#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 66

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Yaar, frankly speaking, shlok in my FF may be just  a dream man, not in real life...but  try to keep charctares constant or change them with time..i don;t like t swing their moods like once too coll and gain that arrogant, i love consistencies...
ya, in precap ha is like old Shlok, lets see till when, i think just upto first break.😉

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update dear
loved it
superb
loved your detailed description of stem cells
so NA and anjali are not biological parents of shlok ...
felt sad for them... They love their son but can't do anything right now
loved kalindi 's concern for astha
loved the friends support for astha
I'm loving this shlok ... He is such a sweetheart
even in his semi concious state... He denied to go intimate with her...
he remembered his promise even in such a state..
poor astha .. Felt bad to her


When Astha spoke... Gauri why? Why every time he makes me fall in love with him more and more... why? Why now I think, if I will not able to make him live, I would love to die with him...
What happened Astha... Gauri asked worriedly...
He denied... even in his dreams he denied to get intimate with me... She looked towards Kalindi who was also shocked...
But why? Gauri asked... As per doctor, he is semi-conscious, and he love you so much ...then...
He said, he has promised ayii...she looked ta kalindi, we will not move ahead till our marriage...saying she hugged Gauri crying badly...



loved the above part the most..
waiting for next update
continue soon

Originally posted by: niki795

unresed my comment

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Itni mohobbat na karo mujse

Ki main tum ko khud samajne lagu

Ye Ehsas bhi rehne do muje,

Ki meri bhi ek hasti hai...

Beautiful update jeenia...I love it...what is love...koi aastha se sikhe...salute to her...per kya aaj k zamane me aisa pyaar hota hai...that is the big question...but our  shlok and Aastha they are simply great...I don't understand them ye khuda k rup me insaan hai  ya insaan k rup me khuda...and Shlok he remember his promise in unconscious mind also...wow...and another shocking moment was shlok is not agnihotri's son...omg...that's why there can't do anything for there son...poor helpless people...and jeenia I must say you describe very well all medical situation...now aastha get test tube baby...??? I think so...or konsa options hai usk paas...but she is a brave girl...aisa sochne k liye bhi kaafi himmat chahiye...well done. ...

Agar tum mill jao zamana chod denge hum

Tumhe paakar zamane bhar se rishta tod denge hum...

Originally posted by: Pveenat

Lovely! There are no words to explain how I felt reading your update, I had tears in my eyes. You have written so well it's awesome, truly awesome. Loved it , it touched my heart . Thank you!

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thnaks a lot dear for liking the update... was waiting for your views...
Ya, i didn't have any other option fr N nd anjlali...😆
Her parents are really concerned for their daughter's future as well as their own respect because it always comes to daughter's family and friends are all being best friends only... they just wish their friends' happiness back... hope soon they ill succeed too... and part you loved , is also my favorite in this update... I too loved this part very much...

Gauri why? Why every time he makes me fall in love with him more and more... why? Why now I think, if I will not able to make him live, I would love to die with him...
What happened Astha... Gauri asked worriedly...
He denied... even in his dreams he denied to get intimate with me... She looked towards Kalindi who was also shocked...
But why? Gauri asked... As per doctor, he is semi-conscious, and he love you so much ...then...
He said, he has promised ayii...she looked ta kalindi, we will not move ahead till our marriage...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

unres ed my views too...😊