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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6

My stubborn & Adamant Sujal πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† & kashish this time u had it to the limit making poor boy wait πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... sujal next time ask me πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ever ready to watch film with u πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

sweet & scary of him to go to her house in middle of night πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Drive safely boy πŸ‘πŸΌ


Part 7

LOlz i shud have wished him all the best to start the car 🀣 start nahi hogi toh drive kaise karega πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

thank god & congratulations πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† reached safe & sound Cheers Suzzzaaal πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Kashish surely doesn't know kis se palla pada hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Hope sujal remembers his promise tomorrow of NO smoking πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜† & kashish dare u make him wait this timeπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
part 7
awesome...
hes so ziddi...
cont soon dear...
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 Part 8

Kashish is left standing to herself

k-Pagal !

She is smiling

Bhaagke jaati hai ghar pe waiting for his call ki pohoncha ki nahi

Idhar udhar check bhi karti hai ki kisi ne dekha to nahi

Sujal ka taxi wala pohoncha jagah pe

Taxi wala-Saab pohonch gaye. Saab ! Utro !

Sujal utha hai and somehow he manage to get out

Salutes the driver

Taxi wala-Saab, paisa

Sujal is like haan haan hold on

Right hand se reaches the left back pocket and takes out a wad of money and just gives it away without counting

laughing gaily he goes away

Taxi wala-Saab ! Sambhalke jaana

Sujal kuch step chala hi hoga ki raat ke dhai baje awaaz aai

'Hey bhaiii'

His aaiyaash..colleg going bro...who was equally drunk and super brat was also coming back from his party

'Heyyy bhaiii'

He staggers to his bro...giving competition to Sujal on drunkenness..with bottle in hand

Bro-Hey vrooo u zrunk????????

s-noo ofcorz not

Bro-ohhh..i zot so

He holds his big bro's shoulder

Bro- zooo late u are...wanna take a swiggg

Sujal nods

s-ofcorzzz

Sujal to super happy happy mode mein hai

He takes the bottle and  takes not one but 3-4 laarge swigs some drops trickling form side of his mouth

Bro Sujal ko pakadke chalne lagta hai main gate ki taraf

Bro-hic-

Bro bhi happily smiles as his bhai didn't look so happy ever

s-why r u zoo late? itz ur sleep time already

Bro-parrtyyy-hic- u?????

Maa balcony se dono bhaiyon ke kaarnaamein and their struggle to reach the main gate observe kar rahi hai

Sujal just gives dreamy smile

s- shhh itz a sectret

Bro-shhh...wht secrer? hic

s-she came... and she was sorry!! Hahahaa...

 Bro sways a little on his feet

Sujal steadies him swaying himself

Bro- sheee????? who zzz

s-sheee!!! herr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bro-huh?

s-You zont know?!

Bro-nopeee

s-everyone knowzz

Bro-whoz zzz?

s-all the people zee us everyday!!!!1

Bro-ohhh ur new...gal frnd..?

Sujal looks confused... ki gf ke saath to.. he has been on dates and expensive gifts given and some level of intimacy... Kashish ke saath to kuch nahi tha

He shakes his head no frowning ki bhai ab tak Kashish gf bani kyun nahi

Bro-no???? then????? love?????

He nudges Sujal

s-Huh? no!!! zee wont be my girlfrnd... bu she'll get zere!! hahaa zee was sorry and she came to zee me

Bro-neva mind...ltz zelevrate and hv a zrinkkk!!!!!!!! cheers!!!!

s-cheerrsss!!!!!!!!!!

He says loudly chugging down more bear

'Sujal !!!!!!!!!!! Rishi !!!!!!!!!!!!!'

Maa ki awaaz

Dono ko realize hi naa hua ghar ke andar pohonch gaye

s- u hoh...shhh

Bro tries to stand straight

Sujal says to Rishi

s- I'll zandle her..u go

Bro-shhh..stand straight-hic-

Ma-Look at you people..just look at yourself. Sujal you too...I didn't expect this from you

Sujal tries to look serious and chastened but smile muhh se utar nahi rahi

Ma-Ye koi time hai ghar aane ka? That too this drunk. You should scold your brother but yooouuu. Instead of scolding him..you are doing the same

s- awww mom...-we are not zrunk juzt..celebrating...try it onze in a while u like it

Bro whispers in his ear...

Bro-Bro shhh lez go to my room-hic-..v will zelebrate...come..hold me-hic-...I'll hold u

Sujal nods ki haan haan acha idea hai

s-gnite maww!!

Mom is furious with anger

Ma-Sujal! Where were you entire night?

Sujal Rishi ko pakad kar chal diya struggling to climb the stairs holding the railing

s- maawww G'nite!

He says frowning

Even though he may be drunk he still doesn't like being interrogated like that by his mum...

Raaste mein dad bhi bura wala frown karte hue mil jaate hain

Sujal to seeti bajata hua bhai ke saath gaata hua chala jaata hai dad ko bhi g'nite aur salute karke

Bhai jaake padta hai bed pe opening a new bottle..

Bro-Cheers to ur galll-hic-

Maa udhar dad ko dekhke gives a look...ki inka kya karu main...pata lagana padega kya masla hai

Sujal bhi cheers jakar flops downs next to him

Ab idhar Kashish was expecting Sujal phone kare phone kare...chinta ho rahi hai kya hua phone kyun nahi kiya..pohoncha ki nahi

To khud hi phone kar leti hai

Sujal to bhool gaya phone ke baare mein

Sujal ka poneh baja to wo bhi aadhi neendon mein tha

Jaise taise pick kiya... jab bhai ne shh shhh kiya

s- 'ellooo?

k-Sujal pohonch gaye? Kahan ho?

Kashish ke sawalon ki barsaat

s-Kazzziii meet my bro!!!!!!

De phone chipka diya bhai ke kaan par

Bro-huh???? bhai-hic zeersss

Sujal chugs some beer on his bhai's mouth

k-Sujaaal hellooo Sujaaal

bro-hiii...uuu..gal...maz..my bhaii..happy..-hic..he is..happyyy...ve..happyyy...but..u..r..noz hiz..gf...no...-hic...not gooz...u..be..his gf...make..him..happe...forever...hic

k -What? Dekho Sujal ko phone do, please

Bhai says ki 'mere bhai ki gf ban jao. You keep him haappy' in drunken gibberish jo unfortunately Kashish ko shayad samjh naa aaye

Bhai keh kaha ke phone Sujal ko wapas kar deta hai

s-zear zht!! he likz u too noww u zand me...foreva

k-Sujal, have you reached home?

s-hmm home?nah.. i zesed my broz room

k-ok..That's home right. Hmm..phone nahi kiya naa tumne mujhe. See you also broke your promise. Not done

He frowns..

s-waz promiz? i not lie!!

k-Promise that you will call me I was worried, worried for you

s -zu were?!!

k-Off course I was. Is that even a question? Khair...take care of yourself

He nods

k-Good night

s-zee u 2mmorooowww

k-Yeah. Same time same place. Bye

Sujal to soo gaya...snoooreee

k-Take care. Sweet dreams

Bolke muskurate hue phone rakh deti hai

Then sochti hai Sujal ko jaldi utha degi coz uski car wahin padi thi, mauhaulle wale halla naa kar de

Car to start hogi nahi ab mechnic hi kuch kar sakta hai uska

Sujal ne saare gear ghis diye aur jagah jagah se dent

Ab Kashish sab se pehle uth ajati hai 6 baje hi

 Uthte hi calls Sujal

Wo to bhayankar hangover mein hai

Phone kahin se uthaya and kaan ke paas rakha

k-Sujal

s-'ello?

Dheere se neendon mein. His voice heavy and with sleep

k-Sujal uth jao. Sujal uthooo

s- Hmm?

k-Main bol rahi hoon, Kashish

 Sujal smiles but doesn't say anything

So gaya phir se

k-Sujaaal Sujal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Phone thodi durrr karta hai since wo disturb a kar raha tha

k-Sujal Sujal Sujal Sujal Sujal Sujalll pleaseee wake uppp

Sujal ko to kuch sunai nahi de raha

Par Kashish ke ghar wale sun lenge wo aese hi chilati rahi to

Kashish ki to halat kharab ho rahi hai ki kisi ne car dekh li, police ka jhamela ho gaya to kya kahegi wo

She again calls him ki kabhi to uthega warna wo bura wala phass jayegi

Sujal grumble karta hua fir uthata hai hai

s- Whozit?

k-Kashish ! Sujal get up. Wake up nowww

s-Whddya want?

k-WAKE UP

s- Shhh fine.. fine

k-Please wake up naa please please please

s- hm ok. Bye

k- Nooo listen to me. Mujhse baat karo

Sujal kaat deta hai phone is baar phone takiye ke neeche ki awaaz hi na aaye wapas

She calls again

She is going mad. Soch rahi hai maa hi sahi thi...these non blind people specially men arghhh

Sujal ko to ab ghanti bhi nahi sunai de rhai hi is in blisss lala land

Kashish call kare jaa rahi hai

Jab tak maa naa uthe yaa koi halla naa machaye tab tak time hai uske paas

Sujal soye jaa raha hai until Ram Singh aa kar usse uthata hai

Sujal bhaga deta hai usse bhi lekin Ram Singh is persistent like Kashish

Pehle chup chap chai rakhi phir jhat se parde khole ligh kholi aur or bhag gaya

Sujal ki daahaad poore ghar mei gunjti hai phir

s-RAMSINGH!!!!! u bloody#@!$R!!!!!!

Par uska phone bhi

TRINGGG

s-AAARRRGHHH!!!!

TRIIINGGG

Sujal bhi ki kya hai kaun hai

Phone uthata hai snaps 'hello!'

Ek hath se pani liya pain killer muh mein daali

k-Sujal

Kashish to tension ke maare in verge of tears si ho gai hai

She squeaks..pareshaan bachchi

s- What? What do you want? Cant a man have decent night of sleep? What is it? What happened? Fire earthquake flood?

k-Thik se baat karo mujhse. Chillao mat. Kab se phone kar rahi hoon main

He takes a deep breathhh and gulps the whole glass of water

s-Sorry. You were saying?


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Wish u a very Happy new year ppl...have a grt year ahead...and keep loving the fic next year too...love ya

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly wish u & ur family a very happy new year...πŸ₯³
wishing u success, happiness & good health in coming year...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ May all your wishes come true πŸ˜ƒ

Keep Smiling !!!
Stay Blessed!!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

as for UD πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ‘ guess Suzzalll got inspired by my emoticon πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
kuch zyada hi hogayaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† jaisa sujal waisa bhai 🀣 every night must be a good drink party πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† my sympathies with their parents πŸ˜› hope they get a good daughter in law πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Poor Ramsingh πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† & Kashish had to deal with angry & irritated Sujal πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 hope he listens calmly to Kashish πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜›


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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi
the up came after a long time but as usuall its a worthy up
sujal who was drunk got a partner wow and his bro hmm his parents are worried and here kashish too she is calling 
plz cont soon and happy new year too 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Happy New Year

part 8
nice part...
yaar yeh Sujal aaj kal ki FFs mein bohut peeta hai...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 9

s- What? What do you want? Cant a man have decent night of sleep? What is it? What happened? Fire earthquake flood?

k-Thik se baat karo mujhse. Chillao mat. Kab se phone kar rahi hoon main

He takes a deep breathhh and gulps the whole glass of water

s-Sorry. You were saying?

k-Apni car patak ke nikal gaye, ab main tension se marr rahi hoon

Kashih bhi zara calm hui

s-Meri car? oh... I came to meet you last night... I left the car there?

Sujal rubs his head trying to remember ki itni peene ke baad kya kya gull khilaye

s- I sometime forget things I did drunk...

He tells Kashish

k-hmmm, are you feeling ok now? I really didn't want to wake you up this way but colony wale aise car dekhenge police volice ka chakkar ho jayega. Kisi ko bhejke car le jao

s- Yah.. yah.. I'll take care of it right now...Why did I leave the car? Wait I was driving drunk? Why didn't you stop me?

k-Yes you were driving drunk. I did stop you several times tum meri sunte kahan ho

s-I must have had a good reason for driving drunk then

He says shrugging off dismissing the matter

k-No reason..you are just adamant...

s- Main abhi kisi ko bhej deta hoon. RAMSINGH!!!!!

rs- Ji saab

s- Meri car hai XXX address par usse kisi ko bhej kar mangwalo..

Then he concentrates on Kashish

s-I am just what?

k- Adamant

He starts talking to Kashish again motioning Ram Sigh to go away

Ram Singh bhi khush ki aaj daant nahi padi. Normally Sujal sirf chilla kar thodi chod dega Ram Sigh par jo wo light on karke parda khol kar gaya hai

s- umhmmm well you are gonna get more of it; you know that don't you? I wanna meet you today in he evening. I don't care if your mom says no

He says to Kashish on the phone

s-Mujhe koi excuse nai sunna tum mujhse milne aogi bas. Decide ho gaya

k-O I thought we are meeting in the afternoon

s- No Kashish main evening ki baat kar raha hoon; tum zyada najaad mat bano

Sujal beech beech mein Ram singh Ram singh chilkar ye kahan hai wo kahan hai pooch raha hai

Kashish chuckles...

k-It seems Ram Singh is your wife

s-Ram singh is my servant who thinks he is my boss

Kashish laughs

Wahin Ram siigh is pointing to the time ki Sujal needs to hurry and ki maa is waiting downstairs to talk to him

Sujal bhaga deta hai Ram Sigh ko ur kamra lock kar leta hai

s- Tum Ram Singh ko chodo abhi; apni maa se baat kar lo jo bhi karna hai. Mujhe aaj bahane nai sunne

Sujal keh kar Kashish ko bye bye kar deta hai

Jaakar tayar hota hai

Gaya neeche to stony cold stares of his mom dad on the breakfast table

Sujal bhi shurgs ki pata nahi ab kya naya naatak hai

He sits down for breakfast and araam se starts buttering his toast

Ma-Where were you last night?

s- I went for a movie then to a bar. Why are you asking?

ma-Why did you go to a bar?

s-Recreation

Ma-Huh? Recreation? or get wasted?

s- So I felt like getting wasted once in year what's the big deal?

Ma- Did you break up with a girl you loved?

s- Dad would you tell mom that you don't need a broken heart to have drink or two

Maa- I don't want my son acting like a drunk fool in public

s- No public at night

Ma-We have a reputation

s-Don't worry it's still intact

Ma-Really? You weren't even able to hold yourself on your feet

Sujal gives a disdainful look and gets up

s- I am late. See you around

Chala jata hai'

Bachha nahi hai ki baith kar daant sune

Agar khada nahi ho pa raha tha to maa bhi nahi thi wahan sahara dene ko wo bhi tamasha hi dekh rahi thi waiting for to fall,  to slip up to prove he is screwed

Udhar lunch time hota hai

Kashish madam utarti hain bus se and smiles at Sujal

Sujal bhi dekh kar smiles back automatically crushing out his cigarette  as he sees her bus approaching

k-Count?

s-Count what?

k-Cigarette count?

s- Half. I just lit up and then saw your bus coming

k-ohhh good boy, obedient boy

He shrugs.. kal jo wait karte karte phook di uska count nahi hai

s- So did you talk to your mom about today? You asked for her permission?

k-No

He narrows his eyes in annoyance

s- Why not? Why didn't you ask in the morning? We could have left early that way

k-Ghar jaake pooch lungi

s- I told you to ask in morning, didn't i?

k-Yes...but I didn't. I thought shaam ko aaram se puchungi. Waise bhi.

s-Tumaari shaam mein kabhi kuch theek to hota hai nahi

k- I don't think mumma permission degi

s- Theek hai mat dene do.I'll come and ask her myself. Mereko fark nahi padta

k-Nahi nahi. I will talk to her. Mumma ka bhi point of view sahi hai; she doesn't trust men and doesn't like my mingling with them. Par aaj main pakka aungi. Thik hai naa

s - I am holding you to your word agar tum nahi aayi to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga. I swear main tumhare ghar jakar personally tumhari mom se baa kar lunga

She smiles smugly

k-Ttumse bura koi hai?

Sujal grin back

s-Absolutely not!

k-Acha baba, main aungi..I promise...mumma mana bhi karegi tab bhi zidd karke aungi, Khush? Ab main jaun? Janaab?

Sujal nods finally conceding But his eyes fall on something and he holds Kashish wrist leading her somewhere

k-Arre kahan le jaa rahe ho?

He enters a boutique where a beautiful dress was hanging

s-Will it fit you?

He looks at Kashish analyzing, then gives a self satisfied grin

s-It will

He orders the sales guy to pack the dress and hands it over to Kashish

s-Wear this, when you come today

k-Theek hai

She smiles

s-Go your bus is here

Chali gai madam

Sujal bhi chala gaya wapas office

Kashish ne ghar jaake maa se khub minnat kari..'please please please maa...let me go'

Jaise taise khuuub zidd kari

Maa ko manaya par aa gai behen

Ab haal aisa h ki...Kashish ka phone sis ke paas hai as she lost her phone in the journey and behen ne apni sim Kashish ke phone pe lagadi ye kehke ki Kashish ko to phone karta hi nahi

Aur sis ne aake news sunai ki her boyfried Saurabh proposed her aur uski family se milna hai aap sab chalo, it's a special day for me

Kashish apni behen ke special day ke saamne kuch keh nahi paayi aur naa Sujal ko inform kar paayi as uska mobile sister ke paas tha

Aur to aur, Kashish ne wo red dress bistar pe rakhi thi pehnne kelie. Her sis liked it a lot and decided to wear it on her special day

Filhaal, Kashish baithi hai restaurant mein with sis maa and sis's bf's family

Wahan Sujal ubal rah hai

Phone kare to phone out of reach

Apna phone bas phek na diya Sujal ne

Kashish bhi kaise aaye..Kashish ki aur Saurabh ki family mein argument ho gaya bura wala

Udhar mann hi mann tension ho rahi hai ki kya hoga Sujal must be waiting...ye wo

Sujal is walking back and forth like caged animl

Kabhi kisi ne itni insult, itna wait nahi karaya. Samjhti kya hai? Roz ek sorry bolegi and wo maan jayega? Marr nahi raha hia wo bhi bahar saath jaane ko. Aaj nahi aayi to theek hai phir uski shakal bhi nahi dekhni hai

Ab sab argument ke beech mein Kashish ko bhi khoob late ho gaya aane mein

Jab tak sab soye aur phone usse mila tab tak 2 baj chuke the

Kashish ne jaldi se Sujal ko phone milaya

She knows daantega...she knows she is feeling sooo bad, she really wanted to go with him

He picks up the phone

s-i hate zou

k-Sujal

s-i hate zou

k-Sujal, I am sorry...really sorry. I know you are angry...very angry

Sujal hisses on the phone angrily

s-Shhh!!! liezz!!

k-No, no lies. I really wanted to come... really

He bangs the glass down and pick up the bottle

s- liar!

The glass crashes on the floor

k-Sujalll?????? Kya gira? What was that sound?

s-glazz breaking

k-Sujal, please don't drink. Don't drink because of me. I know..it was wrong..I made you wait..I am really sorry...but I never meant to

 s-Tch! i haez u...wont do anything for zou

k-Don't do anything for me...I guess that's right. Do for yourself. Don't pain yourself for me. I am not worth it

s-i zont care

He chugs down loads of drink, a steady stream dripping for the side of his mouth wetting his collar a little

k-Kahan ho tum? Aren't you home?

s- i neva wanna zee u again...i hae zou

k-I am sorry, I have hurt you...really sorry. You don't know how bad I feel

s-liezz kazi..kaziz alwazz liezz i hae kazi...i neva zee kazi again

She closes her eyes

k-I am sorry, really sorry. Kashish is sorry

s-kazi alwazz sayzz tht...think i am ..ammm... no idiot to not zee kazi liez

k-hmm, go home Sujal please

s-No.  I 'll sleep here at XXX ramzing bad

k-No? Why is Ramsingh bad?

Sujal says some rude words and keeps on drinking. Wahi gaaliyaan jo Ram singh ko milti hain jab bhi wo Sujal ko hangovers se jagata hai

k-Please stop drinking Sujal. I told you naa, that you shouldn't drink or smoke

s-no no no no belize kazi no lizen kazi no do thing for kazi no haze kazi

k-You can punish Kazi

s-no!

k-No? Why?

s-no i'll i;'ll no talk to kazi...no more kazi talk...hae zou

Keh kar Sujal phone kaat deta hai, gira deta hai

She is damn worried ki kahan hai Sujal, pagla gaya hai kya, kahan pada hai

She calls again

Uka phone zameen par silen mode wala vibrate kar raha hai

He ignores it, busy drinking

Sujal bottle kharid kar kahin car ke bonnet par baith kar pada hai

Kashish kuch der call karti hai..naa uthata...kuch der sochti hai kya kare kya kare wo...she remembers him saying the place's name...dekhti hai ghar pe sab so rahe hain..

Par Kashish couldn't make up her mind...she tries calling him againn

Jab Sujal ka phone usse apne vibration se irritate karne laga to he stomped on it...cave man man ho gaya hai...technology disabled

Phir Kashish ko laga...the place he described is a cliff..and he is drunk..agar kahin kuch ho gaya to she won't be able to forgive herself..ever

Kashish ne taxi liya...aake pohonchi

Dekhi Sujal ki car

Sujal was lying on the bonnet balancing the bottle on his stomach taking occasional gulps from it

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
u know i'm maneet fan. but i love ur sk stories more than ur maneet version..

poor kashish, i wanna kill her sis. idiot girl..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
nice fic...
 
Loved sujal n kash charchters...
 
Pls pm me wen u update...
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
part 9
nice part...
poor Kashish...
grr that sister of hers...
what happened to the dress?
cont soon dear...