NEW ASHLOK FF NEW MOON part 7 NEW UPDATE!21 PG - Page 6

Oh I just love this storyline, and please update asap, as you have ended the chapter in such an interesting part. Looking forward to hopefully a quick update

It was short... but please do make up for it in the next update...

it is so nice to see a cute childrenantics. 

further to my previous comment, just wanted to add that aasthas reaction was very good...we imagine 101 things to say but when we see someone like in this situation, its hard to predict how your body will react, i know for one i hyperventilate or have really fast pulse rate and so i think aasthas reaction of fainting was perfect, and you worded it really well.

Lovely update. Like your idea for the story. Curious to know what will happen next...

nice update... waiting for more...😊

really Gud..yaar waiting for next part update soon..

nice story. 😊 plz  continue it yar..waiting eagerly for next update

really good..really xcited 2 see reactn of Shlok when he see Aastha n kids!!

oh alok is xerox copy of shlok