VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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ekta

@Ekta001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

ooomggg this os is so sadd😭 i luv ur writing👏... i have read 3 parts in one go... ur an amazing writer... plz pm me whenever u update...

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CHANDANA

@chandana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Awesome update!!

She reads his email everyday and writes a new one to him everyday... so sad...

Varun and Vanshika are also hurting... And who called Varun?? I hope Virat is alive!!

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Aashika_virman

@Aashika_virman

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

i didn't read the update yet...

going out of station...will surely give comment once i read...

i didn't get pm...i am in pm list...

please dont forget to pm me next part...

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Aenna

@Aenna

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Nisha my name is in pm list
nd i didnt got d pm for part 3 :(
but ya d update was amazinggg
yr how much u r gona make me cryy its
tooo emotional seeing manvi lyk dat
plzzz update asap nd i want a update of
break my heart...plz

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Disha

@daydreamer9

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

arghhh...the goddess of cruelty(that's u of course😛)...kill manvi already.the pain is unbearable!!!!!!ufff...i'll never fall in love with anyone.i swear!!!!hv u read the novel 'p.s. i love u'??or somehow hv seen the movie??i felt similar kind of pain there too.god forbid anyone goes through this kind of pain.will u bring virat back😃???plz bring him back.plz plz plz.the suspense...it's getting on my nerves.

i amn't good at expressing feelings.so can't write an essay on 'how i felt reading this update'.care to explain what u meant by 'proper comment'?

p.s. u r cruel.i didn't receive a pm :(

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SS4MaNan

@SS4MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

why r u doing dis to me.like really WHY??? im crying buckets here man.like literally buckets😭😭😭.but trust me da update can't get any better!!!!!👏da flashback part where he asks his mom's word was just...i was like awww...da part where manvi was hugging his shirt n sleeping,yeah from there through da entire update i was sobbing😭.poor manvi my heart just goes out to her.u hav made her suffer too much.i mean u hav sent her to a freakkin mental hospital gurl u r cruel😡.hmm so something is waiting for them.i im waiting for da next part!!! continue soon😊

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Amazing update ...👏👏👏...the way u showed the feelings...u described it...u portrayed it...is really superb superb superb...👍🏼...this is really emotional...😭😭...poor manvi...the way u protrayed her character...brilliant👍🏼..the mail was really heat touching...it really made me sad...😭😭...the flashbak part of virat taking promise...it was like so so sad...😭...beautifully written Nisha...⭐️⭐️...this is really a super duper awesome update..n i the song is nice too⭐️...wat happen at the end...who is at the door...omg this suspense is killing me...really excited to read next😃...looking forward ...will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the upcoming pm...😊

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Ammu_Darling

@Ammu_Darling

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Hi dear,
My tears are flowing continuously as if they are in the finals of some race.
U knw wat, ur OS drive my heart singing to the tune that this is the reflection of reality.
U r a fabulous writer.
While i was reading, i feel like i am watching the scenario lively.
Oh god, i'm speechless.
Good job dear. . .
Plz pm me when u update.

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Awww again its so emotional...cant see her like this...waiting fr virat...cont soon

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Anagha

@anu1989

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Hawww *Mannu style* That was so mean of U to stop there Brilliant Update 👏

Now with Mannu even I am waiting for Viraat to cum back 😭

She peeked in only to find her sleeping on the floor hugging his shirt.She was holding his picture close to her heart at the same time hugging his shirt. My Poor Mannu 😭 That email thing again was so touching !!!

So sumone from Viraat's side have contacted Varun...Eeekkks I feel next part will give a clue of Viraat being alive sumwhere ...Pls make him cum back soon 😃 I can't see Mannu in this condition hmmmph...

P.S Why Viraats of ur stories are so loving & caring that each time I read any of ur new works , I fall for them even harder 😳 😆