Players OR heartbreakers....??? (** SS**) LAST PART UPDATED PG 49 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
haye nain superb update
but main toh confuse ho gayi hu
yaar viren love manvi but manvi love virat now... but virat doeant love manvi and virat jeev making plan ... but den both virat and jeev wer jealous wen manvi ran to help viren...and at last manvi tried to stop virat ...😲😲😲
haye yaar ki hoyega... mereko samajh mein nahi aarha
par jo bhi hai i liked it... no loved it ...
jaldi continue
love anne <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update virat and jeevika plan
to make viren and manvi separated
why update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
so virat and jeevs are like 😈
awesome
Edited by janvi0513 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nannu di! Unressed on page 20!😉

Check it now!😃

I need an update pls! I no need update for any other FF... I need an update for this first! Please!😉

Love you! Take care!😃


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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for continuously pestering you for an update di!

But I can't help! I really want to know what is happening!

I know that you have your personal works tooo!

But my request is that if you have already written the update... then please post it!

But if you have not written it and should write only after this... then take your own time!

But try to update fast! Just TRY! Sorry again!

Take care!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Naina this part is shocking
but loved it
waiting for next...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 4
(this part is specially for maggie, ankita, aaru n uzma - because these 4 have eaten my brain by asking again n again for the update😉 😆)

Manvi was feeling restless and she wanted answers. She wanted to know why her simple life got entangled so badly. She liked viren initially but then in revenge she chose virat. The thereby resultant closeness started melted her heart n now she is very much into virat. She now wants to be with him... She wants him in her life... She wants to be beside him.

Manvi got up and went to the boys' room n knocked on the door.

She knocked again but still no response...

Manvi entered n saw that no one was to be seen. She moved further n heard some sounds. She found viren puking in the bathroom.

Manvi : ohh god... Virennn... Are you okk...??

Viren didnt react n went back to the room.

Manvi : are you okk...?? Answer me viren

Viren : i m fine...

Manvi : cmon dude... We are still friends...

Viren : still friends... This is the damn thing that is hurting me but its giving you pleasure...

Manvi : pleasure...??? Hurt...??? What is wrong with you viren...???

Viren : you know i like you... I just said jeevika's name to make you jealous manvi... Just to get a hint whether u are affected on seeing me with sumone else or not... But you... You are toh a player manvi...

Manvi was in a fix... Viren did like her... But does it give her any sort of happiness... No it doesnt... Rather she is scared to lose virat. She is happy with him... Happy to have this new found relationship with him... She wants to be his special someone...

Viren : where are you lost huh...???

Manvi : no where...

Viren: tell me whats in your heart... Tell me you love me... (holding her shoulders) manvi please... Please say you love me... I love you... Main tumhe bahut chahta hoon...

Manvi : no... I.. I dont... I liked you viren but -

Viren : but you are more interested in virat now... what has he done to you in a day...??? Kya kar dia usne ek din mein jo main aaj tak nahi kar paya... Kya manvi...???

Manvi : how can you think like that...???

Virat : ooopsss... Sorry guys...

Virat turned around to leave and was about to close the door when manvi called him.

Manvi : virat... Virat tum galat samajh rahe ho...

Virat smirked and left the room.

Viren : answer me manvi...

Manvi : virat... Leave me viren... Virat galat samajh raha hai...

Viren : i dont care...

Manvi : but i care... I cant lose him...

Viren : i also cant lose you... Lets sort out our differences manvi...

Manvi : no... I have to go...

Viren : but why...???

Manvi : because i love him...

Viren left manvi the moment he heard what she said.

Viren : you were playing around with me n my heart n now you claim to be in love with virat...

Manvi : viren you played with me... Liked me but u hurted me when u said jeevika's name... But you know what i am thankful to you, if its not been your love game, i would have not realised that virat is special for me... I would have never been able to name the unknown spark virat n i had... We were meant to be from the very beginning...

Viren : ohhh really... A new matchmaker in town... Viren sharma... Yaaayyy...

Manvi : get well soon n i dont love you...

Manvi left the room and now she had no regrets.

Dabbu was looking at jeevika who was busy painting her nails.

Dabbu : cmon now you guys have to tell me why you planned this trip...

Jeevika : viren thought of it n i just brought it in action.

Dabbu : but when did you guys join hands...???

Jeevika : first of all ask me why we did so... 😳

Dabbu : i know the reason... You both as in u n virat like viren n manvi respectively...

Jeevika : ahaan... Someone has improved... 😉

Dabbu : tell me na...

Jeevika : i like viren from always... We never got into a relationship... Virat, viren n i are childhood friends as you know... Yes me n virat had a scene but it was nothing more than attraction... N we both are very much comfortable with each other even after whatever happened... We are friends... Buddies... 😃

Dabbu : okkk... But i didnt get the answer of my question.

Before jeevika could say anything, manvi barged into the room panting.

Manvi : do you know where is virat...???

Jeevika : naahhh... Kya hua manvi...???

Dabbu : main aun help karne...

Manvi : nahi... Kuch nahi... I will find him...

Manvi searched for virat until she found him. She saw him sitting near the shore and before approaching him, she dialed his mobile. As expected, he didn't pick the call making manvi more scared that he would not forgive her.

Manvi slowly went and sat beside virat and he didn't seem to notice... He was lost in the pool of his thoughts.

Manvi : everytime what you see is not the truth...

Virat : I have understood this... Jyada gyani baba banne ki jarurat nahi hai...

Manvi : gyaani baba...?? Par main kya karun... tum itne buddhu ho ke mujhe tumhe gyaan dene ke liye baba bhi banna padega...

Virat : go away... Leave me alone...

Manvi : why...??? Because you are jealous and insecure...

Virat : who said I am jealous...???

Manvi : its written on your face... And for your kind information, I went there to talk to you but I found viren wasn't well...

Virat : toh tum uski nurse ban gayi...

Manvi : what...??? I was just talking to him and he...

Virat : he what...??

Manvi : he... nothing...

Virat : tell me now...

Manvi : he said he loves me and I broke his heart... I am nothing but a heartbreaker in his eyes... Trust me I never said I love him...

Virat : but you said it to me though you don't mean it... (disheartened)

Manvi : I mean it... (taking his hand in hers) I only love you... I can do anything you want... anything to prove my love for you...

Virat : anything...??

Manvi : anything you say...

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nainu my sweetyheart!!!! ❤️ loved the uppu!!! My Viren!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awww agle uppu me make him happy!!! ****Pwease****
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay

nainu my sweetyheart!!!! ❤️ loved the uppu!!! My Viren!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awww agle uppu me make him happy!!! ****Pwease****

maska mat lga anki 😛 happy shappy karne ka try karungi... pakka promise 😊

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