Flight of the sparrows ~ ArHi OS (NOTE Pg10) - Page 6

It was too beautiful ...words cant express what it made me feel
I hope all those children who have gone un timely from our world
Have a blessed afterlife full of happiness. ...

beautiful..very well written..😊

I read about the rape incident on the internet. Truly horrifying. Made me physically sick. I hope the rapist rots in the deepest pit of hell. 

A very beautiful OS

Sometimes when the story is written in Hindi it hits me way more, I know that sounds odd but the words and the deeper meaning they have in Hindi really get to you

I can't even imagine what the parents of that five year old are going through. My thoughts and prayers go out to them

You writers are super talented, the way you weave emotions thorough the story is just amazing

So so so heartbreaking! It was written so amazingly, made me cry! I really don't know what to say right now, so I'll probably come and post another comment later on xx 

This was just too heartbreaking to read. 

Superb...emotional and heart breaking

My God , you write so beautifully. My eyes were moist when I read this.

When I see little kids in pain or dying my heart cries. They are just so tiny, delicate, fragile and innocent. Unfortunately all over the world they have to go through things which neither can their mind understand nor their body can bear the pain :'(


You depicted the loss of a dear child through this OS very well :-)

beautifully written...lovedit...it was heartbreaking though...u r an amazing writer...please update me wenever u write a new one...