Players OR heartbreakers....??? (** SS**) LAST PART UPDATED PG 49

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Five friends... Five people... Five lives... Five dreams... Five wishes... Five secrets... Five viewpoints... Five backgrounds... Five attitudes... But same journey...

Story of viren, jeevika, virat, manvi and dabbu.

Five friends who decided to go on a holiday to goa for a week.

This trip had different meaning for all five of them...

For viren it was a chance to go close to his crush, virat needed some time off, girls were all excited at the thought of guys, beach, music, dance n shopping, n dabbu excited to go out somewhere with his friends without his protective parents.

Virat : woww dude... I m freakin excited for goa... finally Goa is on...!!!

Viren : yes dude... I m also equally excited...

Manvi : i m angry.. You two never asked me... (jumping on the bed where virat n viren were lying n sharing their excitements)

Virat : by any chance, do you realise you are a girl... Dont you feel shy in joining us at this time n that too on the bed...

Manvi : shut up yaar virat... Its you only na... Why should i feel shy...??

Viren : you guys are just impossible... Manvi where is jeevika...??? N u never told me you both girls are on a night out...

Manvi : she is parking the car n we will stay at your place only... Subah late na ho jae dats y...

Virat : way too  excited... Right...???

Manvi : yeah my friend... U know girls very well... I am excited for the guys there... It would be fun...

Viren : guys... Control... (Feeling comfortable)

Jeevika : hey guys... How r u doing...??

Viren : we r good yaar... Great plan of staying here...

Jeevika : thats because it was my idea idea...

Manvi : yeah yeah...

Virat : girlies... Can u both go to your rooms now...??

Manvi : kyun...?? Aisa kya karna hai akele mein...???

Virat : chal toh fir btata hoon janeman... (getting up from the bed n almost picking up manvi in his arms)

Manvi : nahii... Please bhagwan ke liye mujhe chod do... (holding his shoulders for support n pulling him close n winking at him)

Virat threw manvi suddenly on the bed n smirked " chod dia..."

In all this only one person was getting pissed off n angry n it was viren, who had feelings for manvi. Virat's mobile started ringing n he went out immediately irritating manvi.

Manvi : yahan bhi toh attend kar sakta tha...

Jeevika : attending your girlfriend's phone in front of your best friends is a very bad idea... He knew it very well we will keep on pulling his legs then... (saud giggling)

Manvi : he is very much single...

Virat : & ready to mingle...

Viren : who was it...???

Virat : boss... He was asking about  how is everything here...

Manvi : matlab...???

Jeevika : u again lied... Right...???

Virat : yes... Maine bola ke mere naanu offf  ho gye n this boss of mine is just too emotional u see...

Manvi : if i m not wrong jab hum log last time picnic gaye the, around 3 months back, tab bhi naanu ki balli chadi thi...

Virat : arrey mannu the smartest...

Jeevika : haha... I'm lovin this... It will be fun...

Viren : yup... By the way where is dabbu...???

Virat : i will call up that dhokhla...  dont worry (bcos dabbu is a gujrati πŸ˜†)

Jeevika : everyone keeps teasing poor dabbu... N why bring dhokla in all this...???

Manvi : haan please dhokla mat bolo yaar... (pouting) Khane ko mann kar jaata hai...

Virat : kisko khane ka mann...??? I mean kya khane ka... (winking at manvi)

Manvi : tumhein khane ka mann hota h... Samjhe... (leaning close to him)

Virat : haan... Aisi baatein mujhe jaldi samajh aati hai... (pulling her close)

Viren : shut up cheapos...

Jeevika : cheapness ek bimaari hai...

Virat : i agree...

Manvi : hum bhi... Hai na viren... (holding his hand)

Viren : hmm...

 

In goa

Dabbu : mujhe na bahut darr lag rha hai...

Virat : toh kyun aaya...?? Ghar rehta apni mummi ke paas...

Viren : kyun taang kheech rha h bechare dabbu ki... (hitting his shoulder playfully)

Virat : viren meri baat maan ye dhokla koi kaam ka ni h...

Dabbu : chal chal... Tu mujhse jalta hai virat...

Manvi : haan jalna toh banta hai... Dabbu itna hot jo h... Ryt jeevs...??

Jeevika : haan haan... (controlling her laughter)

Virat : behno ka andha pyaar...

Dabbu : chal chal... Behen ni h yeh dono meri...

Manvi winked at virat n viren and shifted close to dabbu...

Manvi : ohh really... Behen nahi hoon toh kuch aur hoon kya (tracing her finger along his face) mere pyaare dhokle...

Dabbu was shocked n unable to react...

Virat : haan teri toh behen hi hai dhokle... Aur meri -

Manvi : tumhari...??? Tumhari kya...???

Virat : panauti... (showing his tongue)

Virat ran while manvi followed him.

Manvi : rukk... Btati hoon...

Virat : aaja aaja...

Viren made a face while jeevika enjoyed it...

 

At evening...

Manvi : kya yaar sab kitne pakao ho... Main beach pe walk karne jaa rahi hoon...

Virat : ja jaane wali tujhe kisne roka hai... (teasing her)

Viren : i m coming along manvi...

Manvi : come lets go...

Manvi n viren left the room while virat jeevika n dabbu were still there.

Jeevika : so what will we do now...???

Dabbu : haan... Hum antakshari khelein..??

Virat : woh kaun khelta hai abbey...

Jeevika : then cards... What say...??

Virat : i say why not... Chal dhokle cards nikaal...

Dabbu : haan haan...

 

Scene shifts

Viren was looking at manvi who was enjoying walking on the beach and that happiness n satisfaction was reflected on her face.

Viren : you are lovin it...

Manvi looked at viren from the corner of her eye and smiled.

Manvi : yeah i am... This cool breeze, happening atmosphere and -

Viren : and this beautiful smile of yours...

Manvi : huh...

Viren : i mean u look beautiful when you smile...

Manvi (blushing) : thank you...

Viren : manvi i have been trying to ask you something... i mean i want to tell something... I mean say something... I mean...

Manvi : relax dude... Ab bolo...

Viren : i... I like... I mean... nahi kuch khaas nahi... Lets go back...

Manvi : okkk... (smiling as she knows what viren was trying to say)

 

Next day

Virat : kal koi chik-chik kar raha tha ke hum sab boring hai isliye hum aaj yahan aaye hain...

Manvi : par itni subah kyun...??? (yawning)

Virat : to enjoy early morning breeze...

Manvi : ohhh shut up virat...

Jeevika : ab bta bhi do virat...

Virat : bta dete hai... Jaldi kya hai...

Viren : bol de yaar ab...

Manvi : btana h toh bta do warna...

Virat : warna mannu baby meri complaint karegi...

Manvi : shut up...

Jeevika : lemme tell it...

Dabbu : truth n dare...

Virat : kyunki aisa lagta hai sabke dil mein koi na koi raaz chupe hain... (looking at viren)

Viren : what nonsense...

Jeevika : its not... Lets play it...

Manvi : yeah lets play guys... I  love it yaar...

Virat : good decision balike...

So they started the game unaware that by the end of the game everything would change

The bottle spinned and stopped at virat.

Virat : great...

Jeevika : truth or dare...

Manvi : dare hi lega...

Virat : truth...

Viren : phas gya tu uske plan mein... (winking at virat)

Manvi : hehe... Chalo now share one secret that you have been hiding from us... Or have you cheated on anyone of us...???

Virat : yes... Actually i kissed the girl viren liked.

Manvi : who...???

Viren : what...???

Virat : one question at one time...

Dabbu : exactly... lets spin the bottle again...

Jeevika spinned the bottle and it stopped at  dabbu...

Virat : bahut hasi aa rahi thi na... Ab bta...

Manvi : tell me about a secret no one knows other than you...

Dabbu : maine na bachpan mein mummy  ki saari cutter se kaat di thi...

Viren : ohhh really... Woww

Virat : ghadha hi rahega ye...

Jeevika : ghadha nahi... Dhokla... (giggling)

Manvi : haan dhokla... Hurrr

Virat gave a u-r-useless look to dabbu n spinned the bottle again.

Manvi : meri chance kab ayegi... (sulking like a child)

Dabbu : ayegi ayegi...

Manvi : viren... (pointing at viren) Truth or dare...

Viren : truth...

Dabbu : main puchun...???

Virat : the girl you like...

Viren looked at manvi who knew what was viren trying to say to her from last few days... Manvi was expecting viren to say his feelings today...

Viren : jeevika...

Jeevika looked at viren shockingly...

Jeevika : what...??

Manvi burned in jealousy and spinned the bottle...

Dabbu : virat...

Virat : pucho...

Viren : who was that girl...??

Virat : jeevika...

There was silence now... Manvi signalled dabbu n he spinned the bottle...

Dabbu : manvi teri baari aa gyi...

Manvi : i want to confess something.

Everyone looked at manvi waiting for the confession.

Manvi : i love you virat...

Virat choked on the pepsi he was drinking and started coughing. Viren burned in jealous y and anger... Jeevika was unable to digest this and dabbu seemed happy...

Virat : jaan nikal di... Majaak kar rahi thi na...

Manvi : nahi... I love you (looking at viren) n tumhe koi problem hai kya... U are most suitable for me...

Viren : lets go back guys... Bahut ho gya i guess...

Everyone of them could see that that nothing would be same now and the new equations will cause major changes in their friendship.

Jeevika called virat aside while others left.

The night passed n so prevailed the uninvited coldness and silence.

 

Next morning

Jeeman's room

Jeevika : are you serious about virat...??

Manvi : why does it matter...?? May be bcos you kissed him.

Jeevika : we kissed n that was years back... A momentary thing... Attraction... Thats it.

Manvi : thanks for the explanation.

Jeevika : listen to me manvi...

Manvi : woww jeevs u had both virat n viren...

Jeevika : shut up manvi...

Manvi left the room and collided with virat...

Virat : sorry...

Manvi : virat...

Virat turned around to leave when manvi held his arm.

Manvi : we should talk... I only said what i wanted to... (still thinking about viren who  made manvi believe that he likes her n then when time came, he chose jeevika)

Virat : come with me...

Virat took manvi to the swimming pool area of the hotel.

Virat : you dont love me... I know that...

Manvi : and how do you know that...???

Virat : cmon now dont lie to me...

Manvi : i am not lying... I mean what i said...

Virat : main tumhare layak nahi hoon manvi... I am saying it as a friend...

Manvi : tumne kabhi mujhe hurt ni kia... Kabhi mujhe uncomfortable ni feel karaya... You teased me but u were always there for me... You are the first person whom i can look upto when i am in distress.

Virat : but that doesnt mean you love me or i love you...

Manvi : okkk... If u also want to abondon me like that... Its okk...

Virat : chal ab drama na kar...

Manvi : tu bhi bhaw mat khaa ab...

Virat : theek hai... Toh fir mujhe apni baahon mein bhar le...

Manvi : can you call it a hug...??

Virat : hehe... okk gimme a hug...

Manvi smiled and hugged virat who was nothing but a good friend for manvi. She hided herself in his embrace trying to forget the pain she felt when viren literally cheated on her.

Virat : mereko seduce na kar ab...

Manvi : main majboor hoon... (pinching him)

Virat : ouch... But kyun...??

Manvi : itna sexy deo hai na... Driving me crazy...

Virat : yeah... I know that...

Manvi giggled and thanked god for giving her a friend like virat.

While viren saw this and his heart broke thinking that he lost manvi forever and all because of that stupid game.

 

After sometime

Virat : coffee peele yaar...

Manvi : nahi yaar... How is everyone else...??

Virat : pta nahi... Matlab everything is strange...

Manvi : strange matlab...??

Virat : kal se dhokla itna khaa raha hai ke puch mat... bahut khush hai saala...

Manvi : hehe...

Virat : has mat... Aur viren toh ajeeb hai... Kal se chup baitha hai jaise dil toot gya ho...

Manvi : hmmp... Dil kyun tootega uska...

Virat : he will be ok i guess... Tu theek hai na...

Manvi : haan virat...

Virat : waise tujhe sach mein mujhse pyaar hai kya...???

Manvi saw viren coming towards them n said loud enough for him to hear...

Manvi : haan pyaar hai... Bahut pyaar hai mujhe tumse...

Virat : kab se...?? I mean kitne din se...

Manvi : ab ye nahi calculate kia maine...

Virat : koi nahi mujhe pta hai meri manvi madam ka haath maths mein tight hai...

Manvi : i will kill you virat...

Viren again saw this n felt more miserable... All thanks to this existing game of timing between them...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I so loved this os!!!! Mere ManVir!!!! awieee Viren ka heartbreak!! am sooo sad!!! I just hope he gets happy in the end!!! loved it!!
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Aage ka b abhi update karo na plz
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awesome update
viren loves maanvi
maanvi loves viren
loved virat and maanvi's convo
plz cont soon
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Originally posted by: mamaian-Afshan

Aage ka b abhi update karo na plz

 
 
apki request hai toh main 100 % jaldi post karne ki koshish karungi πŸ˜›
par aaj nahi 😳
may be tomorrow
but u didnt tell me ke ye kitna accha lga...???? 😳
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Originally posted by: jia123sagar

awesome update

viren loves maanvi
maanvi loves viren
loved virat and maanvi's convo
plz cont soon

 
 
thank u soo much... 😊
will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i love this os so much
It's like love at first sight πŸ˜†
wow viren and manvi love each other
so it's basically like virat jeevika has a mere attraction
But it's such a cute lovestory
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi246

i love this os so much
It's like love at first sight πŸ˜†
wow viren and manvi love each other
so it's basically like virat jeevika has a mere attraction
But it's such a cute lovestory
Plz continue soon



Thank u soo much rashi πŸ˜ƒ
I would just say that there is lot more coming up... So stay tuned... πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
viren loves manvi but said jeevika
manvi loves viren but said  virat
but y is dabbu happy
loved virman conversation
continue soon
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Wow!!! Awesome os di...πŸ‘

But I hate one thing... why do you make it as os? Pls make it as a ff or ss! I'll be on cloud nine if it happens!😳

I just loved it to the core!πŸ˜ƒ

Continue soon please... I would be more than happy if you update today! Please continue soon!πŸ˜›

Ahh... I'm in love with this os di!😊

Love you!❀️

Take care!πŸ€—