SEQUEL OS: EMPTINESS... Last part. PLS READ PG11 - Page 4

so far the story is going really interesting

I'm absolutely hooked to this ff and love the storyline...also loved d name. Radish for rathore. Pls update soon n pm me too. Thanks.

Originally posted by: Bhaktikapasi

I'm absolutely hooked to this ff and love the storyline...also loved d name. Radish for rathore. Pls update soon n pm me too. Thanks.

thnx 4 lyking it dear.
um cn u pls add me to ur buddy list so i cn pm u?
n um i hav probz regarding sending PMs toh kabhi kabhi milega aur baqi din adjust karna parhega dear...

Originally posted by: shaff

i really like ur os its v different frm others. i hope riya apni past arjun ko patha dhe. plx continue soon n plx pm me

ha dear i wil pm u. Pls add me 2 ur buddy 4 it.
n riya batayegi zarur...
pehle do char chamatt to mar ley..
aage aage dekho karti hu mai kya?
n trac difrnt hai, payal di ki badolat...
parte rehna,
comnt karti rehna.

Poem update 4 pt 8a.
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YE KAISI KHALISH, NA MALUM HAME...
YE VEERANIYA, KYU DIL ME JAGE.
HO MORA PIYA BASANTI TO RUTHE RE,
AB BOLO KAISE MANAU USE...
WOH KYA JAANE
ALBELI SANAM MORA...
DIL KI KYA MAJBOORI,
USE TO LAGE HAI, HAME BHAATI HAI YE DOORI...
UNKI LEELA NA MAI SAMAJH PAU,
CHAL KAPATI MORE PIYA,
RAJ KARE HAI DIL PE MOREY,
CHURAYE HAI MORE JIYA..
BANJAR BASTI ME WO RANG LEKE AAYE THEY,
ANDHERI RAATO K SAPNE.
KISKI NAZAR LAGI THI HAME,
BICHRE SARE APNE..
KHAFA NA HU MAI UNSE..
DUKHO KI BAHE HAI NADIYA
SAALO KARI HAI INTEJAR MAINE.
TARPI HU KAYI SADIYA...
JAB ZARURAT THI KISI APNE KI,
KOI NA THA RE MORE PAAS...
BHAYE AB CHAEN MOHE,
AAYE NA KHUSHIYA RAAS.
JAB CHAHE WO DIL LAGAYE JAB CHAHE MUH MORHE,
KYU BEDARDI PIYA MORE DIL KO TORHE?
YE NA KEHTI K UNKE DIL ME DARD NHI,
PAR MORA AB KYA?
MAI TO TANHA BAITHI RAHI,
SANAM TOH AAWE NA...
KHATA KYA HAI,
NA JAAN PAYE ABTAK,
KYU HAI WOH KHAFA,
KOI TOH BATAO KYA HAI WAJAH,
KYU MILI YE SAJA
AAP MEI TO HAI KASHISH.
TOH KARDO POORI DIL KI YE KHALISH.
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great update :) loved it

Nice concept dear . Loved the story . Please continue soon

awsum update... and lovely poem...
loved arjun's concern for riya...
sam and arjun convo was lovely...
hope arjun gets to know about ria's past soon...
continue soon...

Nice story read all parts at one go. Poor riya dont know why every time she does up in tears coz of arjun. Make him the reason for her smile also continue soon

Originally posted by: beatrice_89

Nice story read all parts at one go. Poor riya dont know why every time she does up in tears coz of arjun. Make him the reason for her smile also continue soon

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jo tumhe rula sake,
wo sacha yaar hai.
aur jo rula k khud bhi aansu baha ley,
wo sacha pyaar hai...