Ah Ana I am so glad to know you wrote one of my top 3 OSs in that whole contest! Sources of Light was definitely a Favourite! What can I say I can't get enough of the redemption track because it is one track that was not handled well in the actual show. Ever since I joined this forum, I have been on the look out to read about Arnav's redemption so this OS was definitely quite a treat and I must thank you for it! ;-)
The way you expressed Arnav's perspective and how painful it was for him to watch Khushi cry herself to sleep every night was just beautiful and heart wrenching at the same time. That whole phase of kicking Khushi out and making her sleep by the pool side was so disheartening that I couldn't bring myself to watch those portions of the show properly, I had the skim watch those parts! You most certainly recreated those moments on a different light adding Arnav's realization of his folly to it, which was again quite a treat to read. Then in the end the way you brought them together gradually and only after Arnav managed to redeem himself, was a heart warming experience. Loved it A!
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