AShlok FF - Fifty shades of Shlok Agnihotri - Part 1 to 15 - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update, so she has been living with someone and he is curious...interesting...cant believe she blurted out the question about whether he had a gf...looking forward to your next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg this shlok is just after astha to satisfy his lust.
He is such a jerk. Poor aastha is falling for him.
He don't deserve her. Hating him alot.
Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
what an update. you are a talented writer, i like this version better than the actual novel to be honest.😊
waiting eagerly 4 ur next update? do u update everyday or just now and then?
can u pm me next time please,thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice Story...
wow..this Shlok much dangerous than the one we have in the show πŸ˜•
Edited by asthak - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aparna, great job as usual, I was actually imagining avinash and shrenu as I was reading this. Look forward to reading more. πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice...great going.. continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update aparna 
Loved it
Hope astha understands soon about shlok before falling into his trap
And get hurt
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Yeah I guess so...I will try n read the entire trilogy once I get some free time😊 nice update dear continue soon😊

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I totally totally get you...I too wanted to abandon after the first instance of the violence but then you should have coninued...you know by the third book she will b totally in control...he will b putty in her hands, that was the beauty of the whoie thing πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 10 years ago
The story getting interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesomee yaaar Loveeed it <3 keeep it up :D