VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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sweettasi

@sweettasi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

hey ya! first of all thnx i saw my name on ur pm list...😊

The update was awesome yr...i mean i literary cried while reading this part...😭 although all parts r vry santi santi..bt dis 1 was way too emotional...i mean d way she was hugging his shirt nd picture, d emails , her talks nd everything...made me cry...😭 cant help it m too emotional...

u r a awesome writer ya...👍🏼 u make everything so real...👏

plz update fast i cant wait...tooo despo u knw...lol

PS. DONT FORGET TO PM MEEE

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Dina

@-DeeNaa-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

WHAT?? Don't kill me yet hahaha. Too much suspense? Keep guessing.

Pssshhh am not gona kill u! GO DIE!!! Like seriously!! I was enjoying the last bit when the phone came and I was all crazy and excited and BOOM u decide t stop right thr! Meanie! :P But seriously like what advantage do u get exactly by torturing us like this?? OMG they sent her to the mental Hospital :O :( I think u shud have been sent there instead :P :P :P Anyway freaking awesome update! U better finish this up soon the suspense is killing its so hard to wait!!!

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vaarya

@Vaarya53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

just loved this part...it was damn emotional...it feels so sad to see manvi in this condition..hope things get better soon ...n. once again id like to say u very beautifully potray every emotion...waiting for the next one...

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@wanderlust09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Emotional n heart touching ...
Manvi...still blieves dat her Virat wud cum bak sum day...
The closet scene wz truly heartwrenching...
N her e-mails "Life widout u isnt worth living...m losing this battle of life".. 😭 😭 dunno ...just luvd these lines...literally made me cry...
her fear of going away n living widout evn his memories shook her to the core...
But i c a ray of hope in the ending... 😊
Cont soon..n plzz do pm me wen ya update...thanku!!! 🤗

Edited by alicemath - 12 years ago

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dania6

@dania6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

amazing :):) plz disclose d suspense soon

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nagaraju

@raju_sky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

oh my god its really heart touching update, really ur story making me cry...really sad for manvi here, pls bring back virat pls, cant see manvi like this, the love she has for him, its adorable..and dont want they send manvi to mental hospital...and email sending by manvi was heart touching...

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-GayathriK-

@-GayathriK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

You kill me with suspense in each part nishaaa!!! :P

i was so immersed in it, reading without a break and my excitement was just building up and... and ...tadaaa its over! :P hehehehehe

Awww it was just too emotional! Maanvi's condition which is getting more and more complicated and worse each day and she continuously talking and asking about virat was just too sad!

This part even covered vanshika's point of view and her promises that she gave to virat when he left! the feelings of a mom, maanvi's helplessness without virat and virat's parents trying their best to bring back maanvi from all these, all were just really emotional especially when you even put up that letters! awww i just felt too sad! :(

Best of luck for your exams and assignments! It is really annoying when teachers give us projects of 100 pages and tell us its really easy! Arhhh i always feel like telling the teacher to do it if it is that easy at those moments! sorry that was just another students emotions! :P

I am waiting for the next update ;)

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kinz

@kinz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Again not even a hint of viraat is going to cumback 😕 but seriously awesome manvi is going crazy but sending her to mental institude was even worst idea plz bring viraat back...

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

As usual awesome update.. Girl you express emotions so wonderfully.. the way you link past and present.. loved it.. Can see thngs running infrnt of my eyes.. And her Mail.. how helpless she is.. She was dependent on internet only.. Thru mail she was sharing her feelings.. So touching.. loved it.. Fab Nisha.
And abt PS thanks will wait for your personal Blog :-D <3
And all the best for your exams!!!!