'Tu Meri Zindagi Hai''- SS- Part 9 pg 35(13/08)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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" aapse naraaz houngi toh meri saansein hi atak jayengi"

Reminding these words of her, everything faded, and Faith passed out, not knowing that the next time I'd wake up, I'd be in a whole other world. Saansein jaisi ruki jaa rahi thi... Dil yeh maan-ne ko tyaar hi nahin tha ki woh Mujhe chod ke chali gayi...I was feeling like I m no more..Its just my body with open eyes waiting to see her again..



i know u are thinking that something is incompleted...Yes u are right... Par dheere dheere sab pata chal jayega...its just a begining.. I will post 1st part later... let me know who is interested in reading and if i should continue..Please leave your comments or hit the LIKE tab. They would really mean a lot to me..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it! ๐Ÿ‘
very interesting! Can't wait to read part 1!
Please do continue soon! will be waiting ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Just one question who is your SS based on?๐Ÿ˜ณ

Tina

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow its a great start loved it so catchy please do continue and pm me cuz I'm really interested in this thanx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: virenjeevika

I loved it! ๐Ÿ‘
very interesting! Can't wait to read part 1!
Please do continue soon! will be waiting ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Just one question who is your SS based on?๐Ÿ˜ณ

Tina



i want to telll buttt saari story ka maza khrab ho jayega... wait and watch i mean read ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the prolgue/storyline towards your short story.. Do PM me when you update the first part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neha.K.



i want to telll buttt saari story ka maza khrab ho jayega... wait and watch i mean read ๐Ÿ˜†



ohhh suspense! i lyk ๐Ÿ˜†!
when you updating part 1?


Tina

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: virenjeevika



ohhh suspense! i lyk ๐Ÿ˜†!
when you updating part 1?


Tina

very soon.. abhi toh going to catch some sleep.. its 1am

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Posted: 13 years ago
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If dis is a Virman ss... Then Pm me when u update...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Can't wait to read part 1 !
Interesting concept...!
Update soon :D x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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brilliant start Neha,, ๐Ÿ‘

very inquisitive ๐Ÿ˜‰
thanks for the PM๐Ÿ˜›

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