AShlok FF - Fifty shades of Shlok Agnihotri - Part 1 to 15 - Page 17

it was awsum updates dear..
love ashlok scene..

loved reading every word. lovely updatee👏👏👏

Nice going, the web is starting to be weaved for Shlokie's parlor for astha! Thank you for the back to back update - like an apple a day keeps the doc away, an update a day from you keeps our boredom away ;) - jk, can empathize with the effort and time and least we can give in appreciation is our patience. Eagerly waiting for your next update.

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower

I totally understand your feelings...I too found certain things unacceptable in the 50 shades...and I don't think this will be as dark as the original one..and if you don't like my work you can always bash me 😆😉

super ...possesive shlok

omg i cant wait for next 

wow...although i read "Fifty shades of Grey" , i like your story writing on Shlok and Astha. Shlok is very well potraited as Christian Grey. Cannot wait for Part 4. Are you updating tomorrow?

Awesome...eagerly waiting for next update...😛😳

wow I am loving it so much.
its awesome.
cont.soon.

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower

Yep yep yep...all in good time :)