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Posted: 10 years ago
wht a killer suspense...plz try 2 post nxt part soon...u r an awsome writer...:) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
wat a superb story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U r truly an awesum writer!!!!!!!!!!
the future DURJOY DUTTA!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow.. Awesome...
Loved all the sandhir scenes..
Update next part ASAP..!!:):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
thnk u so much to evry1...
part 26
parth jiggy and arjun cmes in the garden here no one is present...they sit on a bench...
parth:listen arjun...i knw ki tumdono k beech misunderstanding hui hai...bt i also blve k tum uske acche dost ho...so i am trusting u...is competion...dream team competition mei aise bohot kuch abhi kar sakta hai to distract hr...mei aur jiggy try karte rahenge use dur rakhne k liye per aftr us i cn trust u...
arjun:thnks...and i promise k mujhse jitna ho sake mei karunga...
parth:hmmm so tum ko pata hi hoga sanyu kaisi jhalli type ki hai per andar se bohot naram...wo scul mei humesha hamare sath hi rahti thi...larkiyo k sath bhi hoti thi per kam...cls 12 mein hamara fest tha...aur unfortunately mei us waqt bahar tha ...isiliye sanyu ko naya partner mila abhimanyu...teacher ka pair tut gayi thi isiliye abhi..use salsa sikhane wala tha aur dono dance bhi karne wale the...abhi naya tha...uske dost zyada nhi the...dhire dhire sanyu use friend bana liya...humare gang k sath bhi ate rahe...wo flirt bhi karta tha...ek din propose bhi kiya...per sanyu ne mana kardiya...phir bhi wo use impress karne ki chnce nhi chorta tha...phir fest k din unhone dance kiya...wo dean ne video jo dikhaya tha...sanyu bhi dhire dhire use accept karli...jab mujhe pata chala meine use samjhaya per uska trust bohot strong tha...ekdin sanyu k bhai ko pata chala k wo dono ek dusre ko pyar karte hai...tab uske bhai ne use data per chorne k liye nhi kaha...uske bhai ko sirf fikar thi...usdin k bad se abhi use ignore karta chala gaya aur sanyu affct hone lagi...uski 2nd moc bhi kharap hui...hum sab ne use abhi k bareme hint dete gaye ki wo accha nhi hai per wo koi na koi reason dhund k hume galat proof karti thi...phir aya last din...(tells the whole thing)(i am strting frm where sanyu's flashback ended)principal na sab suna tha...unhone sanyu ko cabin me bulaya.use extra cls attend karne se bhi mana kiya...teachers ko pata chala ki sanyu ladke logo ko ghumati hai...jiggi tabse usko supprt karta gaya ...mein aur jiggy use samjhate gaye...phir xam khatam hui result aya...sanyu 1st ayithi...principal bohot khush the...shayad wo yehi chahte the...results k din sabko abhi ka sachai pata chali...thanks to jiggi...usne record kar liya tha uski bate ki usne sanyu ko apne lust k liye use kiya per kuch kar nhi paya tha kyu ki humesha mei ya koi aur aa jata tha...isiliye abhi mujhe pasand nhi karta tha...sanyu k bareme siway mere aur jiggy ko nhi pata tha ki wo kaha chali gayi...usne khud ko un sre chizo se dur rakha jise abhi ki yad aaegi dance,holi,baki dost...mujhe aj bhi yad hai jb princi ne  use congratulate kiya tha to unhone bataya tha ki kabhi apne ap ko sabke bato se ghayal mat karna...agr dekho ki tumhara trust kisine tora hai chahe wo dost ho,pyar ho ya teachers, humesha khud pe trust karna...tabse sanyu sirf hum dono se contact rakhti hai...thank u tum sabko...bhi 
jiggy:ha aur aj bhi wo abhi kuch na kuch karna chahta tha thnks tum samay per pohoch gaye...aur wo age bhi karega per hamare pas uske against koi proof nhi hai...
arjun:hmmm...i will try my bst...ab chalte hai jiggy...(to himself...mujhe pata hai...use dance,holi uski passion aur abhi ko ulta jawab kaise karwana hai...)
DAY 1
all the dancers r standing near a build up stage...a woman:so ap sab ko solo dance karna padega...per hum apko gane denge...
SANYU GTS KAMLI...
woman:ap logo ke pass 30 min hai ...uske bad yaha pe competition strt hoga...
sanyu rum mei jati hai aur pura kamre ka chakkar katne lagti hai
vids:kya hai sanyu...
sanyu:mujhe kamli gana mila hai...aur 30 min...kaise karungi...kya karungi upar se mcp ko challenge kiya hai...
kausto:chil streches kar
sanyu:sare haddiya sakt ho gaye hai...
arjun:haddiya to sakt hi hote hai...(he enters their rum follwd by jiggy)
sanyu:dekho me mazak k mud me nhi hu...aur tum to khush hi hoge ...tumhara bhai jo challenge jeet jayega...
arjun:ha to mei kya kar sakta hu agar koi apne dance pe focus na kare...apne pichle dance performance focus na kare apni confidense na dikhaye apna passion bhul gayi ho...mera bhai jitega hi na...
jiggy:ha point
sanyu:tu mera dost hai ya unka
kausto:kya yar sanyu 10 min hai ready to ho...
sanyu:per me pehnu kya...
vids shows a tank top and a hot pant :ye le ye pehen...perfect hogi...
sanyu:pehle mei dance pe hi focus nhi kar pa rhi hu aur upar se ye kamre...aur tum ladke jao...aur ha randhir ko mere samne aane se mana karna...
boys goes...
sanyu gts ready...she wre the tnk tp bt she wore a lose top abve it fr which one sleeve ws hangng frm hr shoulders...she wre skin tight lagins and the hot pants...
she ws on hr way to stage bt collided wid randhir again...
sanyu:kya yar...tumhe takrana zaruri tha...
randhir:kyu dar lag raha hai ki tum harogi...ya phir man chuki ho ki tumhara koi chnce nhi hai...mene suna tum kamli pe dance karogi...poor song...kitni bezzati hogi...
sanyu:u mcp...jst wait and watch
randhir:realy???bt i dnt hav time to waste on u...so bad luck and gud luk harne k liye...and they goes in their directions...where arjun comes out frm a rum all smiling...plan succesful...
sanyu is on stage...she luks around...so many people staring at her...even dat abhi...she luked hr left...hr frnds were standing wishing them bst of luck...
she only remebered princi's last talk and randhir's challenge and the song started...dere she also started and wo...her first few steps really attacted people and dey strted hooting...parth:bang on...sanyu is back...
dere randhir ws coming out of rum...wen he heard some1
sme1:abey chal jaldi chal kamli gane pe kya nach rhi hai larki...
randhir:farzi ...and he ran towrds the stage...he cross through the huge crowd gathered and stud dere in frnt...his mouth ws wide apart seeing hr perfect flips and stretches...randhir:(in mind)nt bad...ye sachme achi karti hai...iski ankhn me dekh ke pata chal raha hai ki dance uska passion hai...
sanyukta finishes her dance wid a flip and thud on the floor ...she did it perfectly...
host:wo wo...dat ws the last perfrmance and it is r8 to say dat bst is alwys kpt at last...
sanyu goes to hr frnds where they were standing ...nt standing bt jumping wid hapines...bt she ws stpd  in btwn ...
precap:basketbl match
speling mistakes ho to blna...jaldi me likha hai...aur recheck nhi kiya...sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey anisha !!!! am first !!!!
awesome update 
i just loved it
 u nailed it beautifully
sanyu's dance is just awesome 
overall it was fantastic 
thanks for d pm!!!
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊It was excellent..😊👏⭐️
continue asap..
Edited by kiru2992 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update 
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part nxt part be upload na pls...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...anisha,,,,Kamli,...my favourite!!!!!!!!
Superb choice!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooow...i cn imagn tht dance!!!! Haaawwt hoga...post asap...