Ab Ke Jo Bicherey ~pg 28 new n note~ - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
great part but was too small. Pls continue soon waiting for it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
hi
yar ur story simply rocks. luv reading it plz post the next part soooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63

part:5

The study room…curtain are shut tightly so no ray of sun even dare to come inside….she is sitting all alone in room …..the past memories are hitting her badly …tears rolling down from her eyes………….

FLASH BACK

Kashish rahija the hottest girl in the university campus was in love with hottest hunk of college that's akshat shergill …they spend most of their times together …middle sex uni..where they studied …..the time passed one3 year later they decided to move on …..akshat ask kashish to share apartment with him …and she kept all values behind ..or actually through them in dustbin and start living with him …..son they start sharing physical relation too……after 4 month when their studies were at end they came to know that kashish was pregnant with akshat's child ….akshat showed fake happiness ..and very next when kashish woke up she was alone .akshat had left her ….there was nothing in apartment else then a note from akshat ….

Dear kashish

I m sorry I have to leave u like this I never want this to happen we share a relation that do not mean that u give birth to my kid I will not bother if u give him or her birth or else kill this thing ……I m sorry again my parents last week told me they want me to marry charu ..my first love …
With love akshat ..

Then kashish tried to kill herself ….when sujal married her ..he was her old friend ….he was the man ..who gave her new life!!!!!!!!!!

FLASH BAK ENDS

Now today he is her husband …….the person who love her daughter as his own ..she know more then him he is hurt …!




Sneha entered in sujal's office she was angry ..she yelled
Sneha: that is more then enough sujal ..it was more embarrassing ..They insulted me …sneha ..how dare them
Sujal: sneha u r sneha not a first lady of England
Sneha: shut up sujal ..fire that kashish now leave her …..divorce her and marry me
Sujal disbelief at he just heard he turned around …..and give her tight slap right on her left cheek!
sneha was shoked to death ..she yelled

sneha: tum mujey maara u slapped me for that ***** ......she got another slap ..and that was from angad..yes he come here...

angad: sneha u deserve worst then thsi ...now plz get out of here ..before i loose my temper

coming up: angad hit akshat .....sneha mingle with akshat .....worst plan ......why aksaht want ria suddenly 😃

Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
Dii
s usual gr8 part but please write a ittle longer. Ye dil maange more!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
nice part
continue soon
& kill akshat if u want.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
hey amna nice parts..... 👏
waiting for the next.... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
yar u r simply superc just great. wat a part but itna chota kyou tha?? plz thore bare parts likha karo na 😃 i just luv reading ur story
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
amna dear tooo goodd...i liked the part very much.. it was totally cool.. 👏
mazaa aagaya..sujal aur angad ne sneha ko thappad maarra..kaash do chaar aur thappad pad jaathe usse.. 😆
lekin ab yeh kya akshat aur sneha get togther & plot aganist sujal & kashish..very bad.. 😡
anyway it's ok kyunke haar tho un dono ki hi hogi na..losers... 😉 ab please continue soon...me will be waiting for the next part.. 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
Great part. par itna chota parts nahin chalenge Pls longer part. Waiting for the next part post it soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
gud job aamna.....do continue soon plz...

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