SwaRon SS :"Your wish..my command" last part-pg 13 - Page 2

You conveyed both their emotions beautifully !! Swayam's hurt and Sharon's frustration, then guilt !! It was all so perfect !! And it was awesome to read all of Swayam's famous lines !! Can't wait for you to update the next chapter !!

Nice start. And Swayam's dialogues added charm to the SS. I really hope Sharon doesn't say the same things to Swayam in the show😳

Hey Dips ...thanx for taking us down memory lane with all the memorable landmarks of teh SwaRon fairytale...u r mindblowing with the emotions...u hav written brilliantly and each sentiment u have expressed and everything u hav written from Sharon's POV makes us relate to her and echoes what SwaRon actually means and matters to us...right now I dont even hav the patience to wait for teh next part...pls pls update soon...     

nice SS...an emotional...most beautiful quality of swaron...this is wat i want to see...no no not the accident of swayam...i want to see swayam react or question Sharon so that she will get to know howz his condition...plzz do PM me...

amazing concept
Sharon sontimes beconed quite harsh
Old dialogues flashed swaron's journey in my mind
Do continue soonEdited by D3rockssss - 11 years ago

amazing start👏 all old dialogue takes me to beautiful flashback journey😃 sharon shouldn't have said that but she realize it & feeling guilty😭 u penned down their emotions very beautifully

Awesome start,update next part soon

Great job!

AWESUM START . . . EAGERLY WAITING FR D NXT PART. . . NXT TYM PM ME PLZ😊

"Your wish my command" how can we forget... Always Sharon's wish is swayam's command..
back to topic... SwaRon SS was really nice... i liked it 😊 Keep updating and do Pm me 😛