Players OR heartbreakers....??? (** SS**) LAST PART UPDATED PG 49 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW, I have just read its two parts. Its amazing.
There is very much suspense packed in your store that what will happen next.
But please, don't miss our kiss. 😳 virman are just looking awesome with other. What a Jodi yaar.

Eagerly waiting for next part.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: under123

WOW, I have just read its two parts. Its amazing.
There is very much suspense packed in your store that what will happen next.
But please, don't miss our kiss. 😳 virman are just looking awesome with other. What a Jodi yaar.

Eagerly waiting for next part.





Thank u 😊
Stay tuned... Next part will b soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: urmy01

hahaha love virat and manvis characters...



Glad to know that... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


Whenever u r ready to give me a long comment... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _Maggie_

Awesome update Nainu di



Thank u n u can call me naina 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update karo nannu di!!! Pls!😛 I'm dying to read it! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
pura dhasu os
first line itself was so catching
nd den the truth or dare wala game ...
fatafat ans of d foursome were totally unxpected ... like unxpected turn of events...
and virman bonding i loved dat
really eager to knw y viren did like dat
jeevika chipke dekh rhi thi un dono ko
hayeee kisssy 😳
jal;di continue kar nainu
love anne
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nahaananya

pura dhasu os thank you
first line itself was so catching
nd den the truth or dare wala game ...
fatafat ans of d foursome were totally unxpected ... like unxpected turn of events...
and virman bonding i loved dat i know you would 😳
really eager to knw y viren did like dat
jeevika chipke dekh rhi thi un dono ko
hayeee kisssy Embarrassed
jal;di continue kar nainu continuing soon anne...
love anne love u too... ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 3

Manvi : kiss me...

Virat : have you lost it...???

Manvi : kyun...??? Why cant you kiss me when... When u kissed her...

Virat : manvi yaar meri baat sunn...

Manvi was losing her senses. Viren ditched her first and now when virat was with her, she was scared to lose him to jeevika. She wanted to make sure that virat would stand by her n love her.

Manvi : you dont love me... Its ok but on no cost i will let you go...

Virat : i never said that i will go manvi... I said i cant live without you, if u remember...

Manvi : but you dont love me... How will we be together...??

Virat : we will... I dont know how but we will...

Manvi : promise...??

Virat : promise...

Manvi hugged virat and he wrapped his arms around manvi. Manvi saw viren standing at the door and then she closed her eyes and accepted virat as hers... Only hers

Manvi : i love you virat...

Virat : i love you too... (after looking at jeevika who gave him a thumbs up)

Viren was heartbroken again... Again in the last two days... Just a game n his happiness was snatched from him... He just lied to see whether manvi is affected or not... He wanted to make manvi jealous and here he was the one who was being disowned... Manvi hurted him and right now she was in the arms of his best friend.

Viren went away closing the door and after sometime virman broke the hug. Before any one of them could say anything jeevika entered drying her hair.

Jeevika : oops... Whats happening here...???

Manvi : nothing... Lagta hai i have a fracture... My leg...

Virat thought she is such a drama queen... Again started with her melodrama...

Jeevika : OMG manvi... Wait lemme call a doctor...

Virat : you take care of her jeevika... I will call the doctor...

jeevika : okk...

Manvi : i am sorry guys... I spoiled everything... I mean our trip...

Virat : ab sorry bolke kya hoga...??? Ab beach pe sirf main jaunga aur tum iss room mein...

Manvi : what...??? You will leave me alone...??

Virat : yeah i have to... You are hurt you see...

Manvi : no.. No.. Nooo... I am fine... (getting up from the bed) i can walk... I can jump... (jerking her leg) i am fine virat... And you will not go alone... Main aungi please... 😳

Virat : nautanki... Natak kar rahi thi tum... Manvi ki bachi you are gone... Meri kamar toot jaati toh itna bhari (pointing at manvi) samaan uthate hue... 😉

Manvi : bhaari samaan...??? 😲 Jeevs tell him to get lost...

Jeevika : virat get lost... 😆

Virat : come lets go together jeevs...

Manvi : jeevs meri friend hai... Jaoo virat... 😡

Virat : ok ok byee...

Scene shifts

Boys room

Dabbu : virat oye sunn na...

Virat : kya hai...???

Dabbu : i am very happy yaar... U n manvi... Main bahut khush hoon...

Virat : kyun... Why are you so happy dhokla...???

Dabbu : bcos i know u are the best one for manvi... Viren can love her but not more than you...

Virat looked suspiciously at dabbu...

Virat : viren n manvi...??? How do you know all this...???

Dabbu : woh actually...

Virat : door band kar pehle... (first close the door)

Dabbu : main andha nahi hoon virat... Sab dikhta bhi hai aur samajh bhi aata hai... (I am not blind... I can see n understand everything...)

Virat : samajh aa gya hai toh chup baith... Seal your mouth... (if u have understand, then shut your mouth...)

Dabbu : par viren ki kya galti hai... (but whats viren's fault...??)

Virat : i will explain you... Jyada dimag mat lga, khatam ho jaega... (don't use your brain u pin-head)

Dabbu : mujhe kya... (whatever...)

Virat : viren kahan hai...??? (where is viren...??)

Dabbu : pta nahi... He never returned...

Virat : lets go find him n remember zip it...

dabbu : okk...

Virat n dabbu searched for viren n found him sitting on the terrace with a beer bottle in his hands.

Virat : chilling haan... Great...

Dabbu : tu yahan kya...

Viren : tujhse permission leke aata matlab...??

Virat : bhadak kyun raha hai...?? (why are u over reacting...??)

Viren : tu chala ja yahan se virat... (u go away from here virat...)

Virat : kyun...?? Koi problem hai mere yahan hone se... (why...?? Is there a problem with me being here...???)

Viren : tere yahan hone se nahi... Mujhe tujhse problem hai... (no... not exactly... actually I have problem with you...)

Virat : okk i see... Continue...

Viren : just leave me alone...

Dabbu : yaar tum log - (listen guys -)

Virat : you stay out of it dabbu... I really want to know what this guy is thinking...

Dabbu : virat tu toh samajh na... Viren is drunk...

Virat : drunk... Oh really... Cmon viren say it... Say it dude... What the f**k is bothering you...???

Viren : you damn it... Because of you i lost everything...

Dabbu was worried and went to tell jeeman about this...

Virat : ohhh really... What did i exactly do...??? Enlighten me...

Viren : you kissed jeevika whom i liked back in school n now... Now you snatched manvi from me... Why virat...?? Why...??? Kyun jo mujhe pasand aaye wahi tujhe bhi chahie hota hai...

Virat : dont bring jeevika in all this... That is something which has nil important... It doesnt matter dude... And coming to manvi... I never knew you liked her...

Viren : now you know it... Dont u...?? So just backoff now...

Virat : wish i could do that...

Jeevika : what the heck is happening guys...???

Virat : jeevika go...

Manvi : virat... (unable to understand whats happening)

Virat turned to look at manvi n suddenly all his fears came alive.

Virat : manv.. Manvi you go baby... dont stay here... You (pointing at dabbu) brought them here... you...

Viren : scared huh...

Manvi : excuse me... What are you trying to say viren...???

Virat : be a man n talk to me... Dont bring manvi in between...

Manvi : what is all this virat...??

Viren : ask me honey...

Jeevika : viren sambhalo khud ko... You cannot talk to manvi n virat like that...

Viren : i can do anything jeevika...

Virat : manvi jeevika dont get into this... Its useless talking to him right now...

Manvi : virat but viren...

Viren : manvi... Dont go please...

Virat : shut up viren...

Jeevika : manvi lets go...

Manvi : dabbu kuch bol na... Kuch kar na idiot...

Dabbu : manvi main kya -

Viren : guys i want to say something...

Virat : we are not interested...

Manvi : let him say virat...

Jeevika : manvi is right...

Virat : i know what he wants to say... He just wants to blame me that you love me not him.

Manvi looked down unable of reacting to all this.

Viren was blinking his eyes and was constantly trying to keep his eyes open.

Jeevika : cmon why would viren say so...

Dabbu was now more eager to know what was actually happening... It wasnt like what was appearing... It was totally different.

Viren lost his senses and fainted.

Manvi : virennn...

Virat and jeevika saw manvi running to viren and holding him in her arms n both of them burned in jealousy...

Manvi : virat dekho na... Viratt...

Virat : he was right... You dont love me...

Manvi suddenly left viren n stood up.

Manvi : vi.. Virat... Tum...

Jeevika ran to help viren n with help of dabbu, took viren to his room.

Manvi : virat talk to me please...

Virat : leave me alone...

Manvi : virat please meri baat sunlo...

Virat : you love him... You love viren... Tumne dhokha dia mujhe... You played with my feelings...

Manvi : nooo... Virat trust me...

Virat : its over...

Saying this virat stormed to the cafe of the resort, leaving a hurt n broken manvi behind.

Manvi cried her heart out and after hours, she went to her room n still jeevika wasnt there. Manvi thought may be jeevika is with viren n got into bed.

Scene shifts

Jeevika : thank god...

Virat : yeah...

Jeevika : so ab kya karna hai...?? (so what do we have to do next...??)

Virat : kya karna hai... Bas tamasha dekhna hai... (we have to do nothing... we just have to watch the drama...)

Jeevika : haha... Poor innocent souls...

Virat : dont tell me you are talking about manvi... She is not that innocent...

Jeevika : no ways... I m talking about u n me...

Virat : haha... great...

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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