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Arshics

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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh how she missed him!

Though they had parted in strife,

She couldn't stop thinking about him

She knew now that she loved him

He didn't feel the same way about her

She tried her best to win his trust

Prove her innocence

But he walked away

And now he was missing

She was worried and scared

And suddenly, he called

He was fine and ...

He wanted to speak to her

There was something he wanted to say

He seemed hesitant , unsure

This was not the Arnav she knew

This was not the Arnav who had pushed her away

What was happening?

And then he whispered

Khushi I love you...

And a solitary tear rolled down from her eye

And gently kissed her cheek

She smiled a smile of sheer joy

Clutched the phone to her heart

Cradled it gently in her hands

And in a trance walked to her room

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Edited by arshicritic - 13 years ago

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BillyJean.

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Posted: 13 years ago

It was an amazing scene!

sarun brought out the emotions of love and separation so beautifully!

And you have recreated the same in words!

Lovely

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blackdice1001

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Posted: 13 years ago

When the episode ended there I wondered what Khushi's reaction would be, and when they showed it, it was just perfect! The 'I love you' so long overdue, it would've ruined the moment had either of them had said anything else. I've made no secret of the fact that I hate the kidnap track but if anything could have saved it it was this.

Oh and. Very well written post arshicritic :)

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Arshics

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bestarshi
It was an amazing scene!
sarun brought out the emotions of love and separation so beautifully!
And you have recreated the same in words!
Lovely

Thank you, the expressions of both Braun and Sanaya were so awesome in this, very rarely have I seen a pair who can emote like this.

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Arshics

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: blackdice1001
When the episode ended there I wondered what Khushi's reaction would be, and when they showed it, it was just perfect! The 'I love you' so long overdue, it would've ruined the moment had either of them had said anything else. I've made no secret of the fact that I hate the kidnap track but if anything could have saved it it was this.
Oh and. Very well written post arshicritic :)

I totally agree with you, I am glad that it stopped there, made it so magical

And thanks