh
j-nei toh
v-main mar jata
j-shshsh..dubara mat bolna pls.
v-ok...I luv you
j- ok now bye
v- itni jaldi
j- han mujhe kaam hain jana hain
v- par
j-sry
v- ok lekin main tumse milne aa raha hun
j- kya
v- kya nei kal milne aa raha hun bas
j- par
v- par war kuch nei i want to meet u , hug u n kis.( he stops)..
j- ji
v- kuch nei just mera intzaar karo
jivika was happy to meet viren but she was scared too...
viren was very happy .he came home happily, smiling n singing
virat saw him n asked
vi-kya hua bhai
v- kuch nei
vi-kuch toh baat hain
v- kuch nei kaha na
vi- ohh samjha bhabhi ne mana kardiya is liye aap pagal toh nei ho gaye
v- tu pagal hain kuch bhi bolta hain.are usne haan bol diya aur main usse milne ja raha hun
vi-par gharwale aur aap waha? ghar mein kya bolego?
v- wo kya hain jab kisi chiz ko dil se chaho toh use puri hone se koi nei rok sakta kal meri meeting hain hrisikeh mein so...
vi- vl gud aap toh pure pagal ho gaye ho vl aapne mom ko bola
v- nei waha se aaunga pura conform ho jau use I LUV YOU kehte hue sunu dekhu tab
vi- ohhh
v- bye packing karni hain...
he leaves...
end yhis part. i knw this is short but sweet na...

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