Players OR heartbreakers....??? (** SS**) LAST PART UPDATED PG 49 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: .jai.

Superb Start Nainaji.. Mazaa aagaya.. Waiting for the next update..




Thank u jai 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: naina927


here it goes bennu

<font face="Times New Roman"></font>

<font face="Times New Roman">Manvi : mera room aa
gaya... <font color="#990033">(ohh we reached my room... but why so soon...???) </font>Par itni jaldi kyun...??? (pulling him closer)</font>

<font face="Times New Roman">Virat : kyun
matlab...?? <font color="#990066"><font color="#990033">( why mean...?? i cant take you in my arms and walk for the rest of my life... )</font> </font>Zindagi bhar tumhe baahon mein leke ghumunga kya...??</font>

<font face="Times New Roman">Manvi : kyun nahi
ghumoge...??? Main pasand nahi hoon kya...???<font color="#990033"> (why wouldnt you...??? dont you like me...???)</font></font>



thank you dear,
manviii you love viren so do nothing wrong😉


Love kahan se aaya...??? 😳 its only liking 😛

nainaa what do you mean with only liking?? 😔
she likes only virat but loves viren 😃
(just my HOPE)😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Its awesm uniqie concept. I luvd it.. plzzz jldi jldi update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
PART 2
next day
Virat was confused seeing the sudden change in his relationship, rather what we should friendship with manvi... Atleast the closeness , the deliberate closeness was telling him so... It wasnt like he wasnt liking all this, infact he was loving it but he knew that there was a reason behind all this.

Virat : viren yaar...

Viren : hmm...

Virat : woh actually i was thinking...

Viren : bol de yaar...

Virat : why do i feel something is bothering you...?? Kuch kehna chahta hai kya...???

Viren : nahin... K..kuch nahi yaar...

Virat : are you okk with everything...?? I mean manvi n i... I mean...

Viren : why would i have a problem...?? U two are ok with it so...

Virat : thanks dude... I thought you are not that happy...

Viren : I am fine virat... but are you interested...???

Virat : I don't know... I share a very special relationship with manvi... scared what if we get into this love thing and end up screwing up everything...

Viren : hmm...

"knock knock "

Dabbu : kaun aa gya yaar...??? Sone bhi nahi dete...

Virat : chup ho jaa...

Virat opened the door and smiled at manvi...

Manvi : good morning...

Virat : morning... Itni subah subah tum -

Manvi : lets go out for a walk...

Virat turned around and looked at viren who seemed least interested and got into the bed again...

Virat : chal...

At the beach

(imagine virman)

Manvi : I hope I didn't disturb...

Virat : why are you talking to me like a stranger as if we just met few minutes ago...???

Manvi : nahi toh...

Virat : mere sarr pe likha hai main pagal hoon...

Manvi : dikhao... Main check karun...???

Virat : chal ab jyada chep mat ho... (secretly smiling to himself)

Manvi : what were you guys doing...???

Virat : when...??

Manvi : right now in the room...

Virat : nothing... I was talking to viren... and dhokla was sleeping...

Manvi : hmm... did viren say something...???

Virat : naahh...

Manvi : waise ek baat hai... Jo bhi hua... I mean whatever happened... I just confessed...

Virat : bol de...

Manvi : I mean maine bomb phoda... right...??

Virat : haan...

Manvi : tumpe phoda... toh yaar shock mein toh tujhe hona chahie hai na... I mean awkwardness honi chahie humare beech... par hum toh normal hain... Instead viren aur jeevs strange behave kar rahe hain... (trying to know viren's take on all this)

Virat : I too noticed that... and I asked viren also...

Manvi : so...?? What was his reaction...??

Virat : it was normal... As in he is ok with you and me being a couple... though I felt that he isn't happy or something like that...

Manvi : hmm... so are we...???

Virat : what...??

Manvi : a couple...

Virat : water... Will you have water...?? I am thirsty...

Manvi : virat stop diverting the topic...

Virat : I am not... pagal hai kya tu...??

Manvi (holding his hand) : tell me honestly virat... Tell me what you are feeling...?? Please...

Virat : just let it be yaar...

Manvi : cmon dude... Whats the big deal...??

Virat : I don't want to spoil anything between us... I do feel something special for you... manvi mujhe darr lagta hai... what if everything gets screwed up and I end up in losing you... I cant live with your absence in my life... the void thereby created would kill me...

Manvi heard this and she realized how she have been playing with virat and his emotions. Just to make viren jealous, she said that she loves virat. At that time nothing mattered to her other than giving viren a reple... a tit for tat. viren hurted her and she in order to hurt viren, made virat an object of causing this pain and hurt... virat became just another game move for her.

Virat shook manvi a little...

Virat : dekh mujhe koi hindi film ka hero na samjhio ab...

Manvi : hero jaise baatein kar raha that toh main kya karun...??

Virat : I said whatever I really felt... I don't know whether I am the one for you or not... I just know that i want you beside me...

Manvi who was already heartbroken hugged virat. Suddenly in those few seconds he became something more than a friend for manvi... she found peace and an unknown pleasure in his arms...

Manvi : so are we together...???

Virat : we can be together but u have to promise that if I screw up things, you will come forward and make things fall into place... I don't want to lose you manvi... I want to give US a chance...

Manvi : I promise... I promise...

Virat : so that means we can be a couple now... mujhe koi tension nahi hai ab...

Manvi : tujhe tension kyun thi...?? (breaking the hug)

Virat : tension toh hoti hai na... hum dono jawaan hai aur hadd se jyada naughty, kuch ho gya toh...

Manvi : excuse me... (mouth in o' shaped)

Virat : kyun...??? Ho sakta hai manvi... Baat karna important tha... samjha kar hum abhi khud bacche hain...

Manvi : I will kill you... You jerk...

Virat : lo apni girlfriend se mjaak karna bhi gunaah hai...

Manvi : aise majaak next time kario, sarr phod dungi...

Virat : next time mein majaak nahi karunga... I promise baby... (running towards the hotel)

Manvi giggled and ran behind him...

Manvi : you are gone...

Virat : catch me first mannu turtle...

Manvi : hawww... Turtle...??? Arghhh...

Virat : come catch me first...

Manvi : get lost... hurr...

Virat : furr...

Manvi : ahhh (holding her leg)

Virat saw this and ran to manvi.

Virat: are you ok...?? Kaise lgi...??? Oye bol...

Manvi : ahhh... Its paining... Mujhe fracture ho gya lagta hai... (crying loudly)

Virat : shh... Its not a fracture... Stop your drama...

Virat picked manvi in his arms and started moving towards the hotel...

Virat : i mean cmon... Bhagna bhi nahi aata kya...?? Main nahi hota toh kya karti...??? Tummm bh-

Manvi was enjoying this and was teasing virat. Drawing unknown patterns on his neck or shoulders with her finger... This wasnt enough and manvi kissed his cheek making him stop in his tracks.

Manvi : virattt... (shaking him)

Virat : hmm...

Manvi : chalo na...

Virat : yeah...

Manvi : hum sach mein bahut fast hai... Nahi...??

Virat : kya...??

Manvi : people are watching us n they might be thinking that we are such a cute romantic couple...

Virat : chhiii... Kahan phas gaya main itni cheap ladki ke saath... (oh my god... how did I get struck with such a cheap girl...!!!)

Manvi : isko cheapness nahi besharami kehte hai mere dil jaaniya... (its not cheapness... Its called being shameless my beloved...)

Virat : ufff... Tu bhi na alag hi item hai... (uff... you are just unique)

Manvi : mera room aa gaya... Par itni jaldi kyun...??? (pulling him closer) (ohh we reached my room... but why so soon...???)

Virat : kyun matlab...?? Zindagi bhar tumhe baahon mein leke ghumunga kya...?? (soon means...??? I cant walk around taking you in my arms for the rest of my life...)

Manvi : kyun nahi ghumoge...??? Main pasand nahi hoon kya tumhe...??? (why wouldn't you...?? Don't you like me...??)

Virat : get down... Tera room...

Manvi : andar tak chod do na... Meri leg injured hai virat...

Virat : teri juban fracture kyun ni hoti... Manvi go inside...

Manvi : please na... Door pe kick karo khul jaega... I cant stand virat... Ahhh its paining...

Virat glared at manvi with fake anger and kicked open the door.

Manvi : ehsaan tera hoga mujh pe...

Virat : khud ko kya samajhti hai...

Manvi : hum dil de chuke sanam... Tere ho gye hain hum... Teri kasam...

Virat ignored manvi and took her to bed.

Virat : now rest here and i will call a doctor for you...

Manvi smiled and nodded her head. Virat turned to leave when manvi held his hand...

Virat : whats up now...???

Manvi : do you like jeevs...???

Virat : where is this coming from...???

Manvi : you kissed her at one point of time... Did you have feelings for her ever...???

Virat : no... It was plain n simple attraction... Nothing else...

Manvi : come here na virat... Sit with me...

Virat sat on the bed and saw jeevika who was hiding in the dressing area.

Manvi : do you love me...??

Virat : manvi... You relax sweetheart...

Manvi leaned close to virat

Virat : manvi...

Manvi : virat... I.. I love you... I really do...

Virat : lets just -

Manvi : kiss me...

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now i would love to see as much number of likes as possible... 😈 😈

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Teaser is quite interesting! Update di pls!!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
haye niii superb teaser !!!w8ing for uppu!!!! soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

Teaser is quite interesting! Update di pls!!! 😉

UPDATED AARU 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: abbay

haye niii superb teaser !!!w8ing for uppu!!!! soon

UPDATED ANKI 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Wow!!! I just can't believe this!😛

The update was awesome...👏👏👏👏👏

But it confused me a lot!😕

What is Manvi doing? She loves Viren or not?😕

And Virat?? Do he has feelings for Manvi?😉

Arghh! I'm just breaking my head!😆

Reguest: Please please please update in PMKK!😳

Take care!🤗

Love you!!!❤️
Edited by Angelic_Friend - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
grt update nainu ...
wht a fab work!!!!
viren nd virat convo...
awesome...
manvi nd virat they r fab!!!!!
Ohhh...kiss
nice update...
please cont soon!!!!!!

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