Ab Ke Jo Bicherey ~pg 28 new n note~ - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
amna di aap ne abhi tuk cont nahi ki..........itne buzy ho gaye kia independence day ki tiyarrion mai ya koi aur baat hai........ 😆 .......acha jaldi cont kare jaldi.......... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
hey amna i just read ur stroy its toooooooooo gud. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
sorry guys ................

well 14th august this year is not only the important with the reason that it is our national day......but that day i have presentation of one of biggest projects in my life ........well tonight i m making final ........report closing .....if i get tired and need relaxtion during this ...i will might continue .....it is not the promise ...basically!
love u guys
i need ur prayers 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
amna dear ALL THE BEST with your project.. i hope you do very well... 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
all the best 4 ur project.
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
amna dear please try continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
amna dear please continue the story soon.. me waiting for the story eagerly... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
PART:4

sujal sitting on sofa....the best frenh furniture .white marble floor and brow , golden antique furniture ..and classic touches to drawing roomgving this corner of house the perfect look .perfect as life of sujal kashish........perfect as ria..their daughter..............who gets every thing before it come OUT OF HER MOUTH.she has best lothes , toys ....and every thing.else then that of care she need from her parents!

ria come down from stairs ....she sit besides her father sujal grewal ......

ria: dad...can i ask u some thing...

sujal: yes dear u dont need to take my permesion....

ria: dad he said u r not my father but HE

sujal: come again ..what u said

ria: dad yesterday when u and mom were at party....he came here....and said that.....he is my father not u...mom snatched me from him .....

sujal: who was he

ria: he was ak ....akshat....yes akshat...

sujal lost the colours of his face.......he look at ria...and hug embarraced her tight...

sujal: ur my daughter..i m ur father....u r ria sujal grewal..get it....

he yelled so hard..that kashish who was talking with mrs.saberwal ....about latest launch of manish malhotra's collection.....

kashish: mrs.saberwal ..we will definately go ther and purchase some thing good ..but i guess sujal need me down stairs she runs down stairs

kashish: sujal kiya howa ...why u yelled

sujal: kashish he is back he will ria away from us.....

kashish: who sujal?

sujal: akshat!

coming up: kashish's flash back finally
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
amna dear a very nice part...... 👏
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👏 par ab yeh kya yeh akshat kyun wapas aa gaya hain....... 😡 bechare sujal aur kashish..i feel sorry for them... 😭 i want sujal & angad to bash akshat nicely..mazaa aayega... 😉 but dear part bohat chota tha... 😭 ab please jaldi se continue karna & that too please try & post a big part... me will be waiting for the next part...😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
Aamna di
Great part!
Lekin please aap thoda zyaada likha keejiye. Your story leaves us asking for more. Please di, comtinue soon!!!!!

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