Hey ppl i am totly new to this forum...i actually am nt vry active around here cuz its my 12th...bt still a story crept into my mind...this story is based on d cureent track...bt only focuses on ASHLOK...i am going to start this story after shloks and aasta's honeymoon...!!!!
Character sketch is the same
Prologue
Aastha is very disturbed and is lost in her very own world and stirring the mixture which was initially sheera bt nw a mass of burnt sticky sooji...bt still aastha was continually stirring it
"yeh kaise hogaya aastha...kaise?"aasta shouted to herself covring her face in her hand...tears endlessly streaming dwn frm her eyes
FLASBACK
"Aastha ur pregnant " said gauri happily aastha's frnd and her gynaecologist
Aastha was shocked but she somehow faked happiness and left frm there
All her's and shlok's intimate moments came into her mind...she went all the way to resist every feeling of her towards shlok and she was successful to...but at the last day of their return at a party the two of them got drunk and thn all this mess happened...the next morning shlok very easily tossed the matter to trash telling that it was a MISTAKE
Aastha was the only one who was at loss and she cried over the incident for almost a month...but now after hearing this news she just wanted to die...!!
FB ENDS
"aaahhh" she shouted in frustration and fell on the ground and cried helplessly
"yeh baccha humare nafrat ki nishaani hein kyaaa karu...kyaa karu mein?"she yelled
"but this is my baby whom i can love...nd who will love me back"said aastha smiling through her sobs but suddenly her expression turned grave
"par shlok...!"
{All their harsh moments came into her mind}
And she also remembered aher sasubai telling tht she must only give birth to a boy child...she started thinking on how kavya is treated in this house
"agar ladki huvi toh?"
"ladki nai bhi huvi toh mein ni chahungi mera bacha aise ghar pe bada ho...mein nai chahti usko lage ki uske pita us sein nafrat kare...mein nai chahti ki uski soch yeh parmpara ke beecho beech mein kaid rahe"
"par mujhein toh hamesha beti chahiye tha na bappa...voh yaha kabhi khush nai reh payegi"
"JANNA HOGA...YAHAN SEIN DOOR BOHUT DOOOR"
Said aastha wiping her tears and nodding determinedly
END
K this is frm my story starts...!!
I hope u all like my concept...if u do please let me knw...through ur valuable comments and likes...and if u don't even criticisms is accepted...bt i will continue this story only if people like it cuz i will also renovate the link when the story really starts...!!!
Well i am Tanya...!
THANK YOU
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