Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15*

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey everyone!
First of all, thank you for the AMAZING response you have given to this story! I am completely overwhelmed by the comments and PM's I got!

(Note to self- write more angst LOL)

I know I said it will be a two shot, but after writing the second part, I realised it was coming close to 5,000 words and wouldn't fit in one single part. Hence, this becomes a three-shot.
This post is converted to a note for you guys and an Index.

Edited by chibisuke - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
love the way you describe Khushi's emotions. We have seen it before how Arnav always take Khushi for granted. in fact the whole Raizada family fail to see the pain Khushi is hiding behind her fake smile.

Can't wait to read the next part. thanks for the PM
Posted: 9 years ago
Marriage is not just about being in love with your partner, its also about being that one companion that one person who will bring the smile on your face and talk even non consequential stuff with you...khushi's insecurity is so well described...i am somehow glad she did t go in front of him at that time...she definitely shouldn't have to work to make herself visible to her own husband...
Loved it
Looking forward to Arnav's thoughts

Thanks for the PM
Posted: 9 years ago
yes in that part i wanted to kill arnav i can understand khushi
Posted: 9 years ago
simply superb.loved it
Posted: 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updt

continue soon

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