Ab Ke Jo Bicherey ~pg 28 new n note~ - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
part :6

sujal and angad are sitting in office ...the envirnment is quite ....when the door open figure enter ....a 6 ft man with average built and a charming face...! angad looked and his eyes filled with anger .....he gets up and about to punch that man when sujal yelled ..
sujal: stop .....stop angad...
angad: sujal .....is ki himmat kesey hoi yahan anney ki how dare he ..he grab the collar of that guy.
angad: how dare u ...
guy: leave me angad ...he release himself with the jerk
angad: what the hell u r doing here ...
guy: i m here for a talk ..
angad: what .....we are not interested ..go now ..
guy: see angad ...simply i want my daughter back ...sujal lost colours of his face ..now he loose his temper and grab the collar of this guy
sujal: teri himmat kesey hoi meri beti ke barey main baat kerney ki ...
guy: tumhari beti ...shayad tum bhool gye sujal jab kashish ki shaadi tum se hoi thi ..tab wo merey bachey ki maa banney wali thi ...akshat ke bache ki .....
sujal: aksht aur tum bhi bhool rey ho ke tum ne us zamewari ko kabool kerney se inkar kerdia tha
akshat : magar ab main wo zamewari ....kabool kerney ayya hoon ..
angad: akshat stay from ria other wise ...
akshat : angad ....tum kuch nahi kersaktey ...samjhey tum apney kaam se kaam rakho apni pregnnant biwi ka khayal rakho samjhey werna ...kahin tumey koi nuksaan na phoonch jaye
angad: hey u ..stay out of my family and sister's life ..
akshat : arey haan ..kashish kahan hai .....bhoot din usey kiss nahi kia i really ....before he could continue angad punch him right on his face ...!
angad: dont u dare to take her name again ....

akshat's mouth start bleeding he leave the place in anger....

COMING UP: **wait 4 tommorow ...lol**
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
amna diii kool part........but itna chota part........ 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
Aamna di this ia absolutely not fair!!! Itne chote parts nahi likh sakte aap!
Vaise aapki story is just superb 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
Aamna di this ia absolutely not fair!!! Itne chote parts nahi likh sakte aap!
Vaise aapki story is just superb 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
very nice... 👏
please continue soon.. 😃
Mrs.Fr.. thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
i m sorry guys but i m busy with other stuff also 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
kewl part.......akshat got lotsa punches.....gud job.....n no need 4 sorry..itz ok...v can understand...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
Aamna the story is just fantastic 👏plz try to cont soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
Amna plz continue soon. Just cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_face86

i m sorry guys but i m busy with other stuff also 😃

It's ok Aamna di! Hum intezaar karenge. Lekin aap jab free hon to please bada part likhiyega!

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