Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01 - Page 28

Main is 1 update ko catch karne k chakkar mein didnt sleep  Edited by tani23 - 11 years ago

The scene is still going on in my head...u left us in suspense...i just hope Arjun comes on time and grabs her before she falls down...yeah that will happen, right??Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago

wat have u done???? hw will i sleep tonite without knowing wat happend... i thnk i wnt b having single nails n my fingers whn u update nxt part... Riya vl be safe na??? its Arjun rite??? i dnt want nythn to happen to Ariya or their child nd entire ETF...  i knw u wnt let nythn happen to them bt still... y did u stop here????

Absoulately loving it...😊👏👏👏👏

Hey !!!!

Hey it's good to read ur uds again after such a long time... I love the way u have portrayed Rivas character where she's not the typical shrinking violet types n is ready to take charge ... I'm on tenterhooks waitin to know who tht person is j does he save Rita... Pls update soon...thanx for d pm...Tc 

I could visualize the whole thing too! I hope that what I'm thinking about that person with the gun is right... Thanks for the update!

Beautifully Portrayal Of Emotions
I Could Literally Visualise The Jungle Scenario
Awww Chotu And Shree's Concern And Rathore's Protection
Too Sweet
Is The Guy Arjun???? Who Confronts Riya At The End???
Update Soon And PM Me Please
Awesome Thanksx x

arreee, why end at such an interesting part? Please do continue. It's only OS and FF that Ariya live on.

Not fair😔 ... It was a cliffhanger yaar 😕😕... U hv hung us all in a cliff & hv left us 2 hang there till d nxt part😡😡 ... Now update soon 😡😡