Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 77

I wanted to see that dance ni8 scene from shlok's pov. Thanks 4 that. Lovely update dear!

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

I wanted to see that dance ni8 scene from shlok's pov. Thanks 4 that. Lovely update dear!

Thanks a lot dear...

what are you going to give us on the next update????😊 and please do try to narrate the story with shlok pov a little😊

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

what are you going to give us on the next update????😊 and please do try to narrate the story with shlok pov a little😊

Well a shock..from no one's point of view...
yaar its quite difficult to write from one person's poit of view..i had tried once i my rishbala FF, i know it should not be discussed but i started from RK's point of view and really missed the charm in between, as it was missing Madhu's emotions...then i had to make it general .
yes, if some condition like this repeats agian...i will give udates like this only...,

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Awesome update.

thanks a lot dear...

Hi,

I simply love your story and I am a sucker for best friends turning into lovers stories. You are such a fabulous writer. I just have one suggestion. Can you get your work edited grammatically before posting it? That would make it super awesome :) and this is definitely not bashing :) Great going. Keep it up!

AWESOME UPDATE... KEEP IT UP!!! 👍🏼

hmmm m jeez so much planning to make her confess 

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower

Hi,

I simply love your story and I am a sucker for best friends turning into lovers stories. You are such a fabulous writer. I just have one suggestion. Can you get your work edited grammatically before posting it? That would make it super awesome :) and this is definitely not bashing :) Great going. Keep it up!

Originally posted by: khuwahish

AWESOME UPDATE... KEEP IT UP!!! 👍🏼