My 2nd Telugu poem - Holi confession

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.
 
This is my second attempt at a Telugu poem. It is the holi week on IPK Telugu on Maa TV, so thought of writing these lines based on the Holi confession.
 
 
Picture Credit: indi52
 
Khushi:
Ee velaloney enduku gundello inni parugulu
Pratisaarila jarigene manasulo ee vintalu
Mee chenta cherinappudu, na gundeloni chappudu
Swaasakanna veganga parugunenduku
 
Moola kaaranaanikai prati chota vetika
Naa manasuney nenu mari mari adiga 
Ae jawabu teliyaka, ae daari tochaka 
Ee rozu mimmalini adugutunnanu 
 
Arnav:
Nee gunde veganga kottukuntunnappudu
Naa gundelo kooda vegamaiyye chappudu
Neekunna anubhooti, naku kooda untundi
Ekamaiyyenu mana hrudaya spandanamulu
 
 
Translation: 
 
Khushi:
Why only at this time, so many runnings in my heart  
Every time these strange things happen in my heart
When I am near you, the sound of my heart
why does it run faster than the breath
 
I searched everywhere for the basic reason
I asked my heart again and again
For lack of reply, for lack of finding any way  
Today I am asking you
 
Arnav:
When your heart beats fast
The sound of my heart too speeds up
The feeling you have, I too have
Our heartbeats become one
 
 
Link to my first Telugu poem: Khushi's breakdown
Link to my Index: DurgaS's Index
 
Wishing everybody a HAPPY UGADI in advance. 😊
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chala  chala bagundi e poem👏
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ch a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a la bavundi
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Very good Durga and Happy Ugadi to you also .

UGADI SUBHAKANSHALU

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When I am near you, the sound of my heart
why does it run faster than the breath
 
When your heart beats fast
The sound of my heart too speeds up
The feeling you have, I too have
Our heartbeats become one
 
 
Durga this is awesome 👏👏
You celebrate Ugadi 😃 me too...Happy Ugadi to you too

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Very nice Durga. Specifically liked the use of plural from KhrushI giving it a sense of realism! 

Happy Ugadi!
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@divsarunfan, @basb
 
Thank you sooo much 😊  
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Originally posted by: chalhov

Very good Durga and Happy Ugadi to you also .

UGADI SUBHAKANSHALU

 
 
Thanks Chalhov. Meeku kooda Ugadi Subhakankshalu. 😃 
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Originally posted by: supriya.arshi

When I am near you, the sound of my heart
why does it run faster than the breath
 
When your heart beats fast
The sound of my heart too speeds up
The feeling you have, I too have
Our heartbeats become one
 
 
Durga this is awesome 👏👏
You celebrate Ugadi 😃 me too...Happy Ugadi to you too

 
 
Thank you so much, Supriya. Great, Happy Ugadi to you too. 😃 
 
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Originally posted by: Horizon

Very nice Durga. Specifically liked the use of plural from KhrushI giving it a sense of realism! 


Happy Ugadi!

 
 
Thanks, Horizon. Happy Ugadi to you too. 😃