SEQUEL OS: EMPTINESS... Last part. PLS READ PG11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Part 2.
Chotu n rathor com to her..
Ri: sir...woh arjun sir...?
Ra: bohot gusse mei hai, hum policwale hai riya, aksar aisa hota k kayi case hume beeti purani baate yaad dila dey...
par hume apna farz to nibhana parhega na... Khair chorho...
wo shant ho jayega, get bac 2 work.
Ri: yes sir!

par riya ka man kam pe kaha lage, she kept glancing at his cabin door, 1.5 ghante guzar gaye par arjun ne darwaza ni khola.. Dupeher k do bajne ko the, they wer 2 go 4 lunch break..
Shree n chotu came to her cabin
C: yaar ri chal, bohot bhuk lagi hai..
Sh: ha yar, aj tujhe chingri malaikari khilaunga chal..
Ri: ha tum dono jao, mai abhi ayi,
C, Sh: Par... Oh ok.
they turn to leav...
Ri: acha chotu, ek ad marathi dishes k nam bologe?
C: ri! Wat r u up 2?
kahi tu un k liye khana lejane ki nah soch Rahi na?
Ri: um...
unhone subhe se kuchni khaya aur jab kaka se chai bhij wayee tab bhi inkar kar diya..
C: ri, tu mere samajh k bahr hai,
saying so he leavs..
Sh: ar koto din? Ri...akhir kab tak?
Ri: joto din beche achi..

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Deleted_Account

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Chotu tels her the nam of few dishes..
she goes 2 cafe n ordr Kanda poha, n raita,
She takes it 2 his cabin n knocks..
no reply..
she turns the knob n enters..
the scn shocks her...
the whole cabin is in a bad state n arjun siting on the floor in a disheveld state his head resting on the couch, eyes closed, tear stains on his cheeks..
clutching a CD n the wedng photo of him n roshing...
Riya puts the food tray on the table n locs the door...
She looks at his form n is spchls...
unse kuch kehna to door ki baat wo khud kuch samajh ni paa ri thi,
woh arjun rawte jo itna tough lagta tha k patthar bhi un k saamne harh maan jaaye, ab itni vulnerable tha k ek hawa jhoka hi use torh dega,
riya ka dimaag kehraha tha k she shud leav bt her heart said, k ab jab unhe kisi ki zarurat hai, she has to b wid him bhale hi unhe manjur ho na ho,
_____
AE SANAM YAAD RAKHIYO UMAR BHAR DENGE TERA SAATH,
MANJUR HO NA HO AB NA CHORENGE TERA HATH..
ASHQ YE BEHJANE DEY
SARE RAZ KHUL JANE DEY
HU JAB YAHA MAI TO DARNE KI KYA BAAT!

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Deleted_Account

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

part 3
Riya gently places her hand on his shouldr n cals.
Ri:Arjun... Aankhe kholiye..
Ar: nhi..
he grips her hand... Meanwhyl she jst realizes she dnt say SIR.
Ar: nahi, tumhe phirse mat jao mujhe chor k mai kitna akela par gaya pls na jao roshni, maine agr aankhe khol di, i knw, tum chali jaogi...
riya feels a pain in hr heart wen he cals out 4 roshni, yet.
Ri: arjun, arjun sir..
She sits beside him..
Hearng the word sir he coms out of his tranc n seeing riya he pushes her away n gets up.
Ar: Riya!!!!
how dare, you..
himmat kaise hui mere cabin mei bina ijazat k ghus ne ki,
knock karna nhi seekha kabhi?.
he pins her to the wall..
Ri: sir woh mai...
Ar: shut up! I warn u ms. Mukherjee aainda kabhi mere cabin me na ghusna..
mujhe tumhari shakal tak dekhna munasib nhi,
dur raho mujhse,
leav me alone samjhi,
Now get out..
She leavs crying..
she bumps into rathor
Ra: kya hua riya?
Ri: kuchni sir,
pls sir can i take leav today..
Ra: ha, ok bt agr koi bhi problm ho, jst let me knw.
She leavs wid tears in hr eyes.

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awsum update...!!!

loved it...!!

awww lovd riya's care for arjun...!!!

arjun se usse scold kia...!!!😭

continue soon...!!

cant wait for the next part...!!!

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hii dr thnxx 4 da pm...widout it main ye pad nahi pati thnx agnn...

yaappp payal n kunchu ki stryy to thi hi awsm...bt u strtd it as ur style n i like it too...gd job dr...ek aur chij tumahari mujhe bahota achhi lagti hay ke u alwas use nm of my fav food's (chingri malaikari😛)tumhari ek ss ko rd kiyatha waha vi kuch aur food 's ke name the🤪...

ne way bahot paka liya...now da main thing...u intrduc sm new chrctr r well...riya alsop lost hr bro...poor girl...n he s arjun n rathor mentr ..intrstng...

lv da caring riya...bt arjun as all ws usko rula diaa ...bt usse pahele usne riya ko roshni samjha tha..😳...

bt arjun ki pain vi bahot bura lagta hay...n ye cd...god ab us cd ko dekhke bechara hayse thik rahega😭

wtng 4 da next prt

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Deleted_Account

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: naughtykittyyy
hii dr thnxx 4 da pm...widout it main ye pad nahi pati thnx agnn...
yaappp payal n kunchu ki stryy to thi hi awsm...bt u strtd it as ur style n i like it too...gd job dr...ek aur chij tumahari mujhe bahota achhi lagti hay ke u alwas use nm of my fav food's (chingri malaikari😛)tumhari ek ss ko rd kiyatha waha vi kuch aur food 's ke name the🤪...
ne way bahot paka liya...now da main thing...u intrduc sm new chrctr r well...riya alsop lost hr bro...poor girl...n he s arjun n rathor mentr ..intrstng...
lv da caring riya...bt arjun as all ws usko rula diaa ...bt usse pahele usne riya ko roshni samjha tha..😳...
bt arjun ki pain vi bahot bura lagta hay...n ye cd...god ab us cd ko dekhke bechara hayse thik rahega😭
wtng 4 da next prt

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Deleted_Account

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

@naughtykittyy.
hey thank u so much yaar...
tumne mera dil khush kardiya,

aise hi lambe lambe comnt dete rehna n i promis k mai apne frndz ko niraash nahi karungi...

by the way...
wats ur nam dear

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sumuZAMAN
@naughtykittyy.
hey thank u so much yaar...
tumne mera dil khush kardiya,

aise hi lambe lambe comnt dete rehna n i promis k mai apne frndz ko niraash nahi karungi...

by the way...
wats ur nam dear

im isha...signature pe dekhlo😉...

n wtng 4 more😊

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Pt 4.
She aimlesly walk on the streets of Delhi...
ghar jaane ki usne leav toh liy thi par ghar ab ghar nhi lagta tha...
kya karti wo ghar jaakar...waisa ghar jaha maa baap ka saaya na ho...bhai behen ki shararat na ho...kisi apne ka pyaar na ho...
khair...
jis kisise bhi usne pyaar kiya,
sab usse bichar gaye...
All this thoughts wer swirling in her mind when she bumped into a little boy...
his icecream fell..
Ri: im so sorry beta,aaiye mai aapko naya laa deti hu..
Boy: its ok didi,aapne jaanbujhke thorhi na girayi
*toothy grin*
par didi, meri riya wait kar rai hai,
Ri: riya? Arre wo to mera nam hai,aapka nam kya hai, ok chalo hum icecream lete hai.,
they go to icecream truck.
Boy: riya to meri cutee si littl sister hai mai use pyar se Imli bulata hu.
he takes the icecream..
Boy: thankU didi,mai avinash..saying this he runs to his sistr.
____
KAL PE NA HAI AFSO AB.
AAJ PE NA GHAMAND,
SAPNE TO DEKHE THE BARSO SE,
DIL ME HAI UMANG,
EK KAL TO ARAHA,
USKI KARU TAIYARI,
ZINDAGI TO MERI EK SAVARI

Edited by sumuZAMAN - 12 years ago

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Deleted_Account

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Pt. 5
Ri: hey dugga ma. Ye kaisi leela apki?
mera ateet mere samne is tarha se jhalkega kabhi na socha tha.
ye larka avinash,
iski behen ka nam bhi riya, aur woh bhi isse Imli bulata hai...
Bilkul Dado ki tarha..
FLASHBACK.
2 children wer playing on the swing.
Boy: are!
dheere se tu gir jayegi shona...
Girl: Dado!!! Aap bi na amesha aise karte o jaise mai gir jaungi,
mai ab bowot big ogyi u na..
Boy: Imli! Ha, ha, tu 'BOWOT BIG OGYI' hai...
haha
*he laughs*
Girl: dado aap aise mera fun na karo. Mai dugga ma ko complain kaddungi...
Boy: Ok sory baba, chal tujhe icecream khilata hu...
they happily go to eat icecream n hav fun..
FLASHBACK ENDS

Ri: she sits on the park bench thinking all this, whereas.,
In ETF offic.
Arjun is standing near the window.
when sam enters.
Ra: wah rawte...
excelnt!
u nevr tend to disapoint me.
Ar: kya hua rathor, seedhe seedhe batao...
Ra: woh to khair jaane hi dey...
is room ki ye halat kyu kiya?
Ar: ye MERA cabin hai mai jaanu...
Ra: oh Ok... Par...

SCROLL DOWN...
N DO COMNT!

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