'Tu Meri Zindagi Hai''- SS- Part 9 pg 35(13/08)

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Sunita

@avni_19

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

amaziinggg...JeeMan convo. took me into anothr world..just felt ki me and di were talking...

well, if the next update is the last part, plss do include some Virika n Virman romance scenes..make it a beautiful ending... :)

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IPKKND_Pyaar

@IPKKND_Pyaar

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Excellent update..

Mannu's surprise was awesome...

Loved the jeeman bonding..

Thanks for the pm..

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Sarah Ashraf

@aa_mnhs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

The dialogues are always so heart touching. You write beautifully. Hope the next update is soon and not the last one.
Love
Sarah

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vin0211

@vin0211

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

wow loved it👏

thanks for the pm dear

continue soon😃

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

omg the way u expressed maanvi's feeling it was so touching how much she loves her di she is so selfless and jeevika she loves her like her own kid that was really very aussum literally it was very touching

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NinaArief

@NinaArief

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

wow neha i dont see why you were uneasy to post this update its really nice, your dialogues are so well character oriented!! i mean ek toh hindi dialogues its hard for anybody to write as well as you do. brilliant!!

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preetivr

@preetivr

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

they are the mutual source of support and understanding for eachother. kabh kabhi toh bhool jane pe majboor ho jate hain ki kon badi aur kon choti.

the creativity wit the diyas . hats off for that.

my fav part

Aap mujhse bohat pyar karti ho..koi problem nahin, karti raho, kisi ko bhi koi problem nahin..par jo aapse karta hai use toh aise feel na hone do ki uska pyar kuch nahin jo woh aapse karta hai...aur aapka pyar zyada bada hai jo aap kisi se karte ho

you made me cry again.

Edited by preetivr - 13 years ago