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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi
the pup is good
but kashish i am really getting angry on her poor sujal but he should also try to understand her problem naa how can she come 
but his warning are too good 
plz cont soon and pm me
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aww my poor sujal πŸ€— kashish always ditches him everytime ... one more time she does that ...i will take sujal along with me πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† he is being so sweet & obedient πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜† atleast deserves a fulfilled commitment of atleast come to meet him when he calls πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ


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PART 10

Kashish ne taxi liya...aake pohonchi

Dekhi Sujal ki car

Sujal was lying on the bonnet balancing the bottle on his stomach taking occasional gulps from it

No longer in a drinking frenzy

Ek haath mein cigarette hai aur bagal mei kaafi saari faili hui hai

He has no idea that he is so near car and inflammable objects with a flame

Bas cigarette piini hai to hai.

Bhale hi purre 5 min lag gaye wo jalaane mein

She is walking over towards the car...aas-paas jaise bottles ka kabaad pada hua hai

Kashish aai...aur dheere se haath se cigarette leke...cliff se phenk dia

Sujal ko pata nahi chala

He just brings his finger close to mouth to make puff lekin cigarette nahi hai

He flops his arm back

Nahi hai to nahi hai jaise Kashish bhi nahi thi. Uske kitna bhi chahne se aa thodi gai thi

His eyes are closed he doesn't see that Kashish is there

Par cigarette and Kashish nahi to kya, daaru to hai

So he drinks

Kashish touches his shoulder softly

At her touch Sujal jerks and some booze spills on himself.

He sputters as it goes down the wrong way, sit up and starts coughing

k-ohhh

She rubs his back

He manages to stop coughing and start breathing, panting after a minute...tears streaming down his cheek; his neck and mouth already wet with spilled drink

k-Thik ho?

She wipes the tears with her soft fingers

He wipes it all away with his sleeve leaning away from Kashish flopping down while doing that

k-Sujal

s- Kaziz

k-ohhh sambhalke

She holds him

s- no

Puts his hand in front of him to keep her away.

Somehow he manages to slide off the bonnet and stagger lean into a standing posture his back supported by the car

 She holds his arm

He shrugs his arm and pushes her hand away giving her angry glare all the while

k-I know you are very angry at me but you shouldn't have drunk so much. 8 bottles Sujal? 8 bottles? A packet of cigarette? Why?

s- u zont care

k-I do care, that's why I am here, don't I?

Sujal just shrugs

Wo nahi aayi

Ab he doesn't owe her any explanation. Wo uski ma to nhai hai. Wo kyun kuch bhi bataye

k-I don't like when you get drunk like this, I get worried. You can curse me, hate me but don't do this to yourself

s-I haze u and i do whz i wanna do

k- I know [looking down]

He puts his hands inside his pockets. Haath mein bottle to hai nahi. They look ridiculous hanging uselessly

k-Lets go home

She holds his elbow trying to pull him

k-Lets go home

He shrugs away her touch

s-zont

He swats her hand away

She moves back a little

k-Please, what do you wanna do here?

s- zleep

k-Wont you go home?

Sujal shakes his head ki nahi

k-Sleep in your home, in your room comfortably

Sujal shakes his head in no again

k-Why?

Kashish bhi kya kare, usse wahan chod bhi nahi paa rahi, khud jaa bhi nahi paa rahi, usse saath leja bhi nahi paa rahi

k-Chalooo pleaseee

She grabs his elbow hakk se

k-Enough of it. Chalo

s- i.zont.want. to .go!

He pushes her away

k-You can't sleep here. Are you mad?

Sujal glares at her

k-Why don't you take care of yourself?????????????

Chilla di Kashish

Sujal dheere se carefully stands away from the car, opens the door, ignores all of Kashish's shouting, somehow manages to sit in the passenger seat

k-Sujalll

She shakes him harddd

Ab baith kar he flops back and closes his eye

Hilla deti hai

k-Talk to me

She slaps his face a few times...lightly

He glares at her

s-zont touch me

He says suddenly catching her wrist putting another hand on her neck pulling her close so that he can look straight in her eyes when he said that

She looks at her wrist

k-I won't touch you, if you come with me

Kashish is looking at Sujal

She loses balance, and falls on him

k-Aauuu

Sujal bhi drunk tha, he couldn't catch her properly

He just ended up getting her hand around her as she sprawled on him

s- xont touxh me. Leave me alone

He says and again closes his eyes. The wariness and the tiredness with all the drink is creeping into his consciousness making him groggy and sleepy

But accidently her lip touches his as she lands on him

Kashish peeche ho jaati hai

k-Hate me so much? Fine.  But you have to get home.  That's my responsibility

k-I will call your home

s- no

He tightens his hands around her. He doesn't want anyone interfering

s- this is just fine

k-ahhh leave my hand.

He opens his eyes to realize that he was holding her. He lets her go immediately

k- Sujal I can't stay with you whole night and I can't leave you like this

s- u can ..go

k-No I can't. You have to get up and you hv to go

She againn slaps him on his cheek pouring a daru bottle on his face

He grabs her hand this time a bit tightly

s-Don't do that again

He says glaring very hard almost looking sober. His lips thinned into a tight line

Kashish looks at him

k-Haath chodo. Utho

s- i shud push u out and close the door

k-You are so adamant. You don't care about people who care for you

Kashish signals the taxi driver who was waiting for them to come

Taxi wala comes

k-Inko utha ke le jaiye...aapko paisa de dungi

Sujal glares at the taxi driver

s- i'll kill u if u touch me

Taxi driver aake holds Sujal

Kashish was also trying to help

k-Main sambhalti hoon

She comes closer to Sujal looks into his eyes sincerely and holds his face with her soft hands

He removes her hand

k-Kya hua? Kyun aata hai itna gussa?

s-Dont pretend to care

He says and turns towards the taxi barely taking a step and stumbling to the ground

Kashish runs towards him to hold him

He rejects her help again pushing her away

Taxi driver also helps Sujal

He finally accepts the driver's help and makes his way to the taxi

Kashish bagal mein baith jaati hai as the driver starts driving

Sujal tries to stay awake

Kashish lovingly moves her finger on his hair

He pushes her hand away

k-Sujaaal gussa nahi naa

She pulls him towards her, making him keep his head on her lap

He flops on the opposite side and angles away his body from her crossing his arm tightly in front of him and blinks his eyes rapidly trying to keep awake

She finally couldn't help herself says 'I am sorryyy'

Her face is guilt laden

She hides her face with her hands whimpering...slightly

Sujal can barely hear and make meaning of her words now

He is too far gone

He is seconds form passing out and all this concentration is going on keeping awake

Usse bass itna pata hai ki Kashsih is fraud. Jo bhi kahe jo bhi reason de sunna hi nai hai

k-Sujal, we are home !

She shakes him

He looks around drowsily, shifts a bit darwaza khola and dham bahar gir gaya as he was leaning against it

k-Ohhh! Sujal!!!! Are you ok?

She holds him she helps him get out of the car

He gives her sleepy glare which looks like a cute pout; struggling ineffectively to push her away reject her help

She can't help a smile seeing his pout

She holds him tightly as she could

k-Come. Try walking

She is holding him and  trying to walk holding his massive weight

k-Sujal..Sujal..ehh..try walking

Sujal ko to ab to pata bhi nai ki kaun hai saath, he just stagers blindly to wherever he is being lead

Par Kashish ne saamne dekha to she was freezed.

Saamne Sujal ki maa aur wahan chal rahi hai pool party aur bohot log aaye hue hain

Ma-Sujal ! Aren't you supposed to be in your home? There's a party and you!

Gives a hard look to Kashish

k-emm..

Ma-SUJAL !

He finches

He blinking and looking at the lights of the party unsteady on his feet

s-hic-

Kashish khadi kahdi stutter karti hai ki

k-Main..wo...ye...wo...Sujal...wo. wo a..aap wo.. ji main...

Sujal staggers apni masti mein towards the pool..feet criss- cross

Sujal zara Kashish ko peeche karta hai

Maa-Sujal Sujal

He ignores all the female voices turning his back to them and starts peeing in the pool

Kashish is jaw dropped

Maa's yes almost widen to fullest

Par according to Maa sab Kashish ki sangat ka asar hai

Kashish to freeze ho hi gai hai

Aaram se he finishes and turns zipping up himself

Kashish to bechari thandi padd gai hai shock se

Sujal turns laughing like a maniac looking at mom swaying back and fro

Maa is tongue tied. She can't decide what she is furious or horrified. Furious at Sujal or at this girl

Kashish is just plain horrified and worried somewhat guilty. Kashish ko laga kahin pool mein naa gir jaye

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nice update.. poor kashish...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 10
nice part...
bechari Kashish...
yeh Sujal bohut hi ziddi hai...
cont soon dear...
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PART 11

Kashish to bechari thandi padd gai hai shock se

Sujal turns laughing like a maniac looking at mom swaying back and fro

Maa is tongue tied. She can't decide what she is furious or horrified. Furious at Sujal or at this girl

Kashish is just plain horrified and worried somewhat guilty. Kashish ko laga kahin pool mein naa gir jaye

s-o-hic..

He refrains himself from going backwards...ghasittha hai 2 kadam..stumbling on the ground

Kashish rushes to support him par ma ne Kashish ka haath pakad liya

Mom-Get. out. NOW!!

Sujal hisses shhh shhh

Mom- RAMSINGH!! Take him to his room now

Ram singh rushes and holds Sujal and starts dragging Sujal to his room

Sujal saying some incoherent things to Ramsingh pointing Kashish

Sujal grabs another bottle from waiters hand and gives a sly wala grin

k- Sujal Nahi

Maom glares at Kashish

Mom- Ramsingh take him to his room and bring the bottle back

Sujal points againn at Kashish while being dragged

s-Kazzz

He kisses the air pointing at Kashish

Mom-Don't worry I'll take care of her

Mom says giving Sujal and guests a fake wide smile. Holdings Kashish's elbow in tightly she drags Kashish out and pushes her out of front door

Mom-This was all your fault!

k-But..

Mom-Don't you dare meet my son again and if u do...you don't know what I'll do to you and your family

k-I am sorry...but i never meant to...I..

Gate band Kashish ke muh par

She looks down sadly

Kashish pohonchi ghar 5 baje subah ke

Dabbe paon andar aake apne bed pe so gai

Kashish ki maa subah 6 baje uthke Kashish ko uthane aai

But maa frowns seeing her

Ma-Kashish, you smell of drinks. Aur teri earing kahan hai? Raat ko to maine dekhi thi tere kaan mein

Kashish touches her ear and finds her one earring missing

k-emm..maa...emm kaisi baatein kar rahi ho..emm...wo...main to abhi soke uthi

Kashish fakes a yawn

k-aur..earring shayad sote hue gir gai hogi

Ma- Ye sharaab ki buu kahan se aarahi hai phir?  Mujhse jhoot bol rahi hai?

k-Mujhe kya pata maa..wo..shayad...ek naya perfume hai naa jo Kiara laai thi aur main kya jhooth bolun maa...subah to soke hi uthte hain naa

Maa narrows her eyes not believing one word lekin lets her go, koi proof bhi to nahi hai naa

Kashish is like phew

Ab Sujal utha as Ramsingh ne uthaya, parde khole

RS-Saaab !CHAI!

 Ramsingh bhaag gaya

Sujal has the same reaction as yesterday, he again roars at Ramsingh for waking him up like that

Sujal utha to kuch gira zameen pe

Usne ne dekha ki kya hai...dekha Kashish ki earring hai

Sujal ne uthakar dekha ki ye earring uske paas kahan se aayi, ye to Kashish ka hai

Sujal neeche gaya breakfast karne

Baith gaya table par and  starts buttering his toast

Aaj table pe koi nahi hai naa mom na adad as he is damn late today

He thinks aaj wo aaraam se sade hue chehre dekhe bina breakfast kar sakta hai

The servants keep the food...but  he feels like puking looking at the food..his head is still heavy

He had drunk the tea and just something light so and just nibbled the toast, nothing else

s-Ramsingh!!

Rs-Jii saab

s- Ye khana yahan se le jao aur mujhe aaj itna late kyun uthaya?

RS-Saab aap uth hi nahi rahe the

s-Ramsingh don't make foolish excuses

Ramsingh ka sar neeche...

RS-Hum kya kare saab...hum to sara kaam waqt par hi karte hain/[he mutters]

Sujal also goes muttering under his breath

Kashish  ne aaj subah subah Sujal ke office jaake milna chaha par pata chala Sujal nahi aaya abhi tak

Kashish goes to her violin class thinking, lunch time mein mil legi jab aayega

As her violin class gets over and she heads for the bust stop to find Sujal standing there and lighting up a ciggrett

She walks to him

k-Sujal

He glances at her and walks away few steps

She frowns; she does not understand why he is ignoring her

She follows him

k-Kya hua tumhe? I am sorry main kal nahi...

s-Tumhe kya lagta hai tum duniya ki akeli ladki ho. Ladkiyaan ne mere peeche bhaagti hain, main ladkiyon ke peeche nahi bhaagta

He shows his hand and she stops mid-way

s-Leave me alone, forever

k-Kya??? Hua kya hai? Maine bataya na akal meri behen a agai and I did come...

He walks away and lights up

She keeps on looking at him

He does look angry but on top of that he looks tired and unwell. His eyes are red and face looks puffy and his lips clasped in a thin line

Kashish walks into the nearby market and comes back after a while with a bottle of water

She walks to him and pulls him by his elbow with a jerk putting a tablet and pouring some water in his mouth

Sujal swallows in the tablet and looks at Kashish with a frown

But before he could say anything, he had to rush behind a shop and as puking

As he was done Kashish comes from behind and offers him water

k-Better?

He drinks away the water actually feeling better than he had felt whole day

He nods

Kashish smiles

k-Chalo ab kuch khalo. Khaali pet bhi tabiyat kharab o jaati hai

She holds his arm and takes him to a nearby bistro

They occupy a table while she orders sandwich and juice for him and coffee for herself

s-I also want a coffee

k-No, coffee is not good for you. It will further dehydrate your body. Have what I have ordered

He remains silent

She is also silent, rather speechless kahe to kya...jo dekha kal wo to...aur yahan Sujal anjaan aram se baitha hai...

Kashish is looking at him ki kuch bole

Sujal to chup chap recover ho raha hai

k-Mujhe late ho raha hai

s- Jao...

k-Jaun?

s-Kyun pooch rahi ho? Jab bulata hoon to aati nahi h,  rukne ko kahunga to kaunsi ruk jaogi

k-Thik hai...main bhi kisi ki cheez nahi rakhti par wo dress wapas to kar nahi sakti par..

Purse se nikale 500 rs rakh deti hai

k-Abhi mere paas itne hi hai. Baaki lauta dungi

s-f**k the dress!

He says banging his glass on the table

Kashish shrinks

s-Wear it burn it throw it away for all I care. I don't care what you wear. I just wanted to give you something nice

k-I care. Main kisi ki cheez aise nahi rakhti. Tumhe lekar jalana ho, phekna ho kuch bhi karna ho karna. I should have always listened to Maa

Sujal gets up

s-oh? Don't you already do that? Sorry maa ne rok lia.. sorry maa ne mana kar diya.. maa this maa that

k-Do you let me? Tum aur tumhari zidd

s- Haan meri zidd hai to? What's wrong with wanting something? Haah pe haath rakh kar to kuch mil nahi jaata naa

k-To?????? Uss zidd ki wajah se main suffer karti hoon. Do you ever thing about others?

s- Kya suffer kiya hai tumne? Think of other? Tumhara baare mein nahi sochta to tumhe bulata kyon?!!

k-aah haa mere baare mein sochne ke lie mujhe bulate ho, kabhi flat ke neeche aa jao, kabhi idhar aa jao, kabhi udhar aa jao

s- Why are you complaining? You came only came once that too under your flat. Itna door bhi nahi aayi

k-Kyaaa???? Kya kaha tumne phirse kehna

She tiptoes pointing her finger towards his nose

s- Why should I repeat? It's not like you'll understand or do what I say if I say it more than once. Tumhe to sab zidd lagta hai

k-Achcha! [Narrows her eyes] Mujhe thank you bolne ki jagah ..tum...

He searches around and keeps his hand on her waist

s- Thanks for what?

k- Main hi bevkuf hoon jo saara kaam chodke raat ke 2 baje chupte chupate...tumse milne gai

s-oh to tum 2 baje aayi?

k- Puri raat jaggii..ghar mein jhoot bola...tumhari maa se beizzat hui aur tum...tum!!!!!

s- What?

k-Tum bhaad mein jao

She turns to leave but realizes he is holding her by the waist

She jerks away his hand

But he holds her hand

s-You met my mom? When? How?

Pehle he was just sulking and mildly teasing lekin ab to wo bilkul serious ho gaya

k-Chodo mera hatah. Jaahil ho kya? Waise to tum ho hi jahil ! janwaar !

s- Kashish gaali bad meni de lena pehle batao tum Maa se kab mili aur  kya baat hui tumhari?

k-Mujhe tum jaise ungrateful insaan se kuch baat hi nahi karni. Tumhe jo puchna hai apni maa se puch lo. Mujhe pareshaan karna band karo

s- Main pareshaan kar raha tha to aaj mere office kyun aayi? Pareshana to tum bhi hona chahti ho

He says teasingly and flirtingly

She is at loss of words

k-emm..main office aayi..kyunki main insaan hoon..ek civilised insaan

s- Aur main ek jaahil jaanvarr..

k-Bilkul

s-Whta a pair!

k-Shut up! Haath chodne ka kya loge?

s- Bolun ki nahi?

k-Kya bologe?

She frowns

s-Suspense kaise bata don aise hi?

k-Tum pagal ho. Mujhe jaane do

s-Kya dogi suspense janne ke liyae?

k-Thenga

He starts laughing

She rolls her eyes

He pulls her close almost into a mini hug

She is astonished as no man had ever touched her

k-ohhh Sujal..pahal ho kya

She is pushing him

s- Chalo jao... tumhe rukunga tum rukogi nahi fir mujhe bura lagega tum mujhe 2-3 baatein aur suna dogi

Sujal was still grinning

k-Tumhe mazza aa raha hai naa. Meri jaan nikaalke hassi aa rahi hai. Tumse ye hi expect kar sakte hain

She pouts

He shakes his head

s- Kya chahti ho mujhse batao

She looks down and shakes her ehad

He takes her hand and they walk out to the bus stand

k-Aur suno..tumhari wajah se..tumhari khincha taani ki wajah se naajane mera ek earing shayad kal kahin gir bhi gaya

s- oh ye to bohot bura hua...kaisa tha wo?

k-Haan jaise tum dhund loge

s-Maybe it's in my house. Ramsingh ko milega to pata chal jaega ki tumhara hai

k-Sab tumhari waajh se. Suna tumne; sab tumhari wajah se

s-Mat batao.. aini samjh gaya ki tumhe wo wapas chahiye hi nai.. you want me to keep it; don't you?

k-Chup rahao tum wo tumhare button jitna bada, gol tha aur tumhare ghar mein to..baap re naa jaane aunty mere baare mein kya kya soch rahi hogi

s- Earring golden color ka tha?

k-hmm..it smelled like gold..it was gold plated

Sujal describes the earring correctly to every point ki aisa waise

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part 11
nice part...
at least he listened to her...
gosh hes really a pain...
poor Kashish...
cont soon dear...
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hi
the up is good
sujal and his madness 
poor kashish she have to heard so much from sujal's mom and after going home she got shcolding from her mom too
ohhh poor she but the way she took care of sujal is really nice to see 
plz cont soon and pm me 
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Good parts πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...
Sujal was too much 🀣... hope he controls his drinking to avoid further embarrasments πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
 
Dat was very mean of sujal's mom ...though indirectly she was responsible but πŸ˜• but make ur son also understand πŸ˜›πŸ˜† why he drank so much πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
aww sujal ...his turn to show attitude πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜›...poor boy had waited so much for her πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
good to see kashish taking care of him πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜›...
 
SK fight πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ good1 πŸ‘πŸ‘ Go sujal go!!! taking out whole week's frustration πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† but doesn't forget to flirt & tease 😳😳😳
 
wonder if he gonna return the earring πŸ˜•πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Sorry for the looong wait guys...here's a looong part for u...enjoy


PART 12

s- Earring golden color ka tha?

k-hmm..it smelled like gold..it was gold plated

Sujal describes the earring correctly to every point ki aisa waise

She frowns

k-Wapas karo abhi. Chor !

s- This jaahil unlike you... doesn't return others things. Think for it as exchange

k-Exchange? Kya chahie? Acha, dress kal laa dungi, khush? Earring do

s- No I don't want it and I am keeping your earring, no matter what you give me in return. Wo to main wapas nahi karunga

k-Kyun?????????? Pehnoge kya? Ek hi hai wo. Khair jo marzi karo, tum jaise jungli se ye hi expect kar sakte hain

s- Kyun bataun kya karunga...maybe I'll get one ear pierced. Sahi hai jungli punk...

He starts laughing

k-Hasso mat. Tum kal meri yaa kisi ki bhi jagah hote naa,,,sharam to tumhe waise bhi nahi aati hai...khair ayegi kaise jo party ke beech mein...usse sharam thode ayegi

s-Party? Kaunsi party? Maine kya kiya party ke beech mein?

k-Kaunsi party? Bhole to aise bann rahe ho jaise...

s- Kashish main bhola banne ki acting kyun karunga? I seriously don't remember, I was really drunk and whatever it is I did; I did in drunk stupor

Kashish looks at him

k-Good

s- Good?

k-Ye hi to kaam hai peete raho

s- To aur kya karun!!! Huh?! Kya karun?

k-Matlab????? Kya karun matlab? Aur koi kaam nahi hai duniya mein?

s-Forget it. You would never understand

k- Make me understand

Sujal leaves her hand

s- You don't even care to kyun pooch rahi ho

She takes a breath

k-See I am sorry main kal nahi aa pai meri sister aa gai thi  aur wo kai mahino baad aai thi aur uske fiance aur uske fiance ke gharwalon ke saath dinner ka plan tha aur cell sis ke paas tha

He shows his hand

k-Nahi suno tum. Main kya karti. I called you when I was free. Meri bhi to problem ho sakti hai naa

s- Haan tumhari hi problem hai; kabhi tumhe message padna nahi aata...kabhi tum bhool jati ho.. kabhi tumhari behen tumhara phone le leti hai. Sai hai. Galti tumhari kabhi nahi hoti hai, zidd hamesha meri hoti hai. Tumhe to apologize bhi nahi karna chahiye

k- Thik hai to matt pucho naa mujhe, kyun puchte ho. Waise bhi I never told you to ask me out then don't' ask me out and I did say sorry. Phone pe hazaar baar bhi sorry kaha. Tumhare kehne pe daudi daudi aayi. Thik hai mat pucha karo mujhe...yahan tak ki baat hi mat karo mujhse...happy?

s-Don't go home today

k-Kya???????

s-Meet me after your class gets over. Don't go home, don't ask for permission first meet me then. Go home later

k-My class is over...I have morning classes. See I am not a girl who you date frequently..I am not...so don't expect these things..I don't wanan hurt you...it would be better if we don't speak to each other

s- I know you are not like other girls and I don't wait for other girls or ask them out so many times even when they say no, I don't behave all jungli unsophisticated in front of them

Kashish looks at him

k- That's bad...I am the bad influence then

s- You are good...very good.  Chalo mere saath abhi...ghumne chalo

He holds her one hand tugging her to where his car is

k-Nooo nahi...chodo...ghar jaana hai

s- Why not?

k-Maa wait kar rahi hai

s-Then phone kar do, keh do extra class hai, : keh do bus nai mili. Mere saath chalo

She shakes her head

k-Main jhooth nahi bolti

s-Agar mere saath chalogi to bus to nahi milegi naa

k-Maa..manaa karti hai...dekh sakne wale logon se specially ladkon se baat karne se

s- Par hum to baat kar chuke... we are in fact holding hands. Ab to kuch nahi ho sakta

He says smugly

She tries to pull back her hand par Sujal nahi chodta

k-emm...meri sister ki friend hai..Pratiksha..wo ladka dhund rahi hai..tumhari baat karwa dungi

He starts laughing while Kashish raises her eyebrow in confusion

s- Mereko to tum lekin already mil gayi... uske lie hum koi aur dhundh denge, ok?

She shakes her head and shrinks, Sujal ke haath pakadne se ghabrake freeze si ho gai hai

s- Chalo please

She shakes her head, looking down

s- I swear I won touch you even; not even hold hands. I'll be a perfect gentleman, I won't drink, I won't smoke, no jungli jahilness either. Chalo...

Kashish looks at him

s-Please

He looks down into her eyes willing her to say yes with his eyes

She looks down quickly and swallows

k-Maa daantegi...main ghar jaa rahi hoon...ye sab sahi nahi hai...sorry

He slowly lets go off her hand

s- Kya galat hai? Tum kabhi nahi ghumi, tumhe sirf ghumana chahta hoon, sundar jagah dikhana chahta hoon

k-Mmain ghum lungi...maa ke saath..behen ke saath

s- Tumhari maa mana kar dengi

k-Tum koi guide ho kya? Tumhara office bhi hai

s-Wo bhi bnan jaunga aur office se ek din ki chutti allowed hoti hai. Maine 5 mahinon se chuttti nahi li. Chalo please

k-Sorry

Kashish climbs the bus as it stops

k-Bye

Sujal keeps looking at her with a grim face and pulls out the cigarette packet as she gets on the bus

Kashish calls him after a while

s- What do you want?

He says as if his mouth is full...he is smoking

k-I am sorry

s- Don't apologize. You can't lie to your mom even if I die of throat cancer due to smoking or liver failure due to excessive drinking but you can't lie to your mom

k-You are..? You are smoking? Don't smoke and drink naa!

s- Why? What do you care? Tumhe to ladkon se baat bhi nahi karni chahiye

k- You said you won't smoke and drink naa

s-I wouldn't have if you had come with me

k-It's not about me...it's about you...it's about your life...I am nobody in your life...we don't even know each other

s- We can get to know each other. Aage kya ho tumhe kya pata. Tum to try bhi nahi karna chahti

k-Haan nahi karna chahti, kyunki aapki aur meri duniya alag alag hai...aur pata hai..khushnaseeb hote hain wo log jinhe bhagwan ne sab diya hota hai. Kuch log sab hote hue bhi usse gawate hain..aur kuch log usko paane ke lie tarste hain

s-Tum kyun taras rahi ho, koshish to karo sab mil jayega

k-Main aapki baat kar rahi hoon

s-Main kuch khone ke darr se kuch chahna nahi chod sakta

k-Aap inn buri addoton se apni health kharab kar rahe hain..aur kuch log 1 din zyada jeene ki minnat kar rahe hain

s- Aur um us zjindagi ke hote hue bhi darrkar duniya se durr rehkar usse guzar jaane de rahi ho. Kashish bohot shawk tha tumhe duniya dekhna ka, tumne dekha kya lekin? Aakhein theek karwa li lekin unka use kya kiya?  Bas ghar se akele institute aane tak ke lie? Bas... isse zyada to tum blind rehkar hi kar leti thi naa. Log aankhon ke liye bhi to taraste hai na par tum konsa istemaal kar rahi ho? Main apni zindagi kharab kar raha hoon lekin apni zidd, apni chahat ke liye; kissi aur ke rokne tokne se nahi. Ye zindagi bhi chali gai to afsos nahi hoga ki ek baar peena chahta nai peeya, ek baar kisi se milna chahta tha  nahi mila

k-Sahilon ko kabhi milne ki koshish nah karni chahie. Mera aapka nazariya alag hai aur mera parivaar mere liye bohot important hai. Main rakhti hoon

Kaat dia phone

He calls her again

k-Hello

s-Who the heck is Sahil? Huh? Kaun hai ye batao

k-Sahil? Mujhe kya pata

s-Why are you comparing me to this sahilon? Huh? Anjaan mat bano tumne hi kaha tha

Kashish starts laughing

s-Its not funny

k-Arre sahilll...sahil..kinara...banks...videshi gawaar

Sujal is silent at his stupidity

s-Geez whatever did that line mean... pata nahi tum bhi kya kya kehkar phone kaat deti ho...mujhe heart attack aagaya yahan

k-Wo kyun?

s- Kyun matlab? Aise tum achhanak se kis bhi ladke ka naam lekar mujhe usse compare karogi to mujhe tension nahi hogi

k-Iismien tension ki kya baat hai? Tum bhi naam le lo Rina, Mina, Tina ...kisi ka bhi

s- ...you ...what did you mean your family is important? Maine kab kaha ki its not important? Huh?. Mujhse milne ko haan karne mein  tumhari fmaily unimportant nahi ho jaati hai and main kisi aur ladki ka naam nahi lunga; itna awaara bhi nahi hoo n

k-Hmm? I meant meri maa jaisa kahegi jo kahegi main waisa hi karungi..my younger sis and maa knows the best. Unko sab pata hai..sab dekhne wale logon ke baare mein

s- Aur tum to ab bhi blind ho ki dekh kar khud kuch nai samjh sakti ho. Aakhein bhi unhi ke doosri laga deti, wo aur dekh kar tumhe ab bata dete

k-Dekhne se kuch nahi hota, samajhna hota hai. Aise dekhne wale log fraud dhurth , chalak, beimaan type ke hote hain

s-Ok ok...I have to rush to a meeting...bye

Sujal hangs up

Kashish ghar pohonch jaati hai

k-Ma!

Ma- Aa gai meri bachhhiii

k-Haan, roz hi to aati hoon

Maa- Jaa haath muh dho le akar khana kahale

k-Haan...wo maa...wo maa..wo...aap kehti ho naa...har insaan bura nahi hota...I mean...kitne andhe log bhi to bure hote h naa

Ma-Haan to?

k-Aur waise hi sab dekhne wale log bhi to bure nahi hote honge naa

Ma- Main buri hoon? Main bhi to dekh satki hoo

k-Nahi maa ...haan wohi to

Kashish's face lights up

Maa looks suspiciously at her

Maa- To? Teri baat hui kisi se? Kitni baar kaha hai ki anjaan logon se baat nahi karte. Main to maa hoon,  main to achhi hi hongi naa. Wo anjaan hai, wo do baar nai sochenge tera fayda uthane se pehle

k-Nahi...anjaan nahi

Ma-oh? Kaun hai phir? Kiski baat kar rahi hai?

k-Kisi ke nahi...main to aise hi pooch rahi thi

Ma-Teri koi nai saheli bani hai?

k-Haan haan saheli...nayi..nayi saheli

She nods her head vigorously

Ma-Achha, kya naam hai? Ghar wale kaise hain uske? Kya kaam karti hai kahan mile?

k-Uss..uska..naa...Su..-Suhaana...Suhaana naam hai

Ma-Tujhe mana kiya tha na kisi se bhi baat kane ko, phir saheli kaise bani hmm?

k-emm...wo bass...aise hi...usne meri ek din help ki thi...to aise hi baat ho jaati hai...maa, wo..kisi achche insaan ko hurt karna bhi thik nahi naa...vaada karke todna bhi achi baat nahi naa

Ma-Usne tujhse kuch kaha badle mei karne ko?

k-Nahi

Ma-Phir kaunsa vaada? Kya kaam karti hai ye ladki?

k-Wo...main fresh hoke aati hoon maa...bohot thak gai hoon

Ma-Yahin baith chup chap aur meri baat ka jawab do

k-Arre wo karti hai kisi office mein kaam...aap bhi naa maa...you should have been in CID

She makes up after realizing that she had revealed to much and now Maa was curius

Ma-Baat mat badal! Tu bhi avoid kar rahi hai. Kya baat hai? Kuch galat kaam kiya hai kya iss ladki ne?

k-Maaa...sab pe shakk karna band karo  aur mujhe bachcha samajhna bhi

Ma- Tu kuch nahi bataegi to mujhe shaq nai hoga to kya?

k-Kiara pe to koi lagaam nahi hai aur mujhpe...

Ma-Kaunsi lagaam? Ab meri fikar lagam lagne lagi hai? Ye sab teri nayi saheli ne sikhya hai na tujhe,  wo bhi apne ghar par aise hi ladti hogi, haina

k-Maa bass. Hum iss baare mein baat naa hi kare to acha hai

Kashish goes into her room and dhaammm se door band

She calls Sujal after a while in the night

He is at a party for his image damage control

Besides he was trying to get interested in another girl... dekhein to aisa kya hai Kashish mein o party ki sabse sundar ladki mein nahi hai

Kashish calls but paty ke loud music ki wajah se Sujal ko sunai nahi diya

Kashish bhi call kare jaaye

Sujal nahi uthata to Kashish ko aur chinta ho jaati hai aaj kal

Sujal ko wo ladki hi keh deti hai ki your coat is buzzing

When she keeps a hand on his chest and wahan phone vibrate karta hua touch hota hai

Dono haste hain hahahaha

He sees the number

s-Ek minute

He says to the girl, moving out of noise he answers

s- Kya hua hai?

k-Phone kyun nahi utha rahe the

s-I didn't realize it was ringing

Peeche se wo ladki is calling

s-Huh ! Excuse me

Gal-Sujal c'mon its my fav song...-

s-i'll come in a minute. Bolo kya keh rai hti tum

k-Tumhari behen bula rahi hai?

s- Meri koi behen nai hai, bas ek bhai hai. Tumhe bataya tha maine

k-Mooh boli behen?

s- Meri behen kyun banane mein lagi ho tum saari ladkiyon ko? Tum meri behen ho? Meri muh boli behen ho? Nahi na, to wo bhi nai hai

k-Haan

s-Haan? You think of me as your brother?

k-Khair, faltu baatein to main karti nahi tumhar tarah

s-Faltu baat nai hai. You think of me as your brother? Batao?

k-Tum pehle kama hi baat suno. Yaad hai tumne aaj kya kaha tha

s-Nahi mujhe yaad nahi hai. You think of me as your brother or not? Bolo

Peechhe se- 'Suuujaaalll chaloo naaa'

k-Tumne kaha tha...ki tumne 5 mahino se chutti nahi li hai. Kaha tha ki nahi?

s- Haan to?

k-Aur ye bhi kaha tha ki 1 din chutti to chalti hai

s-Main tumhara bhai kaise ban gaya? Come to the point Kashish

k-Tchhh! I am in the point. You come to the point. To baat ye hai ki kal chutti le lo

s-Fine...main chutti le unga par main apne bhai ke ilawa kisi ka bhai nai hoon. samajh aaya?

k-Thik hai thik hai

s-I'll pick you at your home then?

k-Nooo bus stop

s-Fine. I'll see you then

k-yeah...ok..chalo. Suno

s-Hm?

k-Maa ne kya kaha? Daanta nahi?

s-Doesn't matter. It's the usual thing. Sorry you had to see that yesterday

k-What????????????? You pee in the pool every day????????

s-I've never done that before...guess I really was drunk

k- Jungli

As he cuts the call, suddenly he feels that he is losing all the interest in the girl with him.

He is mind gets busy on planning his tomorrow's outing with Kashish

Kal kafi amazing plan karna chahiye to gain Kashish's full interest

Gal-Sujal Sujal Sujaaal

He fakes a head ache

s-Babes, get me an asprin please

Gal-But...Sujaaal

Wo gai asprin lane peeche se Sujal khisak liya

Next day-

Subah Kashish khadi hai wahan

Waiting with her huge violinn bag

Sujal aaya gaadi mei...smiling till his ears; really pleased

Bahar aya, Kashish se uska case liya

She looks at him...touches her watch..

k-5 min late

s- Tit for tat

Sujal ne case ko peeche rakha car ke. Fir Kashish ke liye door khola

s-Your carriage awaits...

She sits

Sujal ne poocha

s-Is there somewhere you specifically wan to go?

He says starting to drive

k-emm...tumhe jana tha kahin? Nahi jaana to mian class chali jaati hoon

s-Maine to sab plan kar rakha hai. Tumhe koi aur jagah jaanae ka mann hai to bata do. wahan bhi jaa sakte hain

k-Nahi

s- Good

She looks out of the window

s- When is your curfew?

k-Curfew?

s-When do you have to be back?

k-At home? Same time I go; 1.30-2

Sujal ke saare plan par paani phir gaya

s-So basically you are lying to your mom about attending class

She looks down

k-Dekha, sab tumhari wajah se

s-Yeah yeah. So since its just for 3 hours. We have only time for movie... that would be the best...baaki sab tumhe kabhi aur dikha dunga

k-Baaki kya?

s-Baaki bhi hai... tum rukti to dikhat,  batata but...

k-Abhi batao

s-Beaches... fire shows... etc etc

k-ohhh

s-But tumhe zyada interst intrest hi nahi hai, I guess

Ab wo log hall pohonchte hain

Kashish is looking at posters

k-Kaunsi dekhein?

Suja; points to one

wo 3d wali hai

k-Nahi ye wali dekhte hain..

She points to penguin posters

k-Ye lagta bhi tumhare jaisa hai...

Points to a penguin

s-Kashish...

k-Haan?

s-Pakka, agli baar yahi waali dekhenge

k-Agli baar?

s-But since main ghumaane laya hoon to first choice meri

k- Thik hai...

Kashish about turn...jaana shuru

s-Tumhe nahi dekhni?

Sujal holds her hand

s-Kahan jaa rahi ho?

k-Tumne hi to kaha agli baar dekhenge

s-Tumhari paand ki agli baar dekhenge is baar meri pasand ki dekhenge. Chalo

k-Tumhari pasand to wiase bhi bekar hai. Khair, kya dikha rahe ho?

s-Tum khud ko bekaar keh rai ho, Kashish? Nahi aesa mat kaho...

She frowns

He keeps a firm grip on her hand

Dono haath mein haath daale jaate hain ticket counter

Sujal ticket kharidta hai

Kashish purse se paise nikaalke adhe paise Sujal ko deti hai

s- Tum movie dikhana agli baar. Abhi rakho ye sab

He says handing it all back

Dono ticket lekar, 3Dglasses lekar hall mein ghus jaate hain

Andhera tha as they were a little late

Sujal holds her hand but Kashish is more comfortable in dark, thus she has no problem finding her way

Wahan dono chashmein lagakar movie dekhna shuru

But after a while Sujal notices Kashish is sitting bending her back with her 3D glasses removed; and she is vigorously rubbing her eyes

s-Hey, what's wrong? Are you ok?

She shakes her head

K-Surgery. My eyes are still sensitive. I cannot glare at the huge screen for long. The rays cause me eye irritation

s-Oh

Sujal promptly gets up and gets her a bottle of ice cold water and tissue

s-Put some water. You will feel better

After few moments, people sitting close to Sujal and Kashish were sneering and glaring at them

But Sujal was least concerned

He was busy narrating what was happening on the screen to Kashish while she shut he eyes and pressed her face to his chest

As her moved her hand around her head, she felt relaxed. While Sujal felt nice narrating her the scenes, even if she was unable to watch it herself, he was glad he could narrate her each and every movement

 

 

Ab Sujal Kashish bahar aate hain

k-Thanks for the movie, but I am sorry

s-About what?

k-About what all happened and my probem..and for spoiling it

s- Hey its nothing. Nothing was spoiled at all

k-If I would have known I would have never come...but it was my first time naa

s- Well now we know. So maybe we'll buy books on penguins instead hmm? or does reading give you headache too?

Kashish giggles

k- I can't read

s- What? You can't read?

She shakes her head

k-I told you

s-Yeah but I though like you would have learned some by now

She shakes her head

k-I am searching for a tutor

s- I'll teach you

Edited by storywriter - 11 years ago