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@naughtykittyyy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

hii dear ...rding alll da part of ds ff...u send me pm alwas bt i hvn chk my inbox ...whn i chk i found ds linkss n rd it...

1st of all love da cncpt vryyy much riya s pregyyy of arjuns baby its a drmyyy concpt...lv it ...lv it ...lv it❤️❤️

riya anger ...arjuns care...u potrt sooo beuutttiiiffulllyy...👏👍🏼

dn da most lvliest part fo my choice is da gr88 rmnctc scns wooo😳😉...❤️❤️

its da mostt most awsm part of it😊

den dey gt separtd due to da missionim hrfied...wht happn to my hero😭

poor riya ...arjun put hmslf in dngr😡

lvd da carng rathod shree chotu...dey so touchyy on riya 😊

i realyyy u md riya cpabl to find hr soulmt soonn...

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597593

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

k,,,,me waiting,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Amazing as usual dear...Brilliantly written!
very emotional part...had tears when i read the mangalsutra part and her fear for losing her husband!
i could see the difficulty the remaining team had in hiding it from Riya...could feel their helplessness and misery! Lives of cops and army people and their families are real tough! a fear of death or something untoward happening lingers around their lives...you have portrayed it brilliantly!

Now Riya knows that Arjun is missing...i hope she is brave and faces it! and also pls bring Arjun back soon!

cont soon!

Thanks Vidya.. And well said! 👍🏼 Though their fear may not be as dramatised as it is portrayed on the screen, their lives indeed are very difficult. Living in constant fear of losing someone, must be really painful!

Yes, well, like our super-cop says 'Aurat ki kabiliyat par kabhi shaq nahi karna chahiye..' 😉 And esp when the woman in concern is a certain Mrs. Rawte! 😉😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: lola123
Woww loved it...very emotional one...
Aww.. poor Arjun...his struggle just for his wife...
Really loved it...plz update soon...poori kardena meri adhoori si dua😉😆

Lol.. Oye hoye.. Of course karenge, darling.. 😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: sunshine94
u r writing after so long n cliffhanger yet again😈,.,.,.tu nahi sudregi😡

but but but,,,,.update as usual in chotu's words dhasu,.,.,.,.,.,.,.👏

thanks for writing👍🏼

Le! If you thought that was a cliffhanger, toh phir toh iss Chapter ke baad pakka joote padenge.. Thanks dear.. 😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
You know what ??? You are a mistress when it comes to cliff hangers :(

Ahaa.. taana shaana, huh??!! 😕😉😆

But the update was completely worth waiting ... :)
I actually had tears in my eyes when I read the way Arjun was struggling to meet riya ... :'(
N Riya's concern was emoted really beautifully :)
Poor Riya ... Her worst nightmares are actually turning true :(
Ok now plz dont let us wait for tooo long :)

Thanks dear.. Read on.. More stuff coming up..

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: tani23
OMG u updated it finally...as soon as i saw a notification for ASD i ran in to read d chapter
🤗 for u ...n MERRY CHRISTMAS😛

I Loved Loved Loved D chapter

Liked d tensions n concern for Arjun on rathore's Shree's n chotu's face

Ria Worried for arjun😔

n Now She knows dat he has gone Missing😭

Waiting for More Chapters ...

PS: i m sad thinking dat d amazing story will end 😔

Hey Purva.. I was esp awaiting your comment since you love this one!! 😃😳 Thanks.. More stuff coming up! And nah! Don't you be sad.. I have something bigger planned after this.. 😉😃

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597593

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Le! If you thought that was a cliffhanger, toh phir toh iss Chapter ke baad pakka joote padenge.. Thanks dear.. 😃

oh no again clifff hanger...😕

kkk...me waitin

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Chapter 7

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597593

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Posted: 11 years ago

#270

tum kya! mein bhi visualize kar rahi thi,.,.,.,.,.😲

tuje tho cliffhanger guru kehna correct hoga.,,...😡

o.k let me guess,,,,,,,,,,,,,,choodo😉...i wont spoil the suspense

regarding update,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.🤗

likd riya coming back to join her team.,👍🏼

most fab part was rathore mann ki baat,.,.,.,.,.,.,.regarding mia biwi😆

luvd shree n chotu's concern for riya,,,,,,,,,,,,,☺️

Edited by sunshine94 - 11 years ago

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