avantika :
honestly i dont know how to praise enough your SS. when i was reading the first update, it took me a bit time to register the fact that arjun and riya are actually man and wife in your story and that riya's ill-health and throwing ups are all indicating to her pregnancy. and as to her crankiness and sudden mood swings .. well, i know what amount of patience is needed to handle that coz i am going to be a " maasi " soon myself๐.
and then came the best parts ..loved the way you have penned down riya's fears and apprehension as a wife and would-be-mother as ETF was asked to take up the risky and complicated case by the ministry, the " fresh round of entertainment " in ETF office and the Ariya scenes back at home. but the last part had left me really worried .. i mean, why do ACP Arjun Raute have to be so reckless all the time ? why do he have to go off on his own everytime ? coz i'm sure that if he has gone missing ..then it's definitely coz he went off doing something of his own without informing his team as usual. kab sudhrega yeh ? i'm actually feeling terrible for the entire team now, specially when riya too knows the truth. waiting to see what she does.
ps : i wont mind seeing " ACP Arjun Raute in danger " kind of episode in the future. but till then, this suspense and tension needs to be taken care of. so update soon.๐
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