SEQUEL OS: EMPTINESS... Last part. PLS READ PG11 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
WHERE IS THE UPDATE????
KAB SE SCROLL DOWN KAR RAHI HU????
WHERE IS THE UPDATE???
AGAR UPDATE NAHI MILA,TOH,TUM TOH GAYE KAAM SE,SAMJHHE YA SAMJHHAU?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
nice
waiting waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
awsum update...!!!
feeling bad for riya...!!!
flashback scene of riya and her dado was cute...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Pt. 5b
Ra: Oh! Toh itne dino se mai iss galat fahmi me tha k ye cabin mere best frnd. Juno ka hai..
bt ab to tu Arjun Rawte hai,
Juno nhi.
jab tu hi sab kuch bhula chuka hai mai kyu yaad rakhu rawte...
Ar: dekho rathor in baato ko phirse mat dauhrao...
maine kuch nhi bhulaya.
mujhe aj bhi hamari dosti yaad hai, bus...
Ra: mai intezar karunga rawte...
kyu ki dosti ki hai nibhani parhegi,
aj bhale hi,
tum mujhe apna dost na mano par mai aj bhi tera dost hu juno...
isiliye kehraha hu. Mujhe bohot achi tarha se malum hai k tum Roshni se beintehaa mohabbat karte ho... Aj wo nahi,
par koi aur to hai jo TUM se bepanha pyaar karta hai...
usse dukh mat do rawte...
Rathor turns to leav...
Ar: Radish!!
thnx yaar, aj mujhe teri zarurat thi
Ra: wat! Phirse bula..
Ar: Radish!
Ra: Saale Juno,
tu nhi Sudhrega na...
They grin n hug.
Ra: jao juno, atleast dosti ka hath to barhao,
Only Riya can soothe ur emptiness.
Ar: ya...
um sory sam.
mujhe aise baat nhi karna chahiye tha.
Ra: yaar! Koi ni.

So rawte goes 2 apologyz 2 riya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Perfecto...
I loved it.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Pt 6.
Arjun goes to riya's home bt watchman says she dnt com.
he gets worried coz she left ofc 2 hrs ago n her home distance is 15mins only..
he cals hr cel.
bt she doesnt answr it..
he cals shree.
Ar: helo! Shree! Kaha ho..
Sh: sir, mai to chotu k sath bahar hu... Rathor sir ko bataye k aye hai.
Ar: ha ok. Um tumhara tablet tumhare sath hai? Agr ho to riya k phn ka exact location batao mujhe.
Sh: um ha sir.
ek min.
karol bagh k pas ek park hai. Waha se signal araha hai.
mai apko xact locatn txt karta hu,
um koi problm sir?
Ar: nhi. Ok bye.
he recievs the txt n drives like a maniac...
on the way he remembrd that mayb she hadnt eaten anythng.
He stopd in frnt of a cnfctnary shop n bought her fav. Misti doi. N reachd the spot...
sinc the park was huge, it took him a few mins to find him..
there he saw her sitting on the bench..
wid messy hair,
creased shirt.
eyes wet.
mascara stains on hr cheek...
yet looking divine..
___
a broken angel fallen from sky..
to soothe his pain.
and fillup his emptiness..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
pt.7
RIYA'S POV.
phone is ringing.
she checks it and see its him...
Kya kehna hai ab unhe? Phirse kya sunana chahte hai wo mujhe?
kyu...
she doesnt pick up the phone...
her eyes fill up.
she close them wishing, k ab bus use koi na jagay...
nahi jaagna, itni dukh sehne ki shamta nhi bachi usme..
she feels sum1s presenc...
she opens hr eyes n see him...
Ri: nhi, riya, tu phirse yu sapne mat dekh.
dukh k alawa tujhe mila hi kya hai. Woh kabhi ni ayenge...
She closes her eyes.
Ar: riya aankhe kholo pleas.
Ri: nhi arjun...
u wil go away... Frm me...
mai nhi kholungi apne ankhe...
Ar: riya, mai sach me yaha mei yaha hu please ek bar meri taraf dekho...
Ri: sach?
Ar: hmm..
he touches her cheek.
The moment she feel his she coms out of hr tranc..
______
precap.
Ri: arjun SIR. aap chahte kya..
pls leav my sight.
I feel lyk HATING u sir.

I WANT LAMBE COMNT. I WIL Pm pt 8a to those who comnt.
nhi karoge comnt toh u r BLOCKD.
mai ap logo esp. Silent readrz k is atitude se bohot hurt hu.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Lovely lovely lovely.
Aage kya hoga?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
nyc dear
sry like buton nt wrking
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
i really like ur os its v different frm others. i hope riya apni past arjun ko patha dhe. plx continue soon n plx pm me

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