My first poem in Telugu on Arshi with translation

Hello everybody,

 

Most of us have been watching IPK Telugu in Maa tv and we know that the intense hate marriage track has started. I have written a poem based on this track. My first ever poem in Telugu and it is based on Arshi. Hope you all like it.

 

This poem is about Khushi's thoughts after the hate marriage, after the Gupta family leaves her and goes away and Khushi is left alone in the hall.

 

Episode 192

 

 

Ae neraaniki naaku siksha padindi ila

Rakshasuduga maraadu rakumarudu aela

Madhura kshnaala kosam kalalu kannanu

Tiyyani maatala kosam eduru choosanu

 

Oka oopulo manasu virigipoyindi

Dwesha tufaanulo pelli ayipoyindi

Jarigina daaniki kaaranam teliyaledu

Adigina prasnaku badulu ivvaledu

 

Baadhato tirigi vellipoyindi sonta janamantaa

Ontariga migili poyaanu anaadhaga

 

Translation:

 

For what crime did I get this punishment

Why did the prince turn into a demon (rakshas)

I dreamt of sweet moments

I waited for sweet words

 

In one move, my heart broke

In a hate storm, marriage took place

Did not know the reason for what happened

Did not give reply to the questions asked

 

With grief my own people went back

And I remained like an orphan

 

 

Link to the index for my other poems: DurgaS's Index 

 

My other two Telugu poems:

 

Holi confession

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3526860 

 

Maunam

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3670400

 

 

Edited by DurgaS - 10 years ago

Wonderful poem. Chala bagundi.
I think, Pelli ayipoyindi anekante Pelli jarigipoyindi ante inka baguntendemo. Because virigipoyindi and jarigipoyindi rhyming la untundi. Don't mind. It's just my opinion.

Donno telgu but after reading the translation i can say tht ur poem is AWESUM!!! :)

Originally posted by: dimple288

Wonderful poem. Chala bagundi.
I think, Pelli ayipoyindi anekante Pelli jarigipoyindi ante inka baguntendemo. Because virigipoyindi and jarigipoyindi rhyming la untundi. Don't mind. It's just my opinion.

Thanks, actually jarigipoyindi ane rasanu, kaani next line lo malli jarigina daniki ani repeat chesanu kabatti malli adi maarchanu.

Originally posted by: HeBarun21

Donno telgu but after reading the translation i can say tht ur poem is AWESUM!!! :)

 

durga,

i wish i could understand telegu. but even in translateion it's lovely. the last two lines, 👏. orphan again. all her "hahakar" as we say in bangla, seems to be in those rounded long gripping telegu words. really, such a night it was for a her. that she recovered at all...

Originally posted by: indi52

durga,

i wish i could understand telegu. but even in translateion it's lovely. the last two lines, 👏. orphan again. all her "hahakar" as we say in bangla, seems to be in those rounded long gripping telegu words. really, such a night it was for a her. that she recovered at all...

 

Chala ba rasav... Supeer... :-D

Nice dear...nicely written..koncham emotional but loved it...keep going..keep writing...

Originally posted by: swat.g

Chala ba rasav... Supeer... :-D

  Edited by DurgaS - 11 years ago