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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
read all the update
awesome update continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
woah!! wow i just read two parts together!!
real;ly thank u for sending me PMs
i really appreciate it!
and i m free from now!
i can help u out!
plz continue soon!
u r nice writer
all will love this story so much! <3
continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

i will update on saturday or sunday...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
So today is sunday when r u going to update??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
i was busy so cud nt update
but i promise its soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
part 5
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virika ff meri jindagi ab tum hi ho
in these days jivika also started lyking viren...they use to talk a lot...she want to tell her feelings but she was quiet .due to some reasons...lots of thought came to her mind...n she was ignoring them but couldnot stop herself in front of viren...
virik n viraman were roaming in hrishikesh...virat n viren were happy to see such a nyc place as today was the last day ofv bros in hrishklesh so they went for a walk
viren had made up his mind that he will tell his feelings to jivika
virika
viren- jivika
jivika- ji
viren- main tumse kuch kehna chahata hun
J-kahiyeh
V-wo wo main...tumhe main kaisa lagta hun
J-ji matlab
V-matlab ki main kaisa insaan hun aur koi ladki mujhe kyun pasand karegi
J-aap bahuat ache hain us ladki jindagi savar jayegi jo aapse shaadi karegi. aap bahuat hi samajhdaar ho,dil ke saaf ho aap mein family values hain, n u r amazing aap ek ache life partner saabit honge
V-well thank you meri itni taarif karne ke liye...main kuch kehna chata tha
J- haan kahiyeh
V- i luv you
J-was slient
V- i luv you
say something
J-aap yeh kya keh reh hain
V- I LUV YOU...main tumse bahuat pyar karta hun
suddenly viraman come
manvi- di kya hua?///
J-kuch nei
M-viren ji kya hua??????/
J- maine kaha na kuch nei chal .aap bhi chaliyeh(to viren n virat)
jviren was speechless n was angry to virat
virat - bhai kya hua
viren- kuch nei chal
at home.
viren want to talk to jivika as he was leaving tomorrow morning
jivika was in kitchen preparing dinner
viren saw her n went to her n was about to ask her but his luck
chachi-jivika
jivika- ji chachi
chachi- are viren tum yaha
V-haan woh pani pine aaya tha
chachi-oh
dinner table
it aws a slient
viren tried whole day to speak to her but in vain...
at night
jivika was in her thoughts...
jivika (herself) kya karu kuch samajh mein nei aa raha hain viorenji mujhse pyar.yaken nei ho rahahain
beeji ko pata chalega toh kya hoga kya karu...sab kya sochenge ...
she slept
in morning
viren n virat was leaving
everyone was there but jivika was no where
viren gave a letter to manvi secretly to give it to jivika...
virat n viren left...
after 2 hours
jivika woke up n she saw the tym it was 10am she hurried up n went to see viren
beeji- tu uth gayi aaj bahuat late ho gaya tujhe
jJ- woh haan...
she was searching for viren but in vain
suddenly manvi came
manvi- di wo log chale gaye
J-kya...
M-han woh chale gaye
jivika went to her room
manvi-di di
jivika was crying...
end of this update...
i knw it wasboring again.but as this is my first FF so guys pls bear it...do lyk n comment
it takes lot of effort to write it so plss.]
sorry for grammitical errors...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update loved it
totally it is superb
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
woah!i loved this update!❤️
viren telling jeevs that he loves her...aww😳
viren went and jeevika crying😭
why didnt she answered i m wondering!😕
nicely written👏
but it was too short😉
plz make it big next time!😃
continue soon😊🤗

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Lovely update
Viren prapose jeevika...
Awsame
amazing
Next time pls pm me :)
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Awesome update..
Loved it👏
Aww...viren proposes jeevika..😳
But why didn't she answer..
Viren went to chandigarh..😕
Really eager to know what did viren wrote in the letter which he has left for jeevika..😊
Hope virika meet soon😉
Continue soon

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